Wackest Freestyle Ever

P-Dogg77

Yo im only a young ? ? around , i know im not good so no need to tell me that i suck , i'm only trying to improve so i can beat my friends on the next cipher. Not tryna become a rapper or sumthin.
Hateful criticism is welcome and expected.

I'm finally at home , got a new dome
it was H.E.R i just met, it gave me a new mindset
Im 15 but im thinkin like a vet , all these fools
makin up stupid rules , use my brain and heart like they were tools
just a young black man tryna make it , so take it , im not gonna fake it
dont make me smack you in the face , you're a disgrace , for the black race
got you entrapped in this lyrical maze , you still not done with your preeten phase
aint no one realer , than this fake hiphop killer
Im on a military operation , real hiphop for the whole nation
i been through earthquakes as if i was haitian , stop listening to that wack station
cuz it's feedin you ? , no rappers with wit , the good ones aint legit ,
hiphop has changed i feel like a misfit , jus tryna kick iiit , smooth like liquid
you'll hate , if you cant relate , you're prolly thinkin why date when i can self-?
man it's too late , you cant fight fate .

Tha Killa

You might want to read RTM Rules #3 and #4 before I have to close your thread.