It's Her Part 1 (I Remember You)
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It's Mook!
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Ok, this here is part one of a three part series of joints that basically shows ya'll da highs & lows of my marriage. I've started part two and part three is not soon behind. It all should be done by Friday so critizism is apresheated.
I was a sophomore in high school, already had a girl
Then came a beauty dat would change how I viewed da world
5’2’’ a buck 40 full of lustful grace
Got me like a blind man I’d be happy just to touch her face
Leanin towards da backside, mad nice but not to be
She was my girls friend & dat end was all I got to see
In da months since she was on da back of my mind
An image lost in time hope my way she would find
Now Senior year came, me & o’l girl broke up
But no fuss, dat ? was like escapin da short bus
Adjust my focus, ready to sleep da first day of class
Till someone caught my eye, threw it on a new track
It was my beauty lookin fresher than ever
Black turtleneck sweater, soon my drowsiness got better
I proceed to speak “hey remember me I’m such n’ suches ex
Would like to holla hopin I ain’t rushin nothin yet
Did da lil stuff, walked her to class like secret service
Was still shy, I knew dat she thought damn he gets nervous
But da more we talked she saw who I was
Confronted by dis geeky big kid & didn’t budge
When I was Checkers closer didn’t leave till round 1
She’d call me, our conversations welcomed da sun
I swear to ? it sets over her heavenly horizon
But she has gone beyond just a body to keep your eyes on
I was a sophomore in high school, already had a girl
Then came a beauty dat would change how I viewed da world
5’2’’ a buck 40 full of lustful grace
Got me like a blind man I’d be happy just to touch her face
Leanin towards da backside, mad nice but not to be
She was my girls friend & dat end was all I got to see
In da months since she was on da back of my mind
An image lost in time hope my way she would find
Now Senior year came, me & o’l girl broke up
But no fuss, dat ? was like escapin da short bus
Adjust my focus, ready to sleep da first day of class
Till someone caught my eye, threw it on a new track
It was my beauty lookin fresher than ever
Black turtleneck sweater, soon my drowsiness got better
I proceed to speak “hey remember me I’m such n’ suches ex
Would like to holla hopin I ain’t rushin nothin yet
Did da lil stuff, walked her to class like secret service
Was still shy, I knew dat she thought damn he gets nervous
But da more we talked she saw who I was
Confronted by dis geeky big kid & didn’t budge
When I was Checkers closer didn’t leave till round 1
She’d call me, our conversations welcomed da sun
I swear to ? it sets over her heavenly horizon
But she has gone beyond just a body to keep your eyes on
Comments
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Just curious,
any regrets along the way? -
Honestly no, I mean I was real young when I got married & still very immature. I know da person I was then didn't really give a ? & did whatever. Luckly I got wise & got out of da suroundings I was in so I could be a better man for my fam & myself.
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It's Mook! wrote: »Honestly no, I mean I was real young when I got married & still very immature. I know da person I was then didn't really give a ? & did whatever. Luckly I got wise & got out of da suroundings I was in so I could be a better man for my fam & myself.
good piece
its always good to look back down the road and read what mindstate you were in when you wrote that joint-which i know in the future youll look back and laugh and the memories -
It's Mook! wrote: »Honestly no, I mean I was real young when I got married & still very immature. I know da person I was then didn't really give a ? & did whatever. Luckly I got wise & got out of da suroundings I was in so I could be a better man for my fam & myself.
That's part of life yo! learning lessons. Good to know you change for the better!
BTW I enjoyed reading this piece.
