LE Tournament #1 SEMI-FINALS - Disciplined InSight versus sniperk
Options
raw-material_ahh
Members Posts: 555 ✭
Disciplined InSight versus sniperk
- Check in by Thursday, February 3, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
- You can drop your verses before the check in due date.
- Verses are due by Monday, February 7, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
- Voting will end on Wednesday, February 9, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
5 votes first wins or most votes by the end date.
3 votes to 0 is a KO.
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
Legend24 & esco soprano cannot vote in this battle BC they will face the winner.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING.
Take criticism like a man or a lady. Everyone has their own opinion. Use the Predictions/? Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread. Lastly, caught biting will disqualify you. Good luck.
Comments
-
Check.............................
-
Got a message from sniperk 5 days ago. Basically, this is what it said:sniperk wrote:hey man... I just found out that I have to fly out to the Middle East tomorrow (Fri.28th) I really want to stay in this freestyle battle but I'm not sure what my internet access is going to be like because of where I'm going to. However, I know by next Sun.(Feb 6th) I'll be somewhere near a major city centre so I should be able to send a verse no problem.
I'm not trying to be vague but, for obvious reasons, I can't really get into too many details about my assignment.
Can you make whoever I battle in the next round wait until Sunday (Feb. 6th) for me to check-in and drop a verse?
So I'm letting this slide as his check in for obvious reasons and letting you know he won't be dropping until he can get to a computer Sunday or Monday. There will be a battle and this gives you a lot of time to make your verse tight. Good luck. -
Check... imma hit everyone with something a bit different given what I've seen in the last week
I call this verse "9 A.M. in Amman, Jordan":
I used to rock Air Jordans before I could afford them
Now I hop airplanes to Jordan, is this how life rewards him?
These feet have walked the desert sands across the Promised Lands
Now its 9 A.M. in Amman, where I can't desert my promise
To trade the profits for the prophets, like Moses and Mohammed
I was called a play-er, I was called a prey-er,
I recall all of these thoughts as I hear the call to pray-er
Reflecting on my life, light reflecting off my dome
Sun refracting off my rifle, son's a million miles from home
In this Middle East confusion is peace just an illusion?
From Cairo to Beirut, all them yutes they wanna shoot
From Algeria to Yemen to Syria them bredren
The revolution has begun and which side do they have me on?
So have your petty IC battles, I'm in a battle with the devil
You have to live a thousand lives to ever reach my level
You have to die a thousand deaths to ever reach my level -
Damn..almost forgot about this.
Bottom line is that...I'm dope you wack no attempt to cope in fact.
You stuck out your neck to hang with the best...just keep that rope intact.
My pen's a heat seeker for hot heads, every word sharp like meat cleavers.
You was a ? ' animal...
...'til I butchered your frame and have you screamin' for P.E.T.A.
You'll regret this, I set this murder scene extreme and wreckless.
Comin' at you like a house fire...with bricked up windows and emergency exits.
So take notes. I break hope easy to wannabe assassins that approach.
'Cause you'll choke down to the wire..basically a garrote to the throat.
I crush skeletal frames so on. Your bone shattering death isn't prolong.
Your under pressure...
...from bending and popping he's strictly Breakin'..like Turbo or Ozone.
So ? ya nonsense I'll dismantle Sniper without conscience.
Sharp blades exercised to the guts...and I'm not talking cuts from crunches.
Sniper left in bloodspots. Recognize the surprise from a slug hot.
He's no criminal...
...yet with bullets to the face you'll think it was a mugshot.
You're strictly amatuer. So in this duel you couldn't cause a scratch.
You was ahead with fire 'til it got stomped...like the end of this match. -
I will vote on this tonight.
-
Two great verses...I gotta go with InSight.
His verse was direct, and an actual battle verse.
Your strictly amatuer. So in this dule you couldn't cause a scratch.
You was ahead wit the fire til it got stomped...like the end of this match -
NICE VERSES BY BOTH RAPPERS....
SNIPERK had a nice post, would have went nice over a beat and track BUT.................................
not in this battle, maybe a topic battle
Disciplined Insight had a hell of a battle verse posted...
VOTE: D. Insight.... -
Sniper's verse would've been cool as a full song or spoken word poetry but this is a battle. B-A-T-T-L-E. Battle don't mean spitting some fly ? to nod your head along with. Battle mean spitting darts and making people go OOOOOOH SHITTT!!!! It's cool that you showed you can step out the box and flow on some conscious type ? but in a battle you gotta knock muthafuckas unconscious...and you didn't do that. Save the Nas ? for another platform. Again, don't get me wrong, the verse was ill but don't switch up and come with something like that when you get this far in a BATTLE.
Discipline's verse was nice and it don't even make sense for me to break it down to analyze because I'm gonna say you won regarless for the simple fact that you actually dropped a BATTLE RAP against a poetry recital.
Vote goes to Discipline -
Check... imma hit everyone with something a bit different given what I've seen in the last week
I call this verse "9 A.M. in Amman, Jordan":
I used to rock Air Jordans before I could afford them
Now I hop airplanes to Jordan, is this how life rewards him?
These feet have walked the desert sands across the Promised Lands
Now its 9 A.M. in Amman, where I can't desert my promise
To trade the profits for the prophets, like Moses and Mohammed
I was called a play-er, I was called a prey-er,
I recall all of these thoughts as I hear the call to pray-er
Reflecting on my life, light reflecting off my dome
Sun refracting off my rifle, son's a million miles from home
In this Middle East confusion is peace just an illusion?
From Cairo to Beirut, all them yutes they wanna shoot
From Algeria to Yemen to Syria them bredren
The revolution has begun and which side do they have me on?
So have your petty IC battles, I'm in a battle with the devil
You have to live a thousand lives to ever reach my level
You have to die a thousand deaths to ever reach my level
i didnt know this is your battle verse.i thought you were just droppin some poetry before the real battle. -
I feel your posts...
my head just wasn't in the game for some "murder murder murder ? ? ? " lyrics this week.
"Save the Nas ? " is GOAT quote about my 16 bars...haha.
And I wasn't lying about being in Jordan:
-
I feel your posts...
my head just wasn't in the game for some "murder murder murder ? ? ? " lyrics this week.
"Save the Nas ? " is GOAT quote about my 16 bars...haha.
And I wasn't lying about being in Jordan:
I feel you...watch yourself over there. -
Disciplined InSight wrote: »I feel you...watch yourself over there.
Yeah...now that's Ill. Makes me think you may be a sniper... Things are really crazy in that part of the world. -
Since I don't know them at all I thought it was a real deep personal verse(this is the first time I feel the need to say no ? ) on some real highly intelectual ?
-
i will vote for d.i. because sniperk had only one line that maybe he was going at d.i. and the rest of his verse wasnt good for a battle
i really dont think i need much more of a breakdown than this
but if yall want me to breakdown d.i. verse i will -
Good to both of y'all though. Good luck sniperk. I'll hit you up when the second tournament starts if you're still down. Peace. Disciplined InSight moves on to the Championship round.
This discussion has been closed.