Damn found these throwaway bars, i had for Dub for our battle 2 years ago

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Elzo69Renaissance
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I started writing these bars then said ? it forgot about the battle and ended up freestyling most of the battle or maybe i did use these bars man idk but here they go, this barely rhymes had just started writing lol.....Round 1

I was chilling w my wife / side on my Peter Gunz ?
I get an inbox from the Devil, Lucifer ( Lou Cypher) himself/
He said the next sacrifice is Dub/
The ritual is to go down in late November/
With many thanks given ( thanksgiving), i started cooking up plans to fry this turkey/
I ll wait til he at the table , saying his grace/
Then snap one, leave crqnberry sauce all over the place/
Yall think i brought name flips for this geek?/
All he ll get are bars like a penitentiary on Bourbon Street/
Im from Chi Town, should tell you i aint putting up w no ? ( Bulls ? )/
My little Cubs got them Black Hawks with the full clip/
Body him then dump him in the Lake........Sure ( Lake Shore)/
For thinking you ll win, he ( windy) he must have never heard my CD (city) Reach Gawd
So judges before you rock this vote like Obama/
I wont leave it to Chance/
I just implore you to use Common Sense/
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  • Elzo69Renaissance
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    The 2nd round is used the Mean Denzel scheme ...cant find it nowhere but i believe this was my 3rd round......wrote this one the plane the day of the battle i believe


    Round 3:

    First 2 rounds, i killed you G/
    Put ur body on my hood and parade u thru my city/
    This the round i show no one on the IC ? w me/
    Im the king of the IC/
    No debating, back and forth like Cassidy and Gillie/

    If i see any of yall reaching for my crown ima slap u silly/
    Like that ? Geechie/
    U look like Un Casa/
    Ill run up in ur casa/
    And smack ur glasses off , u doppleganger/
    Lookdude for you, i have no metaphors/
    Cuz u already met the Fours/
    I bodied you before/
    Young Goldie, u aint a mack, but a rest haven/
    Dknt trip ur reservation s already made in heaven/
    Ill tell yall more, how i squeeze them triggers/
    But the rest only get half a bar, ? yall ? /
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  • Trollio
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    And that's why you lost twice...trying to be Charlie clips n ?
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  • 5th Letter
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    Elzo asking ? guess what room he in and ? .
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  • TonyDubbz
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    Elzo69Renaissance wrote: »
    I started writing these bars then said ? it forgot about the battle and ended up freestyling most of the battle or maybe i did use these bars man idk but here they go, this barely rhymes had just started writing lol.....Round 1

    I was chilling w my wife / side on my Peter Gunz ?
    I get an inbox from the Devil, Lucifer ( Lou Cypher) himself/
    He said the next sacrifice is Dub/
    The ritual is to go down in late November/
    With many thanks given ( thanksgiving), i started cooking up plans to fry this turkey/
    I ll wait til he at the table , saying his grace/
    Then snap one, leave crqnberry sauce all over the place/
    Yall think i brought name flips for this geek?/
    All he ll get are bars like a penitentiary on Bourbon Street/
    Im from Chi Town, should tell you i aint putting up w no ? ( Bulls ? )/
    My little Cubs got them Black Hawks with the full clip/
    Body him then dump him in the Lake........Sure ( Lake Shore)/
    For thinking you ll win, he ( windy) he must have never heard my CD (city) Reach Gawd
    So judges before you rock this vote like Obama/
    I wont leave it to Chance/
    I just implore you to use Common Sense/

    Stick to your day job Vanessa
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  • Lurkristocrat
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    this ? elzo leaves verses under 9th wonder beats on youtube
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  • Lurkristocrat
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    Damn...? sat back, had time to reflect on his bars and still decided to drop this basura
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  • Elzo69Renaissance
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    Lurkristocrat wrote: »
    Damn...? sat back, had time to reflect on his bars and still decided to drop this basura

    First off Doug Funnie, u can see me w the bars whenever...2nd i found these in my old laptop from years ago...
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  • DOPEdweebz
    DOPEdweebz Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 29,364 Regulator
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    We need a battle tournament
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  • TonyDubbz
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    iKingGodGivBiz wrote: »
    We need a battle tournament

    Set it up and when u do give me Allergens/ @MoralOral i promse to deliver his head on a silver platter.

    We battled b4 but the ? wasnt official cause we aint have a poll and the quality was trash moreso on his part than mine
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  • SolemnSauce
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    Aight
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  • Lurkristocrat
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    Elzo69Renaissance wrote: »
    Lurkristocrat wrote: »
    Damn...? sat back, had time to reflect on his bars and still decided to drop this basura

    First off Doug Funnie, u can see me w the bars whenever...2nd i found these in my old laptop from years ago...

    yfeoq.gif

    you dont want those problems...
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  • Trillaaaaaa
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    "Throw away" bars cuz they was straight basura
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