Ayo somebody battle me...
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thedesolateone wrote: »i not givin him the satisfaction of an answer
That answer proves ur a girl -
Blow a couple Ls, eyes lower then a ?
Get your ? wetter then a mother fucken sink
I dont no what to think
cause the last time i ? a ? , the judge ordered me to see a shrink
Pick my prey up at the local skating rink -
b.c.o.dcru wrote: »That answer proves ur a girl
why and even if i was a girl so what -
thedesolateone wrote: »why and even if i was a girl so what
he thinks girls are icky -
eat a couple girls,beautiful shade of pink
make me blow my load like a ? ? tank
i dont know what to drink
last time i approached a ? i acted like a ?
i spit game ? if my breath stank -
thedesolateone wrote: »eat a couple girls,beautiful shade of pink
make me blow my load like a ? ? tank
i dont know what to drink
last time i approached a ? i acted like a ?
i spit game ? if my breath stank
you bit my flow man. why you do that. damn cuz thats ? up......... -
you bit my flow man. why you do that. damn cuz thats ? up.........
sorry
just ? around i thought you where spittin lines from tyler the creator -
thedesolateone wrote: »why and even if i was a girl so what
Jus sounds like the reply of a female...i don't care if ur a dude or a girl. -
b.c.o.dcru wrote: »Jus sounds like the reply of a female...i don't care if ur a dude or a girl.
your gender obsession leads me to wonder if your a male .or have you ever been romantically involved with a male? -
thedesolateone wrote: »your gender obsession leads me to wonder if your a male .or have you ever been romantically involved with a male?
lol . -
thedesolateone wrote: »your gender obsession leads me to wonder if your a male .or have you ever been romantically involved with a male?
Obsession tho? Not only are u lonely but, dilutional. Fukouttahere wit that Internet ? ? . Gone -
thedesolateone wrote: »look under that rock and you will see me
these dope rhymes inject you like mosquitos till you nod
knowing you will never rest against these bars
you just cant do it in the same vein
the things drained!
love yals fate
will be like in the last days of james coltrane
if you wasnt offended then you now are!
hurt as if i touched your gals bra
or are you in awe
and drop your jaw at tim mcgraw?
do you love a ? down?
whats your pronoun?
him her shim sher uh...
with a name like love yal wouldnt be a surprise what your gender was
male or female i will still drag you through the mud
You still the champ
When you hear my flow
No offense, winning is temperory
Neurotic, no worry stop hating
The name, I use it on weak combacks
I'm too good that why you weak ?
Still love yal, lines like miltary ? off
War on like rap revelation, yo lines can't match like Timothy
Introduction you attack the wrong Isaiah, simply you become five face
My lines too fast like wasp, even if you catch one, this isn't my girl
Are you the girl or the boy, what does thedesolateon mean? But good battle verse
like I got more, what's the deal with the summer tournament? and did I get better in my verse? -
You still the champ
When you hear my flow
No offense, winning is temperory
Neurotic, no worry stop hating
The name, I use it on weak combacks
I'm too good that why you weak ?
Still love yal, lines like miltary ? off
War on like rap revelation, yo lines can't match like Timothy
Introduction you attack the wrong Isaiah, simply you become five face
My lines too fast like wasp, even if you catch one, this isn't my girl
Are you the girl or the boy, what does thedesolateon mean? But good battle verse
like I got more, what's the deal with the summer tournament? and did I get better in my verse?
i been watchin your verses and you definitely got better
but some verses you rhyme better than others
i think you got to just work on being clearer so others can understand what you're saying
you still sound like a foreigner
you need more practice with your english sentence structure and grammar
your a hardworker ,keep it up and study more
i suggest you focus on the verses you have already posted and tryin to improve them over and over till you hit the ceiling
i will be in the tournament most likely to win again so it will be difficult to discredit me
i hope their is an increase in voting in the summer tournament -
thedesolateone wrote: »look under that rock and you will see me
these dope rhymes inject you like mosquitos till you nod
knowing you will never rest against these bars
you just cant do it in the same vein
the things drained!
love yals fate
will be like in the last days of james coltrane
if you wasnt offended then you now are!
hurt as if i touched your gals bra
or are you in awe
and drop your jaw at tim mcgraw?
do you love a ? down?
whats your pronoun?
him her shim sher uh...
with a name like love yal wouldnt be a surprise what your gender was
male or female i will still drag you through the mud
You still the champ
When you hear my flow
No offense, winning is temperory
Neurotic, no worry stop hating
The name, I use it on weak combacks
I'm too good that why you weak ?
Still love yal, lines like miltary ? off
War on like rap revelation, yo lines can't match like Timothy
Introduction you attack the wrong Isaiah, simply you become five face
My lines too fast like wasp, even if you catch one, this isn't my girl
Are you the girl or the boy, what does thedesolateon mean? But good battle verse
like I got more, what's the deal with the summer tourment and did I get better in my verse? -
b.c.o.dcru wrote: »Obsession tho? Not only are u lonely but, dilutional. Fukouttahere wit that Internet ? ? . Gone
i see you evaded my question/s ? you sound closeted.i am willin to bet you have ? porn on your hard drive.here are some more questions you probably wont answer:how old are you?at what age did you discover you was ? if in fact you are ? ?why do you say i am lonely.did you read your comments?and your sayin i am lonely.i hope thats was not a come on because i dont go that way sorry. nobody can comfort me like my rhymes.lol
what do you have against ? anyway?are you one of them self-hatin ? ?are you religious?
first the discussion was if i am a male or female now its internet ? ? ?wonder where your headed with this?
i am gonna stay tuned.
*plays pateintly waiting by 50 cent* -
thedesolateone wrote: »i been watchin your verses and you definitely got better
but some verses you rhyme better than others
i think you got to just work on being clearer so others can understand what you're saying
you still sound like a foreigner
you need more practice with your english sentence structure and grammar
your a hardworker ,keep it up and study more
i suggest you focus on the verses you have already posted and tryin to improve them over and over till you hit the ceiling
Thanks, I'ma keep working on my english, hopely I can sound better than a twelve grader..lol
My main focus like you said sound more clear, more sense, and better grammer...thanks again I'm keep working my verse
Rhymes and punchlines are my favorite...how about you? -
Thanks, I'ma keep working on my english, hopely I can sound better than a twelve grader..lol
My main focus like you said sound more clear, more sense, and better grammer...thanks again I'm keep working my verse
Rhymes and punchlines are my favorite...how about you?
im workin on my rhyme schemes,internal rhymes and four and five syllable rhymes
and studyin url and grindtime battles on youtube and also famous rap battles like remy ma and lady luck
i am working hard to develop lines that are multi-syllabic and punchlines simultaneously without sounding forced or predictable
also i am studying rappers weaknesses -
Damn left this ? slide for a minute, seen too many gimmicks,
bunch of popeyes without the spinach, damn the kings back in this, time for sparks to fly
i carved these guys, now he on some butterfly ? / soft like big ? bout to run a train on this broad,
im kosher like a synague song, war to the day you gone, my robes fine italion silks and gold
my mode, grip from snow ? give up the kitty, i ? on road, flip the script and hold, 38 calico blow the city
my money fithy, move weight through states like a gypsy, plus im too pretty
these ? is jokes, your bicycle sick only thing you peddled thats dope, you man hoe
i got a tangerine colored lambo, a light tanned viper like randall
to cold to know, to hot to let go, im the champ, MK47 when i stamp, i got rank
wall street stocks, to get bank ! -
you soft your skin is pastry
you said it your self that you blow the city
give everyone dome
get back in the closet with you ? fashion sense
italian silks and fools gold
you imagine dream cars you'll never own
get your bars up cant ? with my poems
you throw like a girl ? shouldnt hurl stones
just gonna get you bashed and left with broke bones
wall street stocks ha! so ambitious now you dow jones
i wouldn't envy you even if you rhymes werent so obviously fictitious -
thedesolateone wrote: »you soft your skin is pastry
you said it your self that you blow the city
give everyone dome
get back in the closet with you ? fashion sense
italian silks and fools gold
you imagine dream cars you'll never own
get your bars up cant ? with my poems
you throw like a girl ? shouldnt hurl stones
just gonna get you bashed and left with broke bones
wall street stocks ha! so ambitious now you dow jones
i wouldn't envy you even if you rhymes werent so obviously fictitious
thats ill, im out for now but imma be back to bash you mr.butterfly ! -
thedesolateone wrote: »i see you evaded my question/s ? you sound closeted.i am willin to bet you have ? porn on your hard drive.here are some more questions you probably wont answer:how old are you?at what age did you discover you was ? if in fact you are ? ?why do you say i am lonely.did you read your comments?and your sayin i am lonely.i hope thats was not a come on because i dont go that way sorry. nobody can comfort me like my rhymes.lol
what do you have against ? anyway?are you one of them self-hatin ? ?are you religious?
first the discussion was if i am a male or female now its internet ? ? ?wonder where your headed with this?
i am gonna stay tuned.
*plays pateintly waiting by 50 cent*
^allll that....internet ? ? . To tell the thruth you talk like a female. If you know the meaning of the name u chose u would get the lonely comment, and to end it off ur just dumb. The question was are YOU and male or female? I just made the assumption ur a female based off ur reply to the question.
Now u wanna make me the target of questioning....neat trick but, ur just dumb off that do you tho. If u wanna battle we can do that cause going back and forth is for...you get what I'm sayin. -
b.c.o.dcru wrote: »^allll that....internet ? ? . To tell the thruth you talk like a female. If you know the meaning of the name u chose u would get the lonely comment, and to end it off ur just dumb. The question was are YOU and male or female? I just made the assumption ur a female based off ur reply to the question.
Now u wanna make me the target of questioning....neat trick but, ur just dumb off that do you tho. If u wanna battle we can do that cause going back and forth is for...you get what I'm sayin.
set up the thread and rules -
one two, we aint on what the desolate ones do,
we come through with noise, we aint scared of dem boys
let the sirens ring, we cover e'thing wit the scuba divers find the corpse when we win
game finito, bout that papaya extract from puerto rico, the game thang, you don chi chi man butterfly screens
we let the 9 milli metre, torch kings / even if you aint man enough to claim it
i'll say it, 2 glock gats to laminate it
my aim is, I.C champ battle record famous, couldnt even switch to some cartoon chat
but i'd rather your face on that milk carton fast, you carlton banks, im big willie style got fresh prince stacks
so put that ? on mute bruh, i distribute them keys like computers / the hard ? from favella villas
go back to being a caterpillar, the team serve herses on 4 wheelers
im more realer ! -
if your aim is ic battle record famous
your gonna need more training
your behind like caveman
those punches you wailin
have you surrounded by ominous ravens
the aura of daemons
leave you shook like an 8.7
or three jasons
cause you a little fruity like craisins
my flow alone leave you lost in the caymans
i put that work in
i punch that mic around
while you tryna get fresh at niketown
i set hours aside
i put that pen game down
while you make drug deals on the other side of town
your bars aint mature yet
they underages
pretendin you money makin
when you sit around makin funny faces -
thedesolateone is killing em' lol.
