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TheFacelessBeholder
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Check this out. Some mixtape action. Rapped a 2 minuter on an oldie but goodie.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TKB_QXPWs4A
Tell me what you think...and enjoy your day!
Here's the lyrics...
We devestatin and elevatin', eliminatin'
any hesitatin'
Didn't wanna keep ya waitin', so
Doin our thang on another 2 minuter
Speaker on the floor. Guess I'll be a senator
I got the podium, speaking New Politick
Tryin' to hold things together; the New Poligrip.
Attune the ears for a better reception
work the mind like Inception
dodgin' any deception...
Move among the people, yet we stand without peer.
Speakin my mind in rhyme...I'm so sincere.
In the darkest valley, yet and still I never fear
Cause The One who is Far and Away is close and ever near.
so...I'm good...
because I know He's my homie.
I may be alone
but He'll Never leave me lonely...
but that's enough about that...
People being gullible, and taking all the bait.
It's the Ides of March, and they pickin all the grapes.
We gettin' older beats; we diggin in the crates
then we go futuristic bananas, Planet of the Apes
Living timelessly in Days of the Futures Past
Stitching life together...How long will them sutures last?
Trying to move, but we frozen in a peuter cast.
No power for reproduction, just a neutered mass.
Well...I think you get the point.
Can't move forward, arthritis in the joint
Pain is the norm, emptiness is the form, but
We will not conform. The Spirit, He will anoint
With new beauty and creativity
Unconditional love...like the Nativity
Receive the love, and be the solution.
Choose the other path? That's human de-evolution.
Feel free to check out some other songs on "The Faceless Chronicles" page.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TKB_QXPWs4A
Tell me what you think...and enjoy your day!
Here's the lyrics...
We devestatin and elevatin', eliminatin'
any hesitatin'
Didn't wanna keep ya waitin', so
Doin our thang on another 2 minuter
Speaker on the floor. Guess I'll be a senator
I got the podium, speaking New Politick
Tryin' to hold things together; the New Poligrip.
Attune the ears for a better reception
work the mind like Inception
dodgin' any deception...
Move among the people, yet we stand without peer.
Speakin my mind in rhyme...I'm so sincere.
In the darkest valley, yet and still I never fear
Cause The One who is Far and Away is close and ever near.
so...I'm good...
because I know He's my homie.
I may be alone
but He'll Never leave me lonely...
but that's enough about that...
People being gullible, and taking all the bait.
It's the Ides of March, and they pickin all the grapes.
We gettin' older beats; we diggin in the crates
then we go futuristic bananas, Planet of the Apes
Living timelessly in Days of the Futures Past
Stitching life together...How long will them sutures last?
Trying to move, but we frozen in a peuter cast.
No power for reproduction, just a neutered mass.
Well...I think you get the point.
Can't move forward, arthritis in the joint
Pain is the norm, emptiness is the form, but
We will not conform. The Spirit, He will anoint
With new beauty and creativity
Unconditional love...like the Nativity
Receive the love, and be the solution.
Choose the other path? That's human de-evolution.
Feel free to check out some other songs on "The Faceless Chronicles" page.
Comments
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Sup, y'all.
Just makin a brief request for any and all feedback again. Positive or negative.
Critical engagement, constructive if possible. Just trying to grow into this thing...
All the best to hip-hop...and all y'all.