LE Tournament #3 Round Two - thedesolateone vs. C.Melendez

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raw-material_ahh
raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
edited August 2011 in Lyrical Executions
thedesolateone vs. C.Melendez

LYRICAL EXECUTIONS TOURNAMENT #3

Check in by Saturday, July 30, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Verses are due by Monday, August 1, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Voting will end on Wednesday, August 3, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.

These due dates are final. Beware: 1 minute late will result in a DQ.
Due dates will be extended only when the site goes down.

Please Read The Rules
-Verses must be 16 lines. 15 is not enough. 17 is too much.
-Only 1 round.
-First to 3 votes wins. Only the official voters will count. They are: jamacia, hlf, WallH, sionb55 & Young-Ice
-All votes MUST be explained.
-NO FEEDING! (Feeding is when you let your opponent drop first, then you use their lines against them in your verse; when you flip their lines on them)
-BITING is an instant disqualification. (Biting is when you copy other lyrics in a plagiaristic form.)

Finally, take criticism like a man. Quit trying to vote sway and explain your bars in additional posts. Remember that everyone may not agree with you. Use the Predictions/? Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread.

Good luck.

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  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    Ready ....check us out
  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited August 2011
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    went in last battle Des wondering"how the ? he'll follow this?"
    well im coming harder no ? ...wonder how the ? des will swallow this
    I spit like hollow tips...hot damn indeed
    yeah my eagles fully loaded ...im feeling like Andy Reid
    Desolate shooting himself ...he need some speedy jet help
    Im dealing with this ? , now i know how Rex felt
    i'll use him briefly and on to the next level
    If des dies he dies,oh well on to the next fellow
    the heart of a jin so lethal,got him on pin and needles
    I got lyrical dope for u and my pen's the needle
    nah my pen's more lethal, murder weapon Joe Pesci with it
    my flow never watered down corn liquor no Pepsi in it
    your seven's up man imma crush u forget soda talk
    translation is im pound u your lucks over boss
    you must wrote surged on coke? Still I Vault over and counter u
    Im standing tall over this chump just like a mountain do

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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited August 2011
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    This is disappointing. thedesolateone no-shows. Thanks for posting C.Melendez.
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