Everyone Wants Ears but wont Lend them. Critic Thread. Drop Ya Links. FEEDBACK THREAD
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boss jay
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I see all the treads have no reples but have a lot of links. Hypocritical if you ask me...Anyway Im hear to hear some new music since I finished my project up n is coming to website near you THIS SUMMER. I have da time to check out the unsigned and up and coming artist. Drop ya links If u want listens and thorough feedback.
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Sooooooooo no one wants listens?
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You can check this out, a good friend of mine and he's always open to hearing what people think.
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"Pretty Boy Rock" by Richie Payso. He's a new rapper out of Toronto
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trethousandgt wrote: »
I like both of these songs, homie nice wit it....only advice I could give is put a lil more emotion in it and make sure the delivery stays on point the whole song and he'll be A1. I wouldn't mind hearing more from him. -
Im not really a fan of the pretty boy movement...I still checked it out tho, and I wasn't disappointed. I actually ? wit it...Smell Like Sticky/ Dont Even Smoke but Itz Da ? daz wit me/ Delivery is nice, punches are decent...Keep Doin It fam
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Imma start listening to things people post, I joined today so I can hear more new talent. Peep me til then tho: www.hotnewhiphop.com/IamMrBloom
I think 'Pray' and 'Gamble Til You Win' have my dopest verses there. -
Pretty Boy Rock was cool....some nice lines in there. I ain't the pretty boy type tho, so eh. Nice flow tho
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CallMeBloom wrote: »Imma start listening to things people post, I joined today so I can hear more new talent. Peep me til then tho: www.hotnewhiphop.com/IamMrBloom
I think 'Pray' and 'Gamble Til You Win' have my dopest verses there.
I checked out Gamble Til you Win first, I like the direction of the song, I like the message, only beef (if u wanna call it dat, it would be an overstatement) I had with the song was the delivery, it sounded as if you were reading trying to find the flow on the beat. But that comes with expeirience...keep working and you'll be there
I also put my ear on Pray I like this one better than Gamble, but once again the delivery was a little off, I would suggest after you write the song, rap it over and over and over and over until its memorized and it will naturally speed your word flow up...U got potential though, keep at it fam..
How long you been rappin? -
Eh, about a year total. I been doin it on and off since mid 09. I record stuff every few months. Gamble was about 6 months ago....Pray was 5. I'm a little better now though, trying to do more.
Edit: I just noticed, the beat is slightly off on "Gamble"...it makes me come a split second earlier than i actually did. So, I sound...a bit faster than i actually spit it? But regardless, I'm still working on improving my delivery, I think that's my largest problem. It's better elsewhere though. -
I like both of these songs, homie nice wit it....only advice I could give is put a lil more emotion in it and make sure the delivery stays on point the whole song and he'll be A1. I wouldn't mind hearing more from him.
The feedback is much appreciated, I think emotion is definitely something that needs to be worked on. Heres another track
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Its That Boi EnKore with an exclusive track, take a lil bit of this flavor to ya ear for me and gimme some feedback. bet you wont be disapointed
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Io4tBxpqc9A
rhymes stay flame, and songs stay cold.
hit me up Facebook.com/TheyScreamEnkore
btw im older than u think
I like this, would wanna hear you on some original material. Cuz I think if I hear another freestyle on dis track Ima stop listening to the original..lol..You got potential with work and practice. I hear your direction, you got some nice lines, nice flow and delivery. Specially the 3rd verse. let me hear some of the original material also fam. Keep at it. Remember practice and repetition makes perfection -
need feedback please
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2zjHfUpPnLE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=etXvN_dVv1s
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Wo1c5h1IIQ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LF0F76uzPDM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7z3CpCv01zg