34 Double Dream

VSOP
VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
edited July 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
its been a while........I'm on this writers block dolo....

"Butter Knives" on repeat

my computers inhaled as much blunt smoke as I have
breathin
tappin dreams
unprotected intellect
retroflective sex pressed on the black & white keys
blacksoul ? all over white sheets
my bad
I'm Jack
? 's unwanted seed
Lucifer's other personality
I am your best attempt of bravery after a drink
I am a liquid curb pitcher
hittin 4th
drinkin a 5th
meet at the 6th
if you wanna a zip of this pifff
I am 7
andre 3tripledonut's leftover trojan found in the restroom
ridin in the devils' new petro fueled seven-two coupe
I'm right and red and you're left ..and blue?
thought process is Goodie Mob's soul food track number 2
I type truth
unpredictable even after the beat stops
please start back up soon
my heart beats to the beat
my blood jumps everytime the beat drops

never put me in your box cuz that ? eats tape
an angry computer stand has a thang for the color duct grey
Tommy is my mufuckin Boy
you gotta respect that
I am the ?
right hand man
football numbers tatted on
my body's left side is rep flag
respect the dead
dr dre beat headphones on cuz I gotta protect the head
jean grae is layin eggs in my cerebrum
playin Jedi Mind Tricks
wrapped up in Bible papers
my pretty lil dime spliff
if I was you
I'd invest in a crazy man

cuz I am him...

I can't go a day without quotin "one love"'s 1st verse
"I ain't mad at cha"s view of us cursed since birth
"I get around" mindstate tryin to get at girls in church
"10 minutes" 3rd verse playin on my lifes playlist like its Jerz
workin out to "release yo delf" & "itz yourz"
feelin like the pistol in "I gave you power"
hurtin chest
she was perfect
"I used to love her" but it ain't even worth it
I try to fool myself on purpose
I can picture her
walkin up in high heels to the instrumental of "devil in a new dress"
she runs laps around my mind like the track from Cunninlynguists
My brain's self is locked up in a cell
radio hell
I am M1 and Stic Man in the pulpit


yellin
PLEASE


TURN OFF THAT ? !!!!

Comments

  • Azekiel-Horizon
    Azekiel-Horizon Members Posts: 12
    edited July 2011
    Good to see you back and even better to see you that your haven't lost that eccentric style of writing of yours. This piece was crazy, I really enjoyed how you incoporated the title of classic hip hop songs in your word play.It seems like this piece was like a mixture of what you been doing since the last you posted some pieces on here and an ode to hip hop and poetry. Overall this was a great piece. Hope you continue to drop more poetic gems like this one
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2011
    we missed you VSOP!

    well shidd, I know i miss your creativity...

    ? was fiyah, pure dope VSOP!

    The word play is on point, and I like how you implement classic hip hop tracks.. this made it even more ill..

    I feel you on that writers block, just free write.. and hopefully it all come together..

    thanks for visiting and blessing us with your poetic piece..

    Peace.
  • stupot0607
    stupot0607 Members Posts: 1,914 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    Great Piece!! Really Enjoyed it.

    Thanks Man.
  • RuffDraft
    RuffDraft Members, Writer Posts: 4,753 ✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    Great piece and great name drops of ill-artists.

    Props and good to see you back :tu
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited July 2011
    *bows to greatness*

    good to see you back vsop even during the illness of writers block...you still rise victorious with this epic piece...you went in like no other with these sick lines of pure poetry...my fav: ? 's unwanted seed
    Lucifer's other personality
    I am your best attempt of bravery after a drink

    0_0

    bottom line good ? as always...keep droppin the gems that blind foes and backstabbers called poetry my fellow poet

    peace
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited July 2011
    been so long I forgot to come back and check this post lol preciate the love yall, definitely been caught up in life lately-no free time to just be, ya feel me?

    tryin to get back though-good to see everyones still here (even Real P who retires every week lol)
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited July 2011
    VSOP wrote: »
    been so long I forgot to come back and check this post lol preciate the love yall, definitely been caught up in life lately-no free time to just be, ya feel me?

    tryin to get back though-good to see everyones still here (even Real P who retires every week lol)

    loll you got jokes...it keeps calling me man...can't escape it :cool:
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited July 2011
    loll you got jokes...it keeps calling me man...can't escape it :cool:

    Lol I musta had my earphones on cuz I haven't gotten that call in a minute lol
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2011
    digg that VSOP,

    you know you love us lol..

    but yea, im in the same boat.. Just a lot of vexation that I just can't come off that right now..

    keep dropping gem's though...

    peace.