The Reason Presents : Tha_Bride22 VS aTribeCalledGabi
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Tha_Bride22I have to give it to the creepset homie @tha_bride22 that ? D.A.T B.I.S.H scheme reminded me Eminem vs Juice when he hit Em with the B.U.D.W.E.I.S.E.R ? .
That Black Lives don't matter line was meaaan though lol @atribecalledgabi did her thing and definitely keep an eye out one these rappers out here ladies lol. -
Tha_Bride22bride-
her verse is very musical and she switched the flow (the rhythm had changed) in the alliteration verses.
The alliteration verses were the standout part in Bride's text. it has very witty wordplay & extremely imaginative (you can tell that she writes and knows poetry).
highlight for me:
> Gabi is what we call ? that talk too much.
> Get Grabbed, stuffed inside a Gremlin-
> Gashiki shoved in her gut.
> Give Grace to ? cause he keeps Giving me my enemy’s head
> Guaranteed I’ll use her whole corpse after she’s dead.
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> Gotta Gabi-skinned headboard and a Gabi-skulled Goblet
> Gabi-footed house shoes, now I look like a hobbit.
> Gave my hounds Gabi blood and now they’re Greedy for more.
> Got you regretting ever steppin to me- just like before.
Gabi
it was witty as ? . the pop culture references were hilarious; however, the last verse was wack, and the rhythm was confusing, which is odd because you used ABBA format throughout it.
I love when a person have slant rhymes in their ? , maybe it's the nerd in me, but i got giddy over it (the slant rhyme example is in the highlight).
count the rhythm in your verses.
highlight:
? look closer. My pen game deadlier than any cal you met (Calumet)
My passenger was all outa sorts like Sanaa Lathan driving with Diddy & French
winner
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Tha_Bride22The bolded is my question for each bar
? I ghosted you a year ago
Since when you appear (a peer)?-is this the computer term for ghost/cloning?
Your ? didn't catch half of what I was throwing up - Jay Cutler the quaterback?speaking in terms of his passes?I know that's not it so somebody help me out wit that one
Couldn't take no more. Every bar I couldn't have dug less (Douglas) - who is being referred in the parentheses
? look closer. My pen game deadlier than any cal you met (Calumet)-Calumet City?Murder rate
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aTribeCalledGabiHow come i cant never get down wit one of these...i'll body any ? on the IC
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@tha_bride22
This ? had me rollin
> Gabi-footed house shoes, now I look like a hobbit.
Good ? . I think you got me this time ? lol
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aTribeCalledGabiSkuurrt_Angle wrote: »How come i cant never get down wit one of these...i'll body any ? on the IC
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ghosted means i killed her...so she's a ghostclairvoyance wrote: »The bolded is my question for each bar
? I ghosted you a year ago
Since when you appear (a peer)?-is this the computer term for ghost/cloning?
yea the qb. That bar was choppy tho..like it's saying I'm jay cutler...probly coulda tweaked that one but i left it in *shrug*clairvoyance wrote: »Your ? didn't catch half of what I was throwing up - Jay Cutler the quaterback?speaking in terms of his passes?I know that's not it so somebody help me out wit that one
Douglas and Calumet are places in chicagoclairvoyance wrote: »Couldn't take no more. Every bar I couldn't have dug less (Douglas) - who is being referred in the parentheses
? look closer. My pen game deadlier than any cal you met (Calumet)-Calumet City?Murder rate -
@Purr
Come battle somebody! I wana see what a real writer's verses look like -
atribecalledgabi wrote: »@tha_bride22
This ? had me rollin
> Gabi-footed house shoes, now I look like a hobbit.
Good ? . I think you got me this time ? lol
I had to go back and read yours again...
A lot of chitown references, much respect. Even shouted out my hood!
I think irl, you'd win cause I can tell you write off the cuff... I'd think of all the clever ? in the world after the battle was over on some ,'I should've said...' type of ? , lol
Great battle though!
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tha_bride22 wrote: »atribecalledgabi wrote: »@tha_bride22
This ? had me rollin
> Gabi-footed house shoes, now I look like a hobbit.
Good ? . I think you got me this time ? lol
I had to go back and read yours again...
A lot of chitown references, much respect. Even shouted out my hood!
I think irl, you'd win cause I can tell you write off the cuff... I'd think of all the clever ? in the world after the battle was over on some ,'I should've said...' type of ? , lol
Great battle though!
Lmao right after I turned my verse in i was already thinking of which parts i would take out and redo.
I write how i would say it too so i see what people are saying about the flow being off -
aTribeCalledGabiI ? with both of you but i still wanna ? thabride after her punchline. ? was tough
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aTribeCalledGabiiKingGodGivBiz wrote: »Skuurrt_Angle wrote: »How come i cant never get down wit one of these...i'll body any ? on the IC
Really?
Any ? body..test me, nobody want it -
Tha_Bride22atribecalledgabi wrote: »
ghosted means i killed her...so she's a ghostclairvoyance wrote: »The bolded is my question for each bar
? I ghosted you a year ago
Since when you appear (a peer)?-is this the computer term for ghost/cloning?
yea the qb. That bar was choppy tho..like it's saying I'm jay cutler...probly coulda tweaked that one but i left it in *shrug*clairvoyance wrote: »Your ? didn't catch half of what I was throwing up - Jay Cutler the quaterback?speaking in terms of his passes?I know that's not it so somebody help me out wit that one
Douglas and Calumet are places in chicagoclairvoyance wrote: »Couldn't take no more. Every bar I couldn't have dug less (Douglas) - who is being referred in the parentheses
? look closer. My pen game deadlier than any cal you met (Calumet)-Calumet City?Murder rate
Nah I understood ghosted,that goes without say... but I was referring to 'a peer'?
The Jay Cutler line was straight I just needed confirmation..
Chi-town refrences went over my head but now it make sense...nice one
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aTribeCalledGabiu don't know what a peer means?
And this the ? yall want me to battle? smh -
Tha_Bride22Home Team
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Tha_Bride22u don't know what a peer means?
And this the ? yall want me to battle? smh
Nah man nevamind....I was over analyzing it since it was in parentheses..
But coincidentally peer is a computer technical term aligned with ghost....google it -
Tha_Bride22@MeekMill take notes
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i love them both too much to vote
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aTribeCalledGabiclairvoyance wrote: »
Aight computer geek, just be ready for the battle on the 22nd -
clairvoyance wrote: »
Triple entendre...don't ask me how -
Tha_Bride22Overall I gotta give it to The Bride for flow,consistency and creativity...Each bracket for every letter was hitting and her rhyme structure didn't sound force,which is hard 'not' to do considering her scheme which took up a entire verse.
Gabi even though more bar driven I felt some of her lines were light and could of been more clever. For example I think you could of came up wit a better similie for doughboy..and the suwoo/blood we've heard plenty of times in battle rap. But the Sanaa lathan line was fire and I like the chi town refrences as well as a couple of other lines
And I agree wit goldie it boils down to bars 'but' sometimes jabs hit harder which I thought was the case in this battle,reason why I chose The Bride.She had the full package...
Cripwalking on caskets?? I don't think I want any problems with THE BRIDE
I was really looking forward to this battle and y'all both delivered...salute
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Tha_Bride22tha_bride22 wrote: »atribecalledgabi wrote: »@tha_bride22
This ? had me rollin
> Gabi-footed house shoes, now I look like a hobbit.
Good ? . I think you got me this time ? lol
I had to go back and read yours again...
A lot of chitown references, much respect. Even shouted out my hood!
I think irl, you'd win cause I can tell you write off the cuff... I'd think of all the clever ? in the world after the battle was over on some ,'I should've said...' type of ? , lol
Great battle though!
Look at that sportsmanship. Beautiful.
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aTribeCalledGabiSkuurrt_Angle wrote: »iKingGodGivBiz wrote: »Skuurrt_Angle wrote: »How come i cant never get down wit one of these...i'll body any ? on the IC
Really?
Any ? body..test me, nobody want it
Ill give you 2 hours, on da spot. If not, I'm not interested. -
mosincredible wrote: »tha_bride22 wrote: »atribecalledgabi wrote: »@tha_bride22
This ? had me rollin
> Gabi-footed house shoes, now I look like a hobbit.
Good ? . I think you got me this time ? lol
I had to go back and read yours again...
A lot of chitown references, much respect. Even shouted out my hood!
I think irl, you'd win cause I can tell you write off the cuff... I'd think of all the clever ? in the world after the battle was over on some ,'I should've said...' type of ? , lol
Great battle though!
Look at that sportsmanship. Beautiful.
Me and @tha_bride22 is cool. It's all love. This hip hop ain't no hard feelings
Bride had a dope concept and I'm a sucker for that typa ? . I'll take my L on this one lol -
Tha_Bride22shout out to my trill fam ? . bride u took that one .
