Writer's Block

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Tupacfan
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edited June 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
I'm sick of this writers block,
feels like I'm trapped in a prison with my soul on lock,
my creativity came to a stop,
I woke up one day and this ? came to a halt
It isn't even poetry's fault.
the mind scattered like pieces of glass shattered
don't know what the matter is,
the things that once mattered don't even matter.
constant remissions have me screaming ? you Adam and Jesus
your ransom of forgivingness is all ? based on Gods business
Dr.s talmbout keep up with your fitness,
I'm like ? you! my goodness!
like a lost child I ran into a empty church beginning for the lord's forgiveness
be my savior and I'll be that Jehovah's witness
on bended knee pleading with no relentless....




I'm just venting ya'll... on that writers block that be ? with my creativity flow, ? with my face glow, making the mind go slow- mo!
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  • goldenja
    goldenja Members Posts: 6,351 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    I'm sick of this writers block,
    feels like I'm trapped in a prison with my soul on lock,
    my creativity came to a stop,
    I woke up one day and this ? came to a halt
    It isn't even poetry's fault.
    the mind scattered like pieces of glass shattered
    don't know what the matter is,
    the things that once mattered don't even matter.
    constant remissions have me screaming ? you Adam and Jesus
    your ransom of forgivingness is all ? based on Gods business
    Dr.s talmbout keep up with your fitness,
    I'm like ? you! my goodness!
    like a lost child I ran into a empty church beginning for the lord's forgiveness
    be my savior and I'll be that Jehovah's witness
    on bended knee pleading with no relentless....




    I'm just venting ya'll... on that writers block that be ? with my creativity flow, ? with my face glow, making the mind go slow- mo!


    good ? .. yeah writers block is a ? ;)
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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited June 2011
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    goldenja wrote: »
    good ? .. yeah writers block is a ? ;)

    thanks g, i'm barely getting off that.. have been writing a bunch lately..
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  • RuffDraft
    RuffDraft Members, Writer Posts: 4,753 ✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
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    Lol nice piece. I like the bit where you question ? .
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  • Tupacfan
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    edited June 2011
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    RuffDraft wrote: »
    Lol nice piece. I like the bit where you question ? .

    lol, ahhh, writers block be having me coming up with wicked thoughts hahaha..
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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited June 2011
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    Young-Ice wrote: »
    If you have writers block its best to put down the pen, and come back later

    You just dont have anything to say. go out and live life, play tennis, try new food, come back with new experience and wisdom and try it again

    my music teacher used to always tell me this.






    anyways, good poem. Like the similes. and its something everyone can relate too. Great job :)


    Thank you for the tips i already know lol.. i always try to do that.. and sometimes I'm afraid when I go on a hiatus, I will never touch poetry again, so I try and stay consistent.. but with constant bs, I always have something to write about lol..

    and thank you for commenting, i actually enjoyed venting on this piece..
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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
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    Damn... It is crazy how I spoke that 2nd line into existence. Uggg!

    I got some new ? tho!!! Lol
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  • emaculate
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    This was a great read. Very deep to me. Thank you for sharing. Actually very inspiring to me as well.
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  • Tupacfan
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    emaculate wrote: »
    This was a great read. Very deep to me. Thank you for sharing. Actually very inspiring to me as well.

    Thanks emaculate :)
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