INSTRUMENTAL KEYSTYLE *continue the story to this beat*

VSOP
VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
edited July 2010 in Body SLAM
I'm gonna post the beat and let one of ya'll start off the story-lets see if we can keep it goin and addin on to one ? up story lol I'm jus curious how its gonna end and whos gonna end it

this is one of my favorite instrumentals to write too but Im gonna feed off what you write

whos gonna be the first?! put on the beat-whatever comes to mind, write about, but leave it open for the next to add on-unless you got that perfect ending to the story

yall know the deal-replace the ? 's to tt's

beat is: Jean Grae-its still a love song
hxxp://usershare.net/6dkyy9kjk17y

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  • ThaChozenWun
    ThaChozenWun Members Posts: 9,390
    edited June 2010
    Write a little somethin from the male perspective
    Taught the manners of a man and keep her well respected
    No necklace, no brand names she'd still be happy
    Through the storms and the rumors bet she still will gladly
    Through the fire with the boy like a steel mill factory
    Everything was hollywood, no rain and no pain
    I held her down she was addicted, I was ? to her brain
    Without me, without her, the teams aint whole
    And she understand cause we both had a dream and goal
    No failure we stay standing when the seasons cold
    And all that jealousy there no reasons for
    cause if that start, then a ? gonna leave the door
    Sure enough when the pidgeons took notice
    You quit bein you and the ? became focused
    I tried to show you better but the fixin became hopeless
    She call be back now and then cause she itchin for a dope fix
    But Im not there to answer leave the chicken feelin dope sick
    Leavin me messages, "how you gone ignore me for months"
    This aint a love story its a story of love
    Im full of life, but her, when she in sight she play dead
    cant understand that its on to the next like Jay said
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited June 2010
    late night rendezvous
    favorite spots whats the news
    "Male seen with female walking to room 502"
    meanwhile on the cold side of town
    wife is needing and greeting my past
    the tedious task of being a a loving husband
    never heard such words spoken in a world of chasing
    lacing and passionate kisses
    living a persona i truly can't shake
    she waits by the door
    while she walks towards me
    in the satin robe underneath ? unfolds
    favorite meal on the kitchen table
    laying her poor head listening to the sheets moved by tears
    vaginal tears and wearing it down
    i'm on a roll and shes out of control
    also shes in a personal hole
    my favorite hole as a whole
    her's not really the best
    test of patience and insistence
    smelling unusual smells on me
    never sniff before
    hours later i lay in a puddle of ? , sweat, skin cells, and guilt
    she lays in pleasure, leisure thoughts, and financial gain
    my wife lays in sadness, content, bitterness, and many opinions
    pick one before its too late...................
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited June 2010
    before its too late
    shes a dame of the jealous type
    screamin "move to the left" but I couldnt cuz she was holdin me tight
    holding me right when I was really doing wrong
    she told me at night
    she knew all along
    found numbers in my pockets
    stopped checkin when she found a thong
    used to check my phone to see who I called
    noticed my ipod was steady on Jodeci songs
    but she stayed with me cuz she said it was her fault
    all the talk
    the ? about bills
    the fridge isn't filled
    the kitchen's a mess when I took her out to eat 5 nites a week
    she's spoiled
    i started ignorin her months back
    ..I can't remember the last time i even ? that
    i got a pretty lil thing on the side who doesn't always scream "wheres the money at"
    i do me while doin her
    then I go home, go in the closet, grab a shoebox and hide the hundred stacks
    and hopefully my wife won't come across them...
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited June 2010
    if she do, then my plans are grimm
    picture me spending on a divorce papers
    plus the labor of paying for a silent behavior
    a simple deal to avoid major violence
    shes on the ignore tip
    "food is in the frig, by the way tell ya ? i say hi" ?
    i wonder whens the breaking point
    will she snap any minute when overtime becomes time to get busy
    lizzy and stacy plus tracy on my iphone
    smiley face texts because chicks like the gesture tone
    once again left her alone with condoms latex
    shes bored of waiting and playing the safe bet
    open the closet door and scene three next
    the box with the stack and a picture of my mistress mistresses
    scene four clothes on ground from 3rd story floor
    begging attempts like jungle fever minus the spike lee glimpse.....
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
    minus the spike lee glimpse
    your caught up in the mix
    in the heat of sex
    with not one, i lost count, i think it was six.
    obviously she's hurting,
    don't make her comit suicide,
    you wouldn't wanna see her in a hearse,
    let all them broads disperse,
    And play that psychological reverse
    before they become your curse,
    Let your love be immersed in her
    while temptation lurks with bitter sweetness
    no more sneakiness, I'm the witness.
    evaporate your love essence while she still present
    for she once lacked your presence
    In reference of your unfaithfulness
    let down your defense and see whats next
    before she leave you with a quick text
    Or else you'll be spitting regrets....
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
    sighs and plenty of thoughts
    no redemption for the actions committed
    i'm uplifted by the affection of ?
    but crush by touching another
    driving to my crib reliving every moment
    the strokes and the smell of my mistress forbidden distress
    i think its time to end this suffering before cardiac arrest
    fix up this mess and confess to my nasty ways
    keys open doors
    note on the floor
    out with the girls
    give my regards to your ?
    the ring is on the table
    cheating ways leave a good thing scorn
    by the way your brother says whats up
    and he'll take your place
    ENOUGH IS ENOUGH
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
    She said it, enough is enough!
    She done had it rough,
    all this for a quick ? with some muts
    she said you can't even nut
    Because you stay ? different cuntsShe says we aint made love its been months
    ouch!
    I wonder if brother has been smashing?
    soon ya'll gon be clashing
    Its gon get nasty
    why so shiesty?
    Thus creating animosity and future autopsys
    and several dichotomous
    you should had just remained anonymous.
    By now lessons are learned or should be learned
    you don't want you or brother sitting in a urn
    now that your relationship has been dismantle,
    and has been confirmed,
    question is, what's next?
  • blackphysics
    blackphysics Members Posts: 91 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
    Question is, what next? Divorce court
    Instead of using my second head,I should have use the first one
    Acting like a headless horseman
    Now Im feeling hot under my collar
    sitting in the devils courtroom
    Cause I know on the outcome Im gonna lose
    While Im in the seat of the defendant,my ? lawyer got me feeling defenseless
    but what am I defending?
    I can't pretend like I was innocent
    The judge looks like Judge Hachette
    If my wife chose a Judge it Probably be Judge Ratchet
    Point the gun to my head acting like its Judgement Day
    By playing ? for practice
    Anyway, the judge verdict is...
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
    guity by all means
    future looks grim for thee
    especially the situation thats brewing deep
    within a good thing gone bad
    shes ? my brother, empty house,
    and my conscience is boggling
    inspiring to kick his ass
    but the task isn't all that cake up to be
    driving for hours and heading off to huddle house
    drinking coffee and the waitress is flirting with me
    really its not the perfect time
    speaking of which fast forward tomorrow
    she comes in without a bit of sorrow
    i'm in the room near the bed that i find myself neglecting
    she smiles with a bit of disrespect
    but the tears of "damn why this cheating bastard don't get it"
    i regret but find myself with a Dr Manhattan cold sleeve
    remorseless and non believing
    deceiving i rejected but never neglect
    the regret of burning a good thing yet
    she leaves with her things and my brother is outside
    the ring gets thrown in my face with saliva
    i'm getting ? off she about to run off
    fist to cuffs across the face
    we fight and the door opens.........
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
    The door opens and let's out a sound of pop pop pop
    the sound of your brother's 40 glock
    he busted in and caught ya'll fist locked
    he missed target and made ya'll come to a stop
    c'mon p, why can't you just get up and walk
    forget all the stalks
    your a ticking bomb ready to tick like a clock
    leave the situation to a halt
    remember it was your fault
    your feelings are on a riot like LA Watts
    your throat is feeling like a knot
    just let it go and quit thinking of the time you tied the knot
    obviously temptation you sought
    now you can't handle it when it's hot
    all the lies and cheating has come to a stop...
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
    spot on my neck itching
    to the triggerman
    my brother from the same mother
    try to shoot me
    never seen this in him
    he use to be under me
    looking up to thee like a king in the castle
    long gray beard and a stallion to saddle
    now he's taking her and i really could give a ?
    tell him to put the pistol down
    my time will be out of luck
    its not even worth the short end of destruction
    plus first 48 be having a dude shook
    and white folks out here already calling cops to report crooks
    enough with the scene take her and book somewhere
    I don't really care I lost her and shes gone bad
    the experiences I had it could result in something sad
    like giving up is hard to do
    Donny Hathaway because eventually I'll be missing she
    and she will be ? you
    so just leave and put down the 22
    he agrees and leaves with my lady
    ride and die with me since the age of 15
    K Swiss shoes and guess jeans
    me rocking new balances, guess jeans that's tight on the ankles
    but baggy in the legs
    and a Coogi with the fresh fitted OH BEHAVE
    bumping DJ Clue and ? in my benz
    the haunting thoughts shall begin.....
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
    it has begun
    nightmares of vivid images of your brother and your once lady
    creating a baby
    the retailation of her is real shady
    But every action is a reaction, some just crazy
    Which has you mindset real hazy
    This isn't amazing, more of dazed and confusing
    nothing to amusing
    all this using and emotional abusing..
    this ? is quite alarming, see this why I'm disarming
    forget all that charming
    the body is starving for non of that harming
    and I'm out this piece till ya'll feeling calmly...
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
    Question is, what next? Divorce court
    Instead of using my second head,I should have use the first one
    Acting like a headless horseman
    Now Im feeling hot under my collar
    sitting in the devils courtroom

    first off-props on those lines

    I had to read that ? a few times-Genius!


    lets roll.

    I'm feelin calm like a rock in the sun
    my brother got with my one
    took shoots at me
    then his shots got him a son and made me an uncle
    his nickname that I gave him is "? YOU"
    the reminder of a drawn out soap opera that kept playin
    I was never told it was over and kept goin back to her like I forgot my stapler
    time passed and I'm an ass for takin so long to get back
    babysit my nephew with some duct tape and a ski mask
    hold him for ransom until that ? gives my ? back
    my big screen
    my ps3
    everythin she took from me
    actually everything he took from me
    my brother that is
    ? ?
    and the ? up ? is she slept with him because she thought he was me because we're twins....
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
    thought you guys were twins is her now excuse
    All along this broad had me confused
    all this ? is now been diffused
    see, its not her that's wrong, its also you
    you choose to ? other's and hang with the crew
    And she choose your brother from the same mother
    Sorry are the words she quietly utter
    while your sleeping in the gutter
    she' curls up like a catapillar
    and forms into a ? and turns into a buterfly
    freeing herself she flutters by
    As time keeps passing you by..
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
    moments later a distant June
    laid up under a roof of a bar for a few
    drinking things thats killing my mood
    the spirit within thee is sinking Christian- Full of Smoke
    ? to numb my thoughts of suicide
    especially flicks that i tend to hide from thought
    ? doing a porno with my brother
    pictures of skeet dripping down her cheek
    with a smiley face embracing the moment
    kissing his ? while the letter says HI
    ? up my high I vow to not try
    trial is starting soon within a month or two
    dutch in my two fingers and my other palm on the scotch
    bartender bartender please give me a lift
    so i can flip out this ? and go on with my bitterness
    lady comes by me with the wink
    eyes slurring to the melody of her face
    she laughs and the sounds of it resembles hyena groups
    room getting fuzzy and my words are few
    arm to arm ? session room 202
    wake up next to a woman of fantasy
    sheet pulled off...sur ? prise
    HEY SISTER OF MY EX
    close my eyes and continue to lay next
    plot in my dreams of whats to come
    torture goes both ways
    revenge is so fun
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
    Revenge is nothing nothing nice,
    I sit here thinking while chipping on this ice
    is real p going all out like kimbo slice.
    This cheating and forbidden love has ya'll enticed.
    On the white throat of the' useless passion
    That scorched her soul with its burning breath
    you clutched your fingers in murderous fashion,
    And gathered them close in a grip of death;
    For why should I fan, or feed with fuel,
    A love that showed nothing or something but blank despair?
    So your hold was firm, and your grasp was cruel--
    You meant to strangle it then and there!
    You thought she was dead. But with no warning,
    It rose from its grave last night, and came
    And stood by your bed till the early morning,
    And over and over she spoke your name.
    Its throat was red where your hands had held it;
    It burned her brow with its scorching breath;
    And she said, the moment my eyes beheld it,
    "A love like this can know no death."
    For just one kiss that your lips have given
    In the lost and beautiful past to her
    she would gladly barter your hopes of Heaven
    And all the bliss of Eternity.
    For never a joy are the angels keeping,
    To lay at her feet in Paradise,
    Like that of into your strong arms creeping,
    And looking into your love-lit eyes.
    she know, in the way that sins are reckoned,
    This thought is a sin of the deepest dye;
    But I know, too, if an angel beckoned,
    Standing close by the Throne on High,
    And you, adown by the gates infernal,
    Should open your loving arms and smile,
    She would turn her back on things supernal,
    To lie on your chestt a little while.
    To know for an hour you were her's completely--
    Your's in body and soul, your own--
    you would bear unending tortures sweetly,
    With not a murmur and not a moan.
    A lighter sin or a lesser error
    Might change through hope or fear divine;
    But there is no fear, and hell has no terror,
    To change or alter a love like your's.
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
    remorse and forbidden torment exile my darkest moment
    born again scorn all over
    luck is non existent...four leaf clover
    laying in the room next to the woman i took life of
    suicide, sicko thoughts, and restless movement
    stench of the body rigamortous goes the form
    the spirit in heavens and my life is torn
    my only movement is to the truck and off the cliff
    tired of life and the cheating that commence
    if i could take back all of this
    from father teaching me the ropes
    to me bouncing off of them
    i would have treat my one and only right
    instead of looking at prospects
    one night to the next
    like my ole girl that taught me love at first sight
    sweet like taboo and a lovely woman of virtue
    poetic vibes like the angel from another
    words were strong and looks were no other
    i was afraid of commitment but i made a vow
    broke it runaway groom running left
    she's so right about me looking up
    and looking down upon she as she was the key
    to all this madness from then to now
    court case, murder charge, lunatic prowls
    towards the balcony where's the love
    see if its at the bottom of the fleet
    corpse next to city