INSTRUMENTAL KEYSTYLE-beat: Joe Budden-exxes

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VSOP
VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
edited July 2010 in Body SLAM
and YES the topic has to be exxes-some true ? or some story ? -whatever the beat tells you to do

instrumental of the week: Joe Budden-Exxes
hxxp://usershare.net/b3zfhde1kgru
yall know the deal-change the ? 's to tt's


is it
L.ove O.r V E.lements
shes my undefined weather system
when it rains it pours
we stay in doors
make love in the bedroom
the kitchen
she stays on all fours
I explore her soul
wondering does love really live here?
it doesn't have her name on the mailbox
she says she does but is she really sincere?
brokenhearts
I've done that and been there
not goin back
my heart is a cold ice cube and shes warm cognac
she breaks down the walls that I've put up
lost before
but she jus might be the one true love
closet closed on the other 98 girls who were just good ?
with something so good
theres always a few but's
was her..
L.atest O.utta state V.acation an E.xcuse?
was she really in Miami with her sisters at the masseuse
or was she with some guy talking bout her relationship
both laughing at you?

so many questions
?'s are cancerous hooks ripping through basic instincts
her looks are gorgeous
and she looks amazing in jeans
her smile is a crescent moon
she stays on my mind like a teenage love's residue
after smoking 2 L's of Canibus
she started giving me attitude
I wanted it to work
but I didn't have the effort too
so I said
"F it.....its through"
? bless me
I'm stupid
realizing too late to do anything
she gave me the kiss of death like a Genovese
now all I have left is a wedding ring
a broken heart filled with cold ice cubes
but missing a henny drink
still love ?
a crownless headed king
cupid assassinated me from the mezzanine
she was my gift and my curse
left me bleeding all over the carpet
she was driving me bizzurks
had me feeling all carsick
my hearts immune system fell to her germs
got me queezy and nauseous

so what do I do?
get back with her
look in her purse and find a few condoms


damn...I thought it couldnt get any worse
until I just stepped in some dog ?

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  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    Good drop VSOP... another solid verse with a good instrumental. Here's my piece to the puzzle.


    She was a fiend, always chasing but had no luck
    Constant running for it but could never catch up
    Like a dog chasing its tail, a never ending game
    She was looking for riches, to no avail
    A gold digger tryna test me, I couldn't pass
    Let her have her way with me in exchange for that ass
    We was coasting raw, ? the lotion
    That ? was tight but ? emotions
    Thought I would've died for her, a scary notion
    Poisoned by her potion, eyes hypnotized me
    Like I was staring at a fire in the ocean
    Tired of the commotion but I'm a liar though
    Cause when I said I'ma end it, I ended up right back beside the ?
    A never ending cycle, ? I'm just like you
    A fiend for the ? , no matter how much I tried to
    Leave you behind, I kept relapsing,
    Anti-allergic reaction
    Hoping you would be the one to send me packing
    Wishful thinking, I'ma have to make a move on my own now
    Done with the cycle, not ready for another go around
    So I got my ? and dipped real quick,
    Told her to call me if she ever needs the ?
    No more emotional attachment, moved right past it
    But still can't forgot all that ? that her ass did
    I outlasted them other homies but is that an accomplishment?
    Maybe they just dipped out after they demolished it
    I should've been on that college ? , just dog a ?
    Then never call her again when it's time to call it quits
    Wasted two years on it, spent too many bills on it
    Is what I'm thinkin while I'm on my 6th gin and tonic
    Drowning sorrows, thinking about all the possible tomorrows
    12am ? as ? looking around tryna borrow
    a five for the ride, I got a dime for a drive
    Bout to cut my losses but just as I'm leavin, guess who arrives
    I try to get out quick, she stops me, says "relax",
    Said she'll drop me home... ? , I'm bout to relapse.
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    I outlasted them other homies but is that an accomplishment?
    Maybe they just dipped out after they demolished it
    I should've been on that college ? , just dog a ?
    Then never call her again when it's time to call it quits
    Wasted two years on it, spent too many bills on it
    Is what I'm thinkin while I'm on my 6th gin and tonic
    Drowning sorrows, thinking about all the possible tomorrows
    12am ? as ? looking around tryna borrow
    a five for the ride, I got a dime for a drive
    Bout to cut my losses but just as I'm leavin, guess who arrives
    I try to get out quick, she stops me, says "relax",
    Said she'll drop me home... ? , I'm bout to relapse.

    lol you killed the ending

    Im diggin this topic cuz I can go for days bout some dumb chicks lol good drop fam
  • ThaChozenWun
    ThaChozenWun Members Posts: 9,390
    edited July 2010
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    I aint good with names so this chick lets call her old girl
    Plain aint it? Now but back when shorty was the whole world
    Got her number on the gym floor, she tellin me to win more
    played it off "I got you so what else I'm gone win for"
    Everyday chillin day and time we couldnt spend more
    Shorty had her own asked me why I'm gonna spend for
    Normally I woulda smashed cause her ass you couldn't ignore
    even more there was something more mind, body, spirit
    and every word she speak I was never hard to hear it
    phone buzzin, no number, private caller comin through now
    Tryin to hide the phone she heard the ring and turned the tube down
    I look up at her face blank stare what I'ma do now
    Baby gave me hell turned around and went 2 rounds
    Tellin me that she ashamed that she been holdin me down
    And how her girls gassed her up bout how Im know to be round
    I leave the house and call my man Blue up
    Tellin him cancel the flight cause the plans blew up
    Told him to call my agent and tell him cancel the meeting
    Cause if I leave tonight she gone think her man e'll be cheatin
    So he called up Avery and rescheduled the flight
    She lockin the doors talkin it'll be another ? in my bedroom tonight
    I called her bluff and slept at the other crib for the night
    My ? called "Word? You got to be kiddin me right?"
    I ran to the crib kicked my front door open, hopin
    shorty was only ? round and just jokin
    there she was ? around but it wasn't no jokin
    a ? had her right there right out in the open
    I kicked her ass out, caught my flight in the mornin
    signed my contract and laughed cause they said life would be borin
    Came home packed my ? and headed out to my new place
    "Where you goin?" "Overseas" shorty caught up with the screw face
    She knew I had a plan from college to the pro tour
    and in a minute lil mama turned colder than a snowfort
    Eyes startin to water while she replayin the last night
    Then breaks down and asks herself why in the ? that she aint act right
    She told me she was sorry but I never looked back at her
    She wrote the fiction so quickly that the book just smashed on her
    Every now we meet and she quick to tell me her bad
    Knowing she could of shared all the ? that I was destined to have
    See I told the dumb ? the first time that she ? me
    I'm loyal and trustworthy but she wouldn't just trust me
  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    Good drop Chozen... whole story was dope. I was picturing a music video for it as I was reading, had me laughing a bit.
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    They keep on haunting me
    flaunting goods in my distant memory
    effecting my sexing and causing me to sexting
    messing up my establishment
    you may call it missing them syndrome
    its more of a i miss being a ?
    every time i kiss my wife i see Nikki
    every line i say to her sounds better with Traci
    lord help me these ghosts are driving me crazy
    tell tale heart beating within a wooden chest
    beating and repeating the same pattern
    earning stares from a distant
    need to quit this instant
    cleanse myself in holy water hoping its the key to redemption
    these ghouls hate that
    wanna lay the smack down
    talk about times when i used to go down
    bedroom after hallway
    closet after bathroom
    looming up the craft I mastered
    to give it to the scorn few
    can't go back up to Philly
    there's a hit out on me
    Lacy, Stacy, 10 Keishas and Macy
    got infra red dots coming from places I give out back shots
    nothing to escape it and time to face it
    tell the spirits of the past I'M MARRIED AND I'VE CHANGE
    NO LONGER I'M ? AND THIS SITUATION IS SACRED
    they disappear and reappear as the lady I destroyed
    she holds me, takes off my jeans, and stroke me
    wife comes in and see me choking thee
    wondering if i'm getting ready for she
    runs in with attire for the boning
    seconds before i ? in my past spirit realm

    I know you ready big boy she say
    no doubt a sandwich, drink, and lays I say
    as I lay exhausted and the ghost is ditched
    damn there's no explaining this ? .....
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
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    Dam dam.. You guys! Shame shame.. All them hearts ya'll broke LOL just playing/ joking..

    But na, you guys killed it..

    Vsop, that ? was dizzope..

    And Legend, smh.. That was a solid piece!

    But chozen!

    Dam you, that ? knocked hard.. Ol girl def took an L.. And like legend said "it felt like I was watching a video" LOL..he wasn't lying..

    Real p killed it as usual..


    I enjoyed reading this, I thought the beat was sick!

    Now I'm gon hafta come thru.. Give me a few minutes and lemme rock with this beat..
  • ThaChozenWun
    ThaChozenWun Members Posts: 9,390
    edited July 2010
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    Some people like to say I'm in a league of my own
    Why she keep callin my phone can't you see that Im grown
    Leave it alone, the issue aint the worth the troubles
    She say Im out cheating, dont think that Im workin doubles
    It... Hurts that I love you, but nothing comes easy
    but the harder ? gets the more it just aint worth it
    we both hurtin, yours jealousy, mine too much flirtin
    I aint perfect, but never hit you, never lied, never my mood
    Never ? around even though I should of tried to
    Soul less, I'm heartless so I slept until the nights gone
    Complainin bout her shoes forgettin I kept the lights on
    kept the rent paid and both cars in the garage
    The blackhole is my thoughts and stars are the mirage
    Alarmed that I'm a ? , so strong I will never falter
    Walkin rock of Gibraltar but home girl is hot as lava
    I melt whenever she touch me, like rainy weathers above me
    No dry on the parade, dark clouds but my skies were never gray
    Not alive but Im ok, im floating whatever way
    Both hopin we cross paths, souls broken to lost paths
    Things aint great but it's not bad not as good as I once had
    Love is Evol but not bad, it is great when she got half
    Not half as in material, but rather spiritual
    she whispers in the wind in the breezes hope i hear it to
    We parted ways for a reason cause wasn't neither ready
    Cause I said independent and baby girl was on her diva heavy
    So now we do our own thing, girl no longer need the help
    but I remember the past cause history repeats itself
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    yall are killin it-Chozen, I'm feelin the wordplay-good read

    I got you
    I can write to this beat allllll damn day


    hurts that I love you
    I've slit my wrists because of you
    the cuts looked like your ? so I ? my misery
    and got blood on my shoes
    walk a mile where I've been and you can see I rode you the whole way
    my lil white bronco
    My Oj
    her name was Tangerine
    my prelude to track number 8
    turn her sideways and she'll be with me till the end
    my infiniti
    his wife and my girlfriend
    my sin who might as well be my pen
    cuz of the way she sat on my finger
    I figured
    I want her so Ill take her
    ? her and return her later
    but I liked it and decided shes mine
    I wish I could go back
    complain to ?
    ask "be kind and rewind"
    so she can live her life without me
    shes Cleveland and I'm South Beach
    we break up and shes claimin I'm not the King or never was
    I loved her once
    but times change
    she was A and I was B in our rhyme scheme
    but we still couldn't C straight
    rememberin the good ol times
    she kept my heart as keep sake
    regrets
    regrets

    I should have never put my ? in her box cuz her ? eats tapes
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
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    True story right here...

    See i had this ex, he was all a regret, like an A-track that's been ejected
    From the start it was nothing but love, two years past and the relationship became neglected.
    all the verbal, physical and emotional abuse
    not one but more than two hits, one to the left eye
    caught three in the jaw
    all this my babies saw
    thought I was gon leave the first hit but stop in a heart beat's second
    then came the lying and cheating, in disbelief and continued to be his slave
    walked on egg shells for 2 more years left me amazed
    I now question why I' stayed
    was this all a game played
    he left me feeling quite astray
    till I seen him and my bestfriend butt naked
    left his ass with the quickness, not even reflecting
    speeding fast somewhere down I-10
    this love has died and never will be resurrected
    He's done been infected and happy as ? I left it
    he couldn't accept it
    now he tries to hit me with ? my family
    not realizing he's no longer part of my anatomy
    and no longer my fantasy
    but leaving on a note that I been living estatically.





    Chozen and vsop,

    ya'll going hard, loving the word play.. its fiyah!
  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    VSOP wrote: »
    hurts that I love you
    I've slit my wrists because of you
    the cuts looked like your ? so I ? my misery
    and got blood on my shoes
    walk a mile where I've been and you can see I rode you the whole way
    my lil white bronco
    My Oj

    her name was Tangerine
    my prelude to track number 8
    turn her sideways and she'll be with me till the end
    my infiniti
    his wife and my girlfriend
    my sin who might as well be my pen
    cuz of the way she sat on my finger


    Those lines were fire, good stuff. This is a hot topic, everyone is dropping some nice lines.

    The first of July, no lie, I seen my chick with another guy
    Her gaze like a dagger through my heart, part of me died
    Dude up and left, no point in fighting, I let him by
    Cause she was the one who was on my mind
    While I was on my grind she was busy taking it from behind
    Thought I would dip from work early and drop her a line
    So here I am at her place, flowers in a glass vase
    This look on her face got me thinking I'm outta place
    Or she feeling disgraced, she know she's in it deep now
    Something took over me and I got her, she can't breathe now
    I put my hands on her and made her hit the deck
    That's when my hands ended up around her neck
    Had her beggin for life, a breathe of air
    While all I wanted was some ? respect
    A wreck, my systems ruined, no control
    Luckily something clicked and told me to let her go
    ? shattered in the apartment, a reflection of her inner state
    Glasses on the floor, knives on the table, broken dinner plates
    I wanted to console her, but I couldn't be near her
    At this point, it was just her safety that I fear for
    So I left, I grabbed my ? and never looked back
    No prenup so she broke my heart and took her half
    I almost broke her in half all in the name of ?
    My pick was a bust, ? up, no luck
    We both learned the true meaning of the phrase "love hurts"
    It's just a matter of figuring out who was cut worse
    We met up the next day just to clear the air
    Caution in her tone, for once, I could sense her fear
    Felt like guilt stabbing me in the foot everytime I stepped
    Told her I'm done with this, that's when I left
    She tried to stop me, said she couldn't live without me
    Told her I could've killed her last night, she didn't doubt me
    She was obsessed, said she would suicide if I left
    Lost when I wasn't there, she preferred the certainty of death
    Opposites attract, so do those similar explode
    Cause I swear that would be the result if I ever got a hold
    of her again, I said, "I can't be your savior, it's over"
    "Cause if you ever cheated again, I'd end you", I told her
    Infatuation is irrational, so I moved on and started fresh
    That EX was the best, same is true when you add the S, but I digress.
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    Broken heart and cupids ransom notes
    quotes of disparity and clarity votes
    on whose the flirt of the class
    high school ? itching flocks tend to ?
    only to get stuck with the babies
    and I duck and dodge the thought
    move on to better moments
    seeing the root of all evil lash out onto the spirit of a woman
    looking at my pockets and see the emptiness of a man
    understand this isn't my purpose
    my focus was to become a husband
    not a ex by all means
    numbers collected and block calls received
    not a player as my persona claims to be
    fail to see it please the audience and flee
    from the thought that tend to conceive
    the smiles of pleasure but pain achieve
    green line flashes and the eX turns red
    all they see is rings while I see one
    gold or silver
    promises if they could believe in my wisdom
    my charm and wit
    plus my physical appearance
    they left me in the cold
    old bitter ex I claim the recognition
    turning misses into mistress
    librarian miss
    looking at 106 popping gum and ?
    dissing my man power but miss my man hood
    ex ? at 2am while moms sleeping
    weeping and peeping the bed rock
    while paid programming programs the tv
    EX hit the spot while she's flicking her tongue on...
    next comes ? and i'm sitting upon the bedside
    laid next to the ex after ex
    tired of numerous exes next to exit out of this
    born again witnessing consumption of intertwine flesh
    by a prospect prophet enchant the melody to rescue me from these exes
    yet they crawl in the darkest of dreams
    a argument turns to me standing by the toilet seat
    knuckle shuffling the magic lamp fantasy manifest
    genie WHERES MY EX
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    mspac---I appreciate that real story


    let me start off
    she cheated on me
    then I beat her

    I started singin

    .............as I
    "grab her by her neck, throw her on the wall
    Say, "? don't ever disrespect me never not at all""
    my Mamacita ignores
    does it again
    not with some stranger but my best friend
    actually
    plural...my best friends
    her actions left me at a loss for words
    I found some curses
    but went to church to cure it
    a state of loneliness
    no...
    I live in a country of emptiness all alone
    I date the dark like a part in "the Departed"
    that hoe left me dug up outta my comfort zone

    I am Tone at the end of the phone when I'm tryin to reach her
    I am the static in the speaker when she sends me a text sayin she missed my call cuz she turned off the ringer
    secret ringtones haunt my dreams

    like "Whats your man got to do with me?"
    she seemed happy but snails don't have smiles
    the way she laid around my house aroused the thoughts of death

    I laughed when I thought that she would prolly get more happiness outta that
    I tried to move on
    she followed
    ...like a photographer

    tryin to catch my every action in the back of her mind
    drama maximized
    she wouldnt leave me alone
    I thought that my only way out was

    I had to die

    so I did

    left the face of this earth and I slid
    to a different residence

    never called her again
    every now and then I get a text
    somethin about "she misses"

    and my only reaction is


    get mad at the static thats comin through my speakers
    cuz of Andre's voice singin "Crazy ? " as her ringtone
















    and yes.....I exaggerated a lil bit for effect lol
  • doedyoso
    doedyoso Members Posts: 8
    edited July 2010
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    Yo you need beats? Hit me up at doedoesd@aol.com or my Youtube account www.youtube.com/doedyoso
    my newest track I produced http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ljI-dHj9MdU Big Russ Anotha Day Anotha Dolla (Produced by Doe Doe) Hit me up fast.. I'm willin to work with anybody.. Who is dope that is
  • doedyoso
    doedyoso Members Posts: 8
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  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    doedyoso wrote: »
    Yo you need beats? Hit me up at doedoesd@aol.com or my Youtube account www.youtube.com/doedyoso
    my newest track I produced http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ljI-dHj9MdU Big Russ Anotha Day Anotha Dolla (Produced by Doe Doe) Hit me up fast.. I'm willin to work with anybody.. Who is dope that is


    someone ban this dude
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    VSOP wrote: »
    someone ban this dude

    co siggidity

    welp back on the topic of things


    ? sicko tripping out ?
    limbo over the mind of my temple
    stalker with the shadow and a ? with the tone
    finger bumping assumptions got me thinking
    should i jump through the phone or leave it alone
    i often bone and disown...caress and neglect
    shes the epitome of a begger
    begging for attention like begging for acceptance
    begging for retreat, begging for me as a lifeline
    cut off the phone cord to avoid the drama
    she tortures me in her dreams and ? me in mine
    images of laying next to she and she leaves in thin air
    3d imagery beyond repair
    turning into dragons lair one minute i blink wrong death is certain
    heavy rain pressing upon thee as drama still remains
    she will never leave me as much as I loathed her
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
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    VSOP wrote: »
    someone ban this dude

    Fa real, he ? up our rotation!



    Another tale of the ex....
    the same ex,
    I bought him a lex
    when i left, I took the lex
    left him eating the cereal called trix
    he was ? my best friend trish
    they was smoking all my kush
    rushing for ?
    this ? had me disgust
    bust her in the head 4, 5 maybe even 6 times
    she's the nickel and I was the dime
    what he did, didn't make me lose my mind
    see all along i was too kind
    3 years later kats still spittin, instead I stay steady declining
    I'm not going back to rewinding
    he's the word that I can't define.....