Dreams - By Tupacfan

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Tupacfan
Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
edited February 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
So folks, this piece was inpired by another poet shout outs to Prophet, it was written a way's back but never shared it with the masses and yesterday I was going thru some of my material and thought I share this one with ya'll.



Dreams

While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness
Courageous for the unwanted timeless endured
The last I had infer my dreams, was when I thought I was ready to
take my last breath.
I had to wish upon the farthest star
Realizing my dream is to afar from actuality
From all the mortality of humanity due to animosity
Were just another causality of America’s hostility
Where tragedy is another man’s comedy.
Philosophizing why all these children are dying
A conception that I’m still not understanding.

The dream I’m reflecting
Is the opposite of my perspectives.
A world with no affliction but affection
Kids receiving parental attention
The hopeless overcoming life’s exception
And fulfilling expectations.
A place where unity and peace exists
with plenty of food to eat
people shouldn’t have to sleep with empty stomachs.
Less inequality so there’s equality
A place where racism and prejudice is never herd of
Letting justice be laws of morals and principals
However I don’t see that inevitable.

I dream for love, for purpose
And I dream a vandal would chisel me off this earth
Because that for me is death, or because that for me is life
So tell me how should a women live?
A petroglyph on a rock.

That’s one of my many countless dreams
While they remain unfilled
I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
As my dreams don’t come in refills
It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
but waiting for it to be felt
Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.






- 2pacfan

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  • jayy.prime
    jayy.prime Members Posts: 22
    edited April 2010
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    soooo weird..i just dropped one called "a dream" .....strrrangggeee.....lol...but i've always found your pieces very clean and simply...for lack of a better word, beautiful....you have a great talent, you're work is well put together, clean and beautiful to read..(thanks for the props on my joint by the way) bottom line..i love ur work...keep it up miss lady!
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited April 2010
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    WOW @ your "i dream for love, for purpose" line

    you still got it mama-GREAT read

    i always learn new words when i read your joints lol its like listenin to canibus
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited April 2010
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    Aww...Thanks for the wonderful comment Jay! you know it means a lot when you get feed back from other fellow poets and I appreciate your's because your always on point with your material and sub par, always felt and just solid with it too. Yea I notice your topic too! I read it and felt inspired to write one of em jawn's like that lol.




    Aye VSOP,

    It always an honor to have my material with the alikes of canibus, a walking dictionary or thesaurus lol.. That's love yo! preciate that..
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited April 2010
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    tupacfan wrote: »

    Aye VSOP,

    It always an honor to have my material with the alikes of canibus, a walking dictionary or thesaurus lol.. That's love yo! preciate that..

    lol no doubt mama-thats why i like readin everyones pieces on here cuz i learn a new word or idea that i gotta run with
  • callingmachine
    callingmachine Members Posts: 1
    edited April 2010
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    Thank you for sharing your poem, it made my day, and really hope to read some more soon, cheers.
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited April 2010
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    Thank you for sharing your poem, it made my day, and really hope to read some more soon, cheers.



    No, Thank you for reading my poem! Glad I could make your day with this drop.. and keep dropping by, I will have some new material posted in due time. Thanks for reading as well.

    Cheers back to you!
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited December 2010
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    This poem is still relevant for me..



    Choke choke.. My dreams are so afar,
    further than a shining star,
    still bleeding from all my deep scars,
    From fighting many wars,
    that rage further than the deserts of Qu'tar.....

    To be continued.....
  • deaththreats
    deaththreats Members Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    That’s one of my many countless dreams
    While they remain unfilled
    I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
    As my dreams don’t come in refills
    It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
    Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
    Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
    Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
    but waiting for it to be felt
    Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
    But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.

    The WHOLE poem is good, but this is my favorite part..I know this poem is from way back, but after I seen your battles its crazy how you able to write something like this too so I had to post my 2 cents on it...
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited February 2011
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    That’s one of my many countless dreams
    While they remain unfilled
    I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
    As my dreams don’t come in refills
    It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
    Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
    Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
    Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
    but waiting for it to be felt
    Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
    But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.

    The WHOLE poem is good, but this is my favorite part..I know this poem is from way back, but after I seen your battles its crazy how you able to write something like this too so I had to post my 2 cents on it...


    Thanks for dropping in and reading some of my material..

    I'm a poet, not a battler.. But I do dabble with freestyle battles and stuff like that. I have that hate and love relationship with poetry and i feel I needed to take a break for a minute so its why I joined the tourney.. But def do get use to seeing me in future battles over in LE.. Its a new journey and I'm loving it..
  • sweellprioria
    sweellprioria Members Posts: 13
    edited February 2011
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  • MeTaL
    MeTaL Members Posts: 6,553 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    So folks, this piece was inpired by another poet shout outs to Prophet, it was written a way's back but never shared it with the masses and yesterday I was going thru some of my material and thought I share this one with ya'll.



    Dreams

    While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness
    Courageous for the unwanted timeless endured
    The last I had infer my dreams, was when I thought I was ready to
    take my last breath.
    I had to wish upon the farthest star
    Realizing my dream is to afar from actuality
    From all the mortality of humanity due to animosity
    Were just another causality of America’s hostility
    Where tragedy is another man’s comedy.
    Philosophizing why all these children are dying
    A conception that I’m still not understanding.

    The dream I’m reflecting
    Is the opposite of my perspectives.
    A world with no affliction but affection
    Kids receiving parental attention
    The hopeless overcoming life’s exception
    And fulfilling expectations.
    A place where unity and peace exists
    with plenty of food to eat
    people shouldn’t have to sleep with empty stomachs.
    Less inequality so there’s equality
    A place where racism and prejudice is never herd of
    Letting justice be laws of morals and principals
    However I don’t see that inevitable.

    I dream for love, for purpose
    And I dream a vandal would chisel me off this earth
    Because that for me is death, or because that for me is life
    So tell me how should a women live?
    A petroglyph on a rock.

    That’s one of my many countless dreams
    While they remain unfilled
    I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
    As my dreams don’t come in refills
    It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
    Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
    Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
    Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
    but waiting for it to be felt
    Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
    But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.






    - 2pacfan

    Get material I like it, it has a lot of compassion, self projection, thus an informative approach of reality "While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness" That was dope right there. Good stuff.
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited February 2011
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    MeTaL wrote: »
    Get material I like it, it has a lot of compassion, self projection, thus an informative approach of reality "While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness" That was dope right there. Good stuff.

    Aye Metal,

    thanks for taking the time to peep this jawn right here.. and you know that's my favorite line too.. fa real..

    peace..
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
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    I still love this piece to pieces....
  • yahwehprofet
    yahwehprofet Members Posts: 976 ✭✭✭✭
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    Tupacfan wrote: »
    So folks, this piece was inpired by another poet shout outs to Prophet, it was written a way's back but never shared it with the masses and yesterday I was going thru some of my material and thought I share this one with ya'll.



    Dreams

    While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness
    Courageous for the unwanted timeless endured
    The last I had infer my dreams, was when I thought I was ready to
    take my last breath.
    I had to wish upon the farthest star
    Realizing my dream is to afar from actuality
    From all the mortality of humanity due to animosity
    Were just another causality of America’s hostility
    Where tragedy is another man’s comedy.
    Philosophizing why all these children are dying
    A conception that I’m still not understanding.

    The dream I’m reflecting
    Is the opposite of my perspectives.
    A world with no affliction but affection
    Kids receiving parental attention
    The hopeless overcoming life’s exception
    And fulfilling expectations.
    A place where unity and peace exists
    with plenty of food to eat
    people shouldn’t have to sleep with empty stomachs.
    Less inequality so there’s equality
    A place where racism and prejudice is never herd of
    Letting justice be laws of morals and principals
    However I don’t see that inevitable.

    I dream for love, for purpose
    And I dream a vandal would chisel me off this earth
    Because that for me is death, or because that for me is life
    So tell me how should a women live?
    A petroglyph on a rock.

    That’s one of my many countless dreams
    While they remain unfilled
    I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
    As my dreams don’t come in refills
    It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
    Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
    Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
    Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
    but waiting for it to be felt
    Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
    But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.







    - 2pacfan


    By prophet which username.... I'm hoping not Yahweh profet???

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
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    [/quote]


    By prophet which username.... I'm hoping not Yahweh profet???

    [/quote]

    Na, I'm sure its a different poet.
  • FiyahRaps
    FiyahRaps Members Posts: 10
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    Zoom zoom im racing escaping this reality grasping no concept calamity ive fallen cant get up mind altering steps faltering.Chasing a dream i think i fell and missedKiss of death times up no hope left so i turn the page ink stains my hands my hands they itch money green like yo ? when she see meAint got ? to say cant beat me my mouth dont run but my hands they walk so ill walk on her face make her rethink twice bout swinging my waySidetracked i switch lanes back on it cant shake this thang my future calling but i wont answer still got messages from the past i left last present aint left yet so why talk to the future when my present still relevanyI teach a speech of a million words insults unheard of my insides they burn up see why they call me fiyah bc my flow hard and i burn hotter the more i write the harder i fightMy haters they motivate help me create let the words escape a destination unknown but in solice it will find homeIngrained n the membrane forever and alw!
    ays so i treat the beat like a reverend and i praise it giving a voice to the voiceless choice to the choiceles