Goldie vs Clairvoyant
clairvoyance
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Y'all running for mayor or something
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Aight Goldie,lets set the record straight,just cause you make comments that are outrageous and ridiculous
Don't mean that your lines can trump mines,when they fall behind,on some apprentice sh**
Don't think you know who you dealing with,so please humble
You moderate cool,but dont tolerate fools,or cats with raps that are boring
Leave you with a suit taylor made threaded in this casket that I laid straight for him
Y'all know the forum that he runs and the threads that he make
Claims he got a real life,but it's always a new tournament thats up for a debate
How you call yourself gold,when everything about you is fake
You the wizard hiding behind the curtain,always talking sh** while lurking behind drapes
Yeah the 22nd is the day I ? you, couldn't wait
Im tuned up,I got the bars on auto,I'm zoning
If you don't brace yourself,your neck might get broken
Snap my fingers,that's a hit, like I'm Corleoning
Take you out from a distance,that's Vasily, without reloading
That's right I'm a movie buff,that's L.C.A.
Lights Camera Action,take a fraction straight from your brain
Just a portion
Pinky to my mouth like I'm bossin,fly like Austin,you know shaggy and flossin
You're not a member Gold,only a few sons could hang with the coldest
I mean I'm sorry,but didn't I tell ya
He's been putting on act since forever,he ain't real,you Iggy Azaelea
You already extinct,scalp your head for my memorabilia
What's your condition?no heart,you was born as a failure
Destined to lose
Even if you pushed me to the Max,I still wouldn't walk in your shoes
That's not how I step,I'm a let these bars connect, like magnets
You can either get ate or salvaged
Unlike Craig, I know how to store food in my cabinets
So if you talk trash,I got smacks
You want waves,you get capped
Ask Smokey,don't provoke me
Always carry them two things that match
See you gotta learn how to coordinate,you back down,it's too late
What goes around comes back around like a boomerang and my mark is too seal your fate
And if he's hiding,I'll find him and go to any and whichever hole he's in
The boy blew,then step to his mom like Zod and crip toe any and whichever house she's in
Cause you've been dodging me,you must wanna be from Brooklyn
Acting like Fredo,guess you knew my mic will ? ya
And I'm not Sicilian
When ya drop sixteen,these bars crash cotillions
Ya want more lines,I got millions
I could tell by your reaction,your already in your feelings
But hey....
I guess that's how a b*%¢# moderator trolls,when you put him on hold,all he can do is push buttons
The way y'all move is disgusting
You back down after you pop sh**,I make polls, who busy locking it
Somebody give me the cue,to knock these two cornballs down the corner pocket
No Espn,but I can see an end to gold,plummets,your stocks down,you already know your finished
No need to broadcast these headlines when I killed you for all eyes to witness, your lies suspicious
I see no growth in your bars,there's no evolution,you need to get with fitness
These lines come around like a spin move,with the quickness,like I got that Michael Jackson spirit,no ask me can I feel it
Just a tad but you aint bad,you ain't nothing,you already know your sorry
Your bars are played,plus you can get the fade...like Mike Lowry
And if that line was to predictable,try and catch this one,you might sound stupid
But I don't need you to spot a bar Gold,at the gym,your just about useless
You can't out rap me,even a treadmill could show who's the fastest,you hold no weight,you better off taking Zumba classes
You must wear glasses if you thought you can see me
You'll need a extra pair of four eyes to win,chances still be slim, with ghostwrites from the likes of Geechie
Now is he Drizzy or just don't have the rhythm to get busy,can't walk tall with me man,Dwayne Johnson with these hands,that's how I rock milli
The glove a make your face turn purple,that's how you get rocked silly
Make you sing soprano for acting like he was made really
Can't sit with King Arthur and my sword,try out for the team, I'll cut your ass plenty
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I told you I had bars on deck
Yo
You're a ?
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We off the chain with them sticks like nunchucks
Leave him with a pink eye when I hit his face with the gun butt
You know what? I'm that ? you should look up to
Like Nas in his prime, medallion with the ? up tooth
You ? up too
? I done dug up proof
Birds give you the run around, you're playing duck duck goose
You'll ? up who? ? ? stay in your place
I'm type rude spit in your food while you're saying your grace
I'll be way outta state, going through bread like a sloppy joe
Find Clair under a cliff like the Cosby Show
You're not be bro
These hands will leave you stiff like freeze tag
Givin him back to back punches this ? is a speed bag
You little ? ass ? , you aint never seen cash
And when you have, I'll leave more round in your ass than a bean bag
Your whole team's trash
You aint built for this battle ?
While you're over there listening looking mad as ?
I'll kick in the door with the four and start blastin ?
Then hide the body like a fat ? avi pic
You ? ?
This mf gotta be jokin
I'll flex the arm then spray the strap like Hollywood Hogan
Back to polly and smokin
The potent tuss in the 4 liter
You can go with Geechie to work and never see a floor cleaner
I got a gun sooo big when it ......... Jersey
Look at the date, this ? was made 3 months ago
Pardon the distortion
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GoldieI'll flex the arm then spray the strap like Hollywood Hogan
Clairvoyance I want to give you constructive criticism. Is that OK with you? Cuz I want to know what the hell you be thinking when you put your bars together. It's like you focus too much on "how to rhyme" and don't ever land a punch. What was your hardest bar?
Next time don't over think what you are going to rhyme with and start thinking about how you can set up a metaphor, wordplay, or name flip. Something.
You said I'm tuned up, I got the bars on auto, I'm zoning...... you could've done a scheme with that say something like he don't got that spark in him no more, dismantle him like car parts, ? up your motor skills the hearse gotta carry him on a flat bed.... BRUH, SOMETHING! -
Sage Wonder wrote: »
Clairvoyance I want to give you constructive criticism. Is that OK with you? Cuz I want to know what the hell you be thinking when you put your bars together. It's like you focus too much on "how to rhyme" and don't ever land a punch. What was your hardest bar?
Next time don't over think what you are going to rhyme with and start thinking about how you can set up a metaphor, wordplay, or name flip. Something.
You said I'm tuned up, I got the bars on auto, I'm zoning...... you could've done a scheme with that say something like he don't got that spark in him no more, dismantle him like car parts, ? up your motor skills the hearse gotta carry him on a flat bed.... BRUH, SOMETHING!
dam..no need to post the audio....nah but I hear you...the flow is too dna ish... -
GoldieI'm not telling you to stop writing. Study up on battle rap haymakers and figure out what makes them stand out.
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I was j/k....but to answer your question even though I don't like quoting my own sh**...my hardest bar was the Fredo/Mic line and that was the one bar that didnt rhyme..
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GoldieClair is just horrible, possibly the worst text battle rapper I have ever seen here. Goldie is Goldie.
It's not even close.
This was like when Conceited battled that guy that no one remembers.. Hold up.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D8JewM9GGDc
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GoldieSage Wonder wrote: »
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So goldie is the George foreman of this ? ?
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@harlem , let me know when my ?So goldie is the George foreman of this ? ?
From anybody else it would be a compliment, but knowing you , there's a diss in there somewhere lol -
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@Sage Wonder besides goldies hogan bar,what else??
Y'all gassing one hot line...meanwhile I had bar after bar,lot of goldie sh** was mad simple -
lol @ bar after bar, what punches you talkin bout?
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GoldieI call tie.
My favorite bars:
Im tuned up,I got the bars on auto,I'm zoning
If you don't brace yourself,your neck might get broken
Snap my fingers,that's a hit, like I'm Corleoning
Take you out from a distance,that's Vasily, without reloading
Bars! -
And mind you, that ? was made in a day over 3 months ago. You aint even a ? I would write for.
That duck duck goose bar alone (with proof of you admitting you dont get ? ) trumps every bar you had. -
lol @ bar after bar, what punches you talkin bout?
And which of my bars were simple?
You know what...on the humble I'm going to respect your verse and everyone's opinion....and leave at that..
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I see geechie been breathin in them toilet wash fumes again
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clairvoyance wrote: »
Nah , you've been talkin ? this whole time. Break my simple bars down, then show us how complex your bars are. -
Aye i ? wit da bars... Im from Richmond tho shawty and dem lame threats n ima do dis to u n dat to u ? dont fly... We spit it real out here.. Ima ? dis ? geech all facts n real ? .. Bars in it ofcourse.. But dis ? gon hurt!! Wassup wit da audio... Its a perfect day to die mayne!!!
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@goldie yo pen is cold tho my g
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Micmacmar3of3m wrote: »Aye i ? wit da bars... Im from Richmond tho shawty and dem lame threats n ima do dis to u n dat to u ? dont fly... We spit it real out here.. Ima ? dis ? geech all facts n real ? .. Bars in it ofcourse.. But dis ? gon hurt!! Wassup wit da audio... Its a perfect day to die mayne!!!
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clairvoyance wrote: »
Nah , you've been talkin ? this whole time. Break my simple bars down, then show us how complex your bars are.
Im not gonna go back and forth quoting our own sh** ,cause that makes us look corny...its up to the IC...peace