Love Yal vs. iMpIoDez
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Verse Due by Wendesday
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3-0 k.o
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Check in by Satuarday
Verse Due by Wendesday
20 post to vote
3-0 k.o
5 votes to win
Explain votes
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Check in and good luck!
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welfare checks, good luck!
EDIT: Yo, can I drop first? I'm probably gonna be done by tomorrow -
cant wait to vote on this one!
i will try to be more detailed this time -
Yo this is my first battle, so excuse the extra 2 lines please...
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, right?
Wrong, you’re just a ? in a thong, a born ?
Like, you a dog that may bite but I’m deadlier than a great white
I’ll muzzle your bark after dark, pop you with the 9
Watch the cannon spark to pastime like what kids find on the 4th at the park
But see this isn’t about amusement
I’m strapped with a license to ? , so you know that I’ma use it
Resistance is foolish, aimed at lips, the tool spit
Demanded everything he had ? turned ‘to a nudist (pause)
Okay, Let that ? marinate…now you lookin salty like a ? caught starin’ late
dryer than a barren lake, homie being thirsty
Buddy sweatin’ cuz I’m bearin’ weight, inside he screaming “MERCY!!”
Confused ? cant scare this fate
lookin’ mean n’ worried left him demeaned n’ buried, I won’t hesitate
to spit heat for days like beat-ing sunrays
No talkin it out, these guns blaze several ways
? You real as hetero ? , Duckin’ incredible strays
that tag marks like criminal game...in short I'm killin you, lame -
Nothing seriously, line count should match, its a new style, but good luck.
You no Eminem but raps get laughed like Lettermen
Get booed like 106 & park, no good like expired tuna
Relfection yo verse feel the ricochet, poetry played out like 1492
You too young to handle ammunition, go play G.I Joes
Special forces, dissmissed yo beliefs, try a new religon
Blast off like contra and Duke Nukem, stomp you like army in fatigues
You can rhyme but you mumble to hard, check yo you tube
Also look like the next Redrat met the Predator, you ? Gremlin
Hater like who can't ride a skateboard, you no Tony Hawks
Get boxed up like Game over, you not cool like Paid in full
Razor sharp lookin like Tom Clancy you sound like broken down Buju Banton
Get smoked like yo avi, but worser than Cali haze mixed that Blueburryin
Casket broken, all you hear sword sound efx, Roca fella you won't get signed
Hot 97 run you over Hummer 12, Kanye west Dmx, you no Ruff Ryder'n
IMpIoDez remind me of ipod and Bi like he Do both Jay and Jane..
No fusillade, police fundamental, no Dipset, yo lines are like a Funny bone
Fusion you wannabe Lil Wayne mixed Wordworth, iMpIoDez match like forehand, you destroyed Tank! -
yo son is ? gon vote or wut?
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Uppin for votes, pretty please!
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I'm going to vote on this be the end of tonight. Have to drop my verse in my battle first though.
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votes.....
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IDK what to think of love yal's verse. It was decent. The first two lines were his best and I felt he may have rushed the rest of his verse. iMpIoDez seemed a bit more focused and went for the ? . Some of his multis were sick and made more sense. I liked the marinate/starin’ late/barren lake lines. Those put him over the edge to get my vote. Vote - iMpIoDez
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i enjoyed reading this battle. i thought love yal didn't have no ammo at all!, shoulda kept it solid and went in for the gusto.. the other battler, his verse was well thought out, and went in with his punches..and becauase his punches hit more Im gonna go with iMpIodez
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i rate this verse a 5Yo this is my first battle, so excuse the extra 2 lines please...
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, right?
Wrong, you’re just a ? in a thong, a born ? -i dont get the punch but good multi and internal slant rhyme plus a nice attack still
Like, you a dog that may bite but I’m deadlier than a great white
I’ll muzzle your bark after dark, pop you with the 9
Watch the cannon spark to pastime like what kids find on the 4th at the park-nice attack in these bars but not that original
But see this isn’t about amusement
I’m strapped with a license to ? , so you know that I’ma use it-meh
Resistance is foolish, aimed at lips, the tool spit-i like the imagery here
Demanded everything he had ? turned ‘to a nudist (pause)-this line is dope, meaning very strong line
Okay, Let that ? marinate…now you lookin salty like a ? caught starin’ late-nice original line with marinate/salty and starin late strong attack
dryer than a barren lake, homie being thirsty-this is dope and original to me and i love the rhymin and structured multis
Buddy sweatin’ cuz I’m bearin’ weight, inside he screaming “MERCY!!”this is dope with the continued multi and doublin up on the rhymin plus good attack
Confused ? cant scare this fate
lookin’ mean n’ worried left him demeaned n’ buried, I won’t hesitate-good continued multis but soft attack still nice line though
to spit heat for days like beat-ing sunrays
No talkin it out, these guns blaze several ways-this couplet sounds like only a boast a waste of space in a battle imo
? You real as hetero ? , Duckin’ incredible strays-dont understand this last couplet but excellent rhymin and i like the real as hetero ? part for some reason
that tag marks like criminal game...in short I'm killin you, lame
fav lines:8,9,10,11,12 -
you destroyed tank! is alright and continues the army imagery but i dont get the rest of this line eitherNothing seriously, line count should match, its a new style, but good luck.
You no Eminem but raps get laughed like Lettermen-strong opener
Get booed like 106 & park, no good like expired tuna-nice attack was expectin a rhyme but its ok in my book cause the similes were simple but funny to me
Relfection yo verse feel the ricochet, poetry played out like 1492-i dont get the first half of this line but the second half has potential but no that strong
You too young to handle ammunition, go play G.I Joes-i like this line nice attack
Special forces, dissmissed yo beliefs, try a new religon-good attack
Blast off like contra and Duke Nukem, stomp you like army in fatigues-nice continued army imagery
You can rhyme but you mumble to hard, check yo you tube-good personal
Also look like the next Redrat met the Predator, you ? Gremlin-good disses but where are the rhymes?
Hater like who can't ride a skateboard, you no Tony Hawks-i dont get it but atleast it is an attack
Get boxed up like Game over, you not cool like Paid in full-good disses but could be more creative
Razor sharp lookin like Tom Clancy you sound like broken down Buju Banton
Get smoked like yo avi, but worser than Cali haze mixed that Blueburryin
Casket broken, all you hear sword sound efx, Roca fella you won't get signed- all you hear is sword sound efx has original and sayin he wont get signed is a good personal
reallyHot 97 run you over Hummer 12, Kanye west Dmx, you no Ruff Ryder'n-just sounds like your droppin words
IMpIoDez remind me of ipod and Bi like he Do both Jay and Jane..-i dont get it
No fusillade, police fundamental, no Dipset, yo lines are like a Funny bone-your lines are like a funny bone is strait but i dont understand the rest of this line
Fusion you wannabe Lil Wayne mixed Wordworth, iMpIoDez match like forehand, you destroyed Tank!
i rate this verse a 3/10
fav lines:1,2,4,7,10,and the ending of 16
but didnt rhyme much if at all
my vote is for impiodez -
This was a good match iMpIoDez!.....everybody thanks for voting!
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yeah ? is buggin' giving me a 5 tho but aye I gotta respect the opinion, good match indeed
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