Unseen Time- By Tupacfan
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Unseen Time
Stepped into these hallowed halls
Before the mind reveal them all
Bring forth the memories of the Fall
Listen to screams rent the air
Mothers and children lost in despair
For bodies that fester in a land laid bare
Mourn the peace that few sought
Murdered before the sin they wrought
Evil born of pride and hateful thought
Man against nature and nature against man
Both fated to meet their timeless end
Before a poison wielded by hand
Man against Man cold of heart
By thought and action are torn apart
Compassion lost from the start.
- Pacfan Jan/2010
Stepped into these hallowed halls
Before the mind reveal them all
Bring forth the memories of the Fall
Listen to screams rent the air
Mothers and children lost in despair
For bodies that fester in a land laid bare
Mourn the peace that few sought
Murdered before the sin they wrought
Evil born of pride and hateful thought
Man against nature and nature against man
Both fated to meet their timeless end
Before a poison wielded by hand
Man against Man cold of heart
By thought and action are torn apart
Compassion lost from the start.
- Pacfan Jan/2010
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this ones really good.. i completely feel it word for word..especially the very last line..
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aye rusty,
Glad you digg this jawn..thanks for the feedback! -
Good poem keep up the good work
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Thanks for the feedback ya future father..It's always appreciated, you already know it! Your material is on point too!
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Man, this ? is tooo real! At least in my life right now.
Unseen time.. We never know what the future lies ahead of us.. And therefore be thankful for your blessings...
I had to re-up it folks...