Colder

CDKey
CDKey Members Posts: 9
edited October 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
As far as I'm concerned, I'm on the right path taken
my flight path amazing, and I rhyme like a vacation
Flow is hot, but you can watch my soul get colder
Welcome to the Winter and you're Napoleon's soldier
Plotting on all of you to freeze, ice up in your arteries
Dandruff feels like snowflakes, the chill is just a part of me
Rhymes feeling older than I am, so I'm bolder
Pulling out the holser, the pen is just an instrument
All other ink is impotent, writing for the simpletons
My ink is for the intellect, bring a vest I been a threat
Lunch trays taken, and I'm wondering if it's dinner yet
Checking out my watch, hands are frozen in their place
Tell me how's it taste, when I squeeze off like it's paste

~I.S.~

Comments

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited September 2011
    "My ink is for the intellect, bring a vest I been a threat"


    That line was my favorite.. I enjoyed reading this peice, your poetic rhymes be on point too!

    thank you for shairng.
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited October 2011
    damn this piece was sick...its on some in and out let the audience pick up their jaw type of ? ...every line made me had the screwface all crazy...bottom line good ? indeed


    keep droppin those lines that cause minds to drool at the thought of poetry my fellow poet


    peace
  • da-great1
    da-great1 Members Posts: 126 ✭✭
    edited October 2011
    Dope piece breh. Rhymes were heavy
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited October 2011
    damn this piece was sick...its on some in and out let the audience pick up their jaw type of ? ...every line made me had the screwface all crazy...bottom line good ? indeed


    keep droppin those lines that cause minds to drool at the thought of poetry my fellow poet


    peace


    I know this jawn hit haaard lol.. glad i wadn't the only one to feel this jawn..