Youtube Video...Check out our local emcee's....cypher type video...no beats, just lyrics

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PunjabRob
PunjabRob Members Posts: 2
edited April 2012 in Roc Tha Mic
Much love, Feedback Appreciated.... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7ruky25YPkc

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  • Dirty Words
    Dirty Words Members Posts: 106 ✭✭✭
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    First dudes the only one I can actually ever maybe hear doing a song.. Everybody else..

    Second dude seemed nervouse, live show would prolly suck, and sounded like he was tryna be a Grindtime rapper..
    Third dude was slippin' and didn't say anything impressive..
    Fourth dude just seemed cocky and was just rhyming spittin' typical ? ..
    Last dude just plain bored me.. Period..

    And that's not hate homie just some CC.. Keep at it if you think you got it, but I don't see this going anywhere professionally..
  • PunjabRob
    PunjabRob Members Posts: 2
    edited April 2012
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    ? words...thanks for the detailed feedback. I wasnt nervous..just a little ? ...but I will try and make improvements on the next one..it should be recorded soon.
  • Florence52
    Florence52 Members Posts: 7
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    nervouse, live show would prolly suckavatar4.jpg