Deaththreats vs maxseveneight
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deaththreats
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rules: 16 bars, No feeding, No edit once both rhymes have been posted, 50 post to vote, Due date: can drop verse anytime before midnight eastern time
http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?101857-ItzGravitaion-vs-Desolateone(Again-)&p=2011719#post2011719
http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?101857-ItzGravitaion-vs-Desolateone(Again-)&p=2011719#post2011719
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**terminator voice**
"check...check....is this thang on?" -
yo sucka lets do this
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Im back to post again, and post a win, like im supposed to win
this is easy like Rondo checkin' Shaq in the paint..I just post him in (2)
postering him, pass the ax, im bout to push it to the max
push the ax through max and make him pay me to post.......turbo tax (4)
call the fire department, the police or call SOMEBODY cause im killing you
sad but true, it's ironic, how ME.. battling You... is like Jay Z battling Magoo (6)
you can even get Timbaland, Missy, or take out a newspaper ad
I'll still beat you, ya crew, bad, keep the Max drop the seven eight and add ipad (8)
U changed the game up, 1st mentally handicap to rap let me juggle ya name up,
I’ll change the max to one & switch the eight wit the seven....now pick ya brains up (10)
Im in a zone, no 2-3, full of bone crushing body punching
After this battle erbody will give me
, and give your rhymes a 
...thanks for coming (12)
im rude, rhyme ? leave u nude, been hard since that Nintendo game Bad Dude
or Super Tecmo, let the tech blow, and they can hold half of ya skull like a cereal bowl (14)
Oh No, im combustible, u really didn't want me cause im in beast mode
you can sending ya hardest rappers and hardest rhymes and they'll get exposed (16) -
deaththreats wrote: »
Props for posting your check in link. Check your inbox. -
raw-material_ahh wrote: »Props for posting your check in link. Check your inbox.
Preciate it...and I checked my inbox and sent you a message back... -
pay your debts
? you death threats
your rhymes get ate like alphabet soup
you get the boot
call your troops
they get slaughter too
ill call your boo
to let her know your death is coming soon
your a ? mf like doom
wack like master p
test me and you will see
my rhymes attack you
and have you running scared like bumblebees
? your dead style
necrophilia obscene
your skill got ate and passed like beans
make like gene hackman and quit acting
like you got backing
like that model iman im slapping
and salary im capping
i can read your skill like bad wrapping
paper
dont be a hater
check your data
your rhymes are obselete like beta
your out of print
stay bent
keeping u away like your bad breath and im mints
heaven sent
your cobra commander
and i lead the crowd like flint
does gi joe
wicked flow
cats dont know
your rhymes got picked like an afro -
deaththreats wrote: »rules: 16 bars, No feeding, No edit once both rhymes have been posted, 50 post to vote, Due date: can drop verse anytime before midnight eastern time
http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?101857-ItzGravitaion-vs-Desolateone(Again-)&p=2011719#post2011719
Maxseveneight musta thought I was the government giving extensions, but im going to extend it for his post cause I don't want a forfeit win -
Good verse....creativty on Nintendo and Super Tecmo...good versedeaththreats wrote: »Im back to post again, and post a win, like im supposed to win
this is easy like Rondo checkin' Shaq in the paint..I just post him in (2)
The intro was good Celtic line was nice..
postering him, pass the ax, im bout to push it to the max
push the ax through max and make him pay me to post.......turbo tax (4)
Good multies, nice flow...turbo tax..lol
call the fire department, the police or call SOMEBODY cause im killing you
sad but true, it's ironic, how ME.. battling You... is like Jay Z battling Magoo (6)
you can even get Timbaland, Missy, or take out a newspaper ad
Nice visual, haven't heard Magoo rap for awile, Jay-Z battling Magoo that's something good line lol
I'll still beat you, ya crew, bad, keep the Max drop the seven eight and add ipad (8)
U changed the game up, 1st mentally handicap to rap let me juggle ya name up,
I’ll change the max to one & switch the eight wit the seven....now pick ya brains up (10)
Im in a zone, no 2-3, full of bone crushing body punching
Good personals
After this battle erbody will give me, and give your rhymes a ...thanks for coming (12)
im rude, rhyme ? leave u nude, been hard since that Nintendo game Bad Dude
or Super Tecmo, let the tech blow, and they can hold half of ya skull like a cereal bowl (14)
Oh No, im combustible, u really didn't want me cause im in beast mode
you can sending ya hardest rappers and hardest rhymes and they'll get exposed (16)
Good verse structure, good flow, good creativty, and good concepts-8.5 -
maxseveneight wrote: »pay your debts
? you death threats
your rhymes get ate like alphabet soup
you get the boot
Good opener
call your troops
they get slaughter too
ill call your boo
Nice line,
to let her know your death is coming soon
your a ? mf like doom
wack like master p
Not fan of Master P...good line
test me and you will see
my rhymes attack you
and have you running scared like bumblebees
? your dead style
necrophilia obscene
Cool line nice vocab...
your skill got ate and passed like beans
make like gene hackman and quit acting
like you got backing
Lol funny line...passed like beans..
like that model iman im slapping
and salary im capping
i can read your skill like bad wrapping
paper
dont be a hater
check your data
your rhymes are obselete like beta
your out of print
stay bent
Good multies....
keeping u away like your bad breath and im mints
heaven sent
your cobra commander
and i lead the crowd like flint
does gi joe
wicked flow
cats dont know
your rhymes got picked like an afro
Nice verse....nice concept creative....structure was better on Deaththreats, your punchlines where okay but Deaththreat was stronger...but Maxseveneight keep doing good....8.0
My vote: Deaththreats -
Preciate you taking the time to vote Love Yal...
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preciate the breakdown love
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Still no votes????...
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maxseveneight's structure is lacking. This was a hard battle to judge. Almost voted a tie until I read it over and I got deaththreats edging it out. His first two lines were the sickest of his verse. Everything after that was alright. maxseveneight had a few okay lines like "your rhymes get ate like alphabet soup" but for the most part, the rest of the verse came off as kind of played. Not to say deaththreats' verse was perfect. There was some filler in there too. Close battle, vote - deaththreats
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Damn..finally anotha vote...good lookin out on taking the time to vote Raw
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deaththreats wrote: »Damn..finally anotha vote...good lookin out on taking the time to vote Raw
You're up 2-0. I need to come up with a way to increase voting. Anyone has an idea, drop me a PM. -
thanks raw
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Still looking for votes...preciate any and every vote from ya'll man
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maxseveneight wrote: »pay your debts
? you death threats
your rhymes get ate like alphabet soup- i like this even though i feel its underdeveloped
you get the boot
call your troops
they get slaughter too
ill call your boo
to let her know your death is coming soon
your a ? mf like doom -i like this be cause its witty to me and concise
wack like master p
test me and you will see
my rhymes attack you
and have you running scared like bumblebees-i like the truth of this and the visual and think its a good punch
? your dead style
necrophilia obscene
your skill got ate and passed like beans
make like gene hackman and quit acting
like you got backing
like that model iman im slapping
and salary im capping
i can read your skill like bad wrapping
paper
dont be a hater
check your data
your rhymes are obselete like beta
your out of print
stay bent
keeping u away like your bad breath and im mints
heaven sent
your cobra commander
and i lead the crowd like flint
does gi joe
wicked flow
cats dont know
your rhymes got picked like an afro
im not sure if this is 16 lines but nobody really complained. this verse i would give a 3.5 because it lacks structure and is full or filler lines that i thank got almost nowhere -
deaththreats wrote: »Im back to post again, and post a win, like im supposed to win
this is easy like Rondo checkin' Shaq in the paint..I just post him in (2)-very good wordplay i really like these two lines
postering him, pass the ax, im bout to push it to the max
push the ax through max and make him pay me to post.......turbo tax (4)alright lines and alright wordplay
call the fire department, the police or call SOMEBODY cause im killing you
sad but true, it's ironic, how ME.. battling You... is like Jay Z battling Magoo (6)weak lines imo
you can even get Timbaland, Missy, or take out a newspaper ad
I'll still beat you, ya crew, bad, keep the Max drop the seven eight and add ipad (8) this line i like alot good name play
U changed the game up, 1st mentally handicap to rap let me juggle ya name up,
I’ll change the max to one & switch the eight wit the seven....now pick ya brains up (10)
Im in a zone, no 2-3, full of bone crushing body punching ^^^^my fav line out this battle- nameplay and punch
After this battle erbody will give me, and give your rhymes a ...thanks for coming (12)
im rude, rhyme ? leave u nude, been hard since that Nintendo game Bad Dude
or Super Tecmo, let the tech blow, and they can hold half of ya skull like a cereal bowl (14)nice visual punch i like this line
Oh No, im combustible, u really didn't want me cause im in beast mode
you can sending ya hardest rappers and hardest rhymes and they'll get exposed (16)
i give this verse a 6 my vote is for deaththreats -
Preciate you for voting desolateone...
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your welcome
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Im' up 3-0, still looking for more votes...preciate ya'll time
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Upping for more votes...
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This battle is coming up on almost a month old too...might need to do vote count and close this thread too..
uppin for any more votes -
My votes for deaththreats.
His bars had more punchlines , more originality , a better flow , and i just thought it went hard.
Max's bars were good though , much respect. but irrelevant side note i personally don't think Mater P is whack. lol.
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