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Antwuan89
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Yo! Uhh! Yo Check It Out!
Look Inside, And You'll See
Man I Kicks The Mad Flow In Front Of The Whole Peeps
Im The New MC On The Block And I Won't Stop
Even If A ? Hold A Glock At The Park Straight After Dark
See Im Blessed To The Hold The Mic
Kickin' Rhymes For The ? & The ? Aight
What You See Is What Really You Get
Getting Money Drinking Wine And All The Other ?
You Can See Me Making Records Chillin' With The ? In The Hallway
Shooting Dice And ? Mad Hot Chicks All ? Day
See I Just Don't Give A Damn
Just Trying To Live And Survive The Life That I Know I Can
I Know Ya Feeling The Vibe Of The Rhythm
Stay In Your Position Your Decision Listen Your Clips Missing
Fake MC's Be Reaching Dumb Rappers Need Teaching
You Wack Im Leaving Probably Be Sleeping
I Continue Speaking The Truth About Real Issues As Long As Im Breathing
You Know The Deal I Keeps It Real
No Time To ? But Still
Im Like Gang Starr I Got The Mass Appeal
Look Inside, And You'll See
Man I Kicks The Mad Flow In Front Of The Whole Peeps
Im The New MC On The Block And I Won't Stop
Even If A ? Hold A Glock At The Park Straight After Dark
See Im Blessed To The Hold The Mic
Kickin' Rhymes For The ? & The ? Aight
What You See Is What Really You Get
Getting Money Drinking Wine And All The Other ?
You Can See Me Making Records Chillin' With The ? In The Hallway
Shooting Dice And ? Mad Hot Chicks All ? Day
See I Just Don't Give A Damn
Just Trying To Live And Survive The Life That I Know I Can
I Know Ya Feeling The Vibe Of The Rhythm
Stay In Your Position Your Decision Listen Your Clips Missing
Fake MC's Be Reaching Dumb Rappers Need Teaching
You Wack Im Leaving Probably Be Sleeping
I Continue Speaking The Truth About Real Issues As Long As Im Breathing
You Know The Deal I Keeps It Real
No Time To ? But Still
Im Like Gang Starr I Got The Mass Appeal
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Early&Often wrote: »you in your 40's bruh?
Nope! 24 -
Early&Often wrote: »you rap like a ? from the 80's bruh....in one of your bars you say
You Can See Me Making Records Chillin' With The ? In The Hallway
No bruh....just...No
Its Just Bars...
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you should've just made a youtube vid and put that up
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is english your first language bro?
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from reading it, it looks like it would sound dated as hell if recorded
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Will this song be on the A side or B side of your mixtape?
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I mean, it's not wack, you got your point across. But it seems you kinda just wrote down whatever popped in your head at the moment. If that's the case, take more time to write, you never know what you could come up with with a few extra seconds of thought.
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Pretty wack dawg... "Man I Kicks The Mad Flow In Front Of The Whole Peeps"
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no,that verse really sucks ass.
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You can find me in the park after dark spitting rhymes
Year is 1983, but I'm classic with time,
Probably chilling in the project, sipping that brew,
Come on IC, tell me how this verse do,
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This ? is trollin. I can see it
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Stopped reading at "Yo! Uhh!"
You typin dawg... why you checkin the mic? -
Illmatic like flow
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you 24 and still trying to rap. Stop it five
