FOR YOUR LOVE by VSOP *written to: ____link is inside-download & listen*
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comments welcome-zoned out to a beat from this underground joint for bout the past hour or so----bump this right here and get on my level
change ? 's to tt's
I had 4 different endings with this cuz I kept gettin off track-yall know me, I'm a glutton for the dramatics and some of em jus came from too far out in left field ya dig? so i tried to choose the least crazy one and fix it up a lil bit
bless
for your love
i've walked down a long, narrow hallway
with middle fingers on both sides pointin right at me
but I dont care
I'm used to the negativity
I wipe it off, fold it down and take it with me
simply statin that united we stand
divided they want u.s.
but in love, I trust
I must
I need
I breathe
hopes of somethin that might actually proceed
I start gettin anxious like I might actually see it
but they don't want us to be no more
jump in between us with a crowbar
tellin you that I am all that you don't want
like they knew somethin
did research on a few of my poems
lost with an empty face
like I'm crazy cuz my mind races at a fast pace of 88 m.p.h.
my thought process
streams through my veins
bleeds like candle wax through my pen as it caresses the page
paper flips like her eyelids skip
her presence is contagious
the words are provocative on those college sheets
sweatin emotions through a forest of departed trees
she rides the pencil
and forces my sanity nude
read my mind through these verses
cuz the she'll be cursin profanities soon
screamin my name
echoes down the long, narrow hallway
the bangin pursued
me & her
then from the walls of the neighbors family room
if you heard
"oh John, Oh John, Oh John, Oh My ? "
over and over again...you'd be mad at me too
hxxp://www.zshare.net/audio/76483512ea337588/
change ? 's to tt's
I had 4 different endings with this cuz I kept gettin off track-yall know me, I'm a glutton for the dramatics and some of em jus came from too far out in left field ya dig? so i tried to choose the least crazy one and fix it up a lil bit
bless
for your love
i've walked down a long, narrow hallway
with middle fingers on both sides pointin right at me
but I dont care
I'm used to the negativity
I wipe it off, fold it down and take it with me
simply statin that united we stand
divided they want u.s.
but in love, I trust
I must
I need
I breathe
hopes of somethin that might actually proceed
I start gettin anxious like I might actually see it
but they don't want us to be no more
jump in between us with a crowbar
tellin you that I am all that you don't want
like they knew somethin
did research on a few of my poems
lost with an empty face
like I'm crazy cuz my mind races at a fast pace of 88 m.p.h.
my thought process
streams through my veins
bleeds like candle wax through my pen as it caresses the page
paper flips like her eyelids skip
her presence is contagious
the words are provocative on those college sheets
sweatin emotions through a forest of departed trees
she rides the pencil
and forces my sanity nude
read my mind through these verses
cuz the she'll be cursin profanities soon
screamin my name
echoes down the long, narrow hallway
the bangin pursued
me & her
then from the walls of the neighbors family room
if you heard
"oh John, Oh John, Oh John, Oh My ? "
over and over again...you'd be mad at me too
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I like this flow, and the beat fits well.. Overall I enjoyed this piece!
great read as usually. Keeep droppin dem heartache jawns LOL.. -
I like this flow, and the beat fits well.. Overall I enjoyed this piece!
great read as usually. Keeep droppin dem heartache jawns LOL..
im in that heartache/heartbreak mode what can i say lol thanks ms pac fan for readin and replyin
that song rides though huh? -
this piece is vintage vsop lol....the whole love/? vibe and the lines were on point...especially towards the end...bottom line good ? as always...keep droppin the lines to make hearts pour ? called poetry my fellow poet
peace -
REAL_POETICAL wrote: »this piece is vintage vsop lol....the whole love/? vibe and the lines were on point...especially towards the end...bottom line good ? as always...keep droppin the lines to make hearts pour ? called poetry my fellow poet
peace
lol all i know homie
you grab that song? you should dig it-its on that summer ridin type feel -
lol all i know homie
you grab that song? you should dig it-its on that summer ridin type feel
i'ma dl it....trying to get my summer mix on and crackin...so i'ma give it a check -
im in that heartache/heartbreak mode what can i say lol thanks ms pac fan for readin and replyin
that song rides though huh?
No doubt VSOP, and yea that song rides..
