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DillaDeaf
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Let's get it...
Yo, Yo,
Attack of brainacs vs supervillans maniacs
My hearing aids be deadly audio tonic
Like boomerangs at speed supersonic
I'm an ol deaf bastard
Steppin ice cold in the yard
Ya won't get far
Cause I got a ghetto express card
If i die tonight
Let me dream of the first light
When my sight tight
Scream out loud for Death's delight
I'm graspin the microphone
Dyin off a full stomach of patron
Alone in a zone
Usin 9-milly like a phone
Now Cerebus lickin my bones
Shot that dog wit my desert eagle
Use a Cowboys helmet
To ? a Philly Eagle
Saw Jay-Z ? Satan
While rhymin D'Evils
I take a ? - it's a hit
It get no better than this
If i'm innocent
Why I ? wack rappers
With a ghost rider penance?
Forgiveness? Nah, BRO
It's Ballin before HOES
Like Frodo with the ring
I'ma ghetto pharmacist
Stay stealin Trick Trick's bling
Yo, Yo,
Attack of brainacs vs supervillans maniacs
My hearing aids be deadly audio tonic
Like boomerangs at speed supersonic
I'm an ol deaf bastard
Steppin ice cold in the yard
Ya won't get far
Cause I got a ghetto express card
If i die tonight
Let me dream of the first light
When my sight tight
Scream out loud for Death's delight
I'm graspin the microphone
Dyin off a full stomach of patron
Alone in a zone
Usin 9-milly like a phone
Now Cerebus lickin my bones
Shot that dog wit my desert eagle
Use a Cowboys helmet
To ? a Philly Eagle
Saw Jay-Z ? Satan
While rhymin D'Evils
I take a ? - it's a hit
It get no better than this
If i'm innocent
Why I ? wack rappers
With a ghost rider penance?
Forgiveness? Nah, BRO
It's Ballin before HOES
Like Frodo with the ring
I'ma ghetto pharmacist
Stay stealin Trick Trick's bling
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Dilla Nevada wrote: »Let's get it...
Yo, Yo,
Attack of brainacs vs supervillans maniacs
My hearing aids be deadly audio tonic
Like boomerangs at speed supersonic
I'm an ol deaf bastard
Steppin ice cold in the yard
Ya won't get far
Cause I got a ghetto express card
If i die tonight
Let me dream of the first light
When my sight tight
Scream out loud for Death's delight
I'm graspin the microphone
Dyin off a full stomach of patron
Alone in a zone
Usin 9-milly like a phone
Now Cerebus lickin my bones
Shot that dog wit my desert eagle
Use a Cowboys helmet
To ? a Philly Eagle
Saw Jay-Z ? Satan
While rhymin D'Evils
I take a ? - it's a hit
It get no better than this
If i'm innocent
Why I ? wack rappers
With a ghost rider penance?
Forgiveness? Nah, BRO
It's Ballin before HOES
Like Frodo with the ring
I'ma ghetto pharmacist
Stay stealin Trick Trick's bling
This section in the bold was pretty damn clever man. My only gripe is that you used the word "eagle" twice while constructing that punchline and I think that kind of repetition took away from an otherwise great line. This was a pretty witty keystyle though and I'd love to see more of your work in the future.
