Goldie vs Clairvoyant

clairvoyance
clairvoyance Members Posts: 2,751 ✭✭✭✭✭
edited March 2016 in The Battle Rap Zone
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Goldie vs Clairvoyant 6 votes

Goldie
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nex gingeechee slimDOPEdweebzHarlemThumzUpSage WonderTonyDubbz 6 votes
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  • Trollio
    Trollio Members Posts: 25,815 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Y'all running for mayor or something
  • clairvoyance
    clairvoyance Members Posts: 2,751 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2016


    Aight Goldie,lets set the record straight,just cause you make comments that are outrageous and ridiculous
    Don't mean that your lines can trump mines,when they fall behind,on some apprentice sh**
    Don't think you know who you dealing with,so please humble

    You moderate cool,but dont tolerate fools,or cats with raps that are boring
    Leave you with a suit taylor made threaded in this casket that I laid straight for him

    Y'all know the forum that he runs and the threads that he make
    Claims he got a real life,but it's always a new tournament thats up for a debate
    How you call yourself gold,when everything about you is fake
    You the wizard hiding behind the curtain,always talking sh** while lurking behind drapes
    Yeah the 22nd is the day I ? you, couldn't wait

    Im tuned up,I got the bars on auto,I'm zoning
    If you don't brace yourself,your neck might get broken
    Snap my fingers,that's a hit, like I'm Corleoning
    Take you out from a distance,that's Vasily, without reloading

    That's right I'm a movie buff,that's L.C.A.
    Lights Camera Action,take a fraction straight from your brain

    Just a portion
    Pinky to my mouth like I'm bossin,fly like Austin,you know shaggy and flossin
    You're not a member Gold,only a few sons could hang with the coldest

    I mean I'm sorry,but didn't I tell ya
    He's been putting on act since forever,he ain't real,you Iggy Azaelea
    You already extinct,scalp your head for my memorabilia
    What's your condition?no heart,you was born as a failure

    Destined to lose
    Even if you pushed me to the Max,I still wouldn't walk in your shoes

    That's not how I step,I'm a let these bars connect, like magnets
    You can either get ate or salvaged
    Unlike Craig, I know how to store food in my cabinets

    So if you talk trash,I got smacks
    You want waves,you get capped
    Ask Smokey,don't provoke me
    Always carry them two things that match

    See you gotta learn how to coordinate,you back down,it's too late
    What goes around comes back around like a boomerang and my mark is too seal your fate

    And if he's hiding,I'll find him and go to any and whichever hole he's in
    The boy blew,then step to his mom like Zod and crip toe any and whichever house she's in

    Cause you've been dodging me,you must wanna be from Brooklyn
    Acting like Fredo,guess you knew my mic will ? ya
    And I'm not Sicilian
    When ya drop sixteen,these bars crash cotillions
    Ya want more lines,I got millions
    I could tell by your reaction,your already in your feelings

    But hey....
    I guess that's how a b*%¢# moderator trolls,when you put him on hold,all he can do is push buttons
    The way y'all move is disgusting

    You back down after you pop sh**,I make polls, who busy locking it
    Somebody give me the cue,to knock these two cornballs down the corner pocket

    No Espn,but I can see an end to gold,plummets,your stocks down,you already know your finished
    No need to broadcast these headlines when I killed you for all eyes to witness, your lies suspicious
    I see no growth in your bars,there's no evolution,you need to get with fitness
    These lines come around like a spin move,with the quickness,like I got that Michael Jackson spirit,no ask me can I feel it

    Just a tad but you aint bad,you ain't nothing,you already know your sorry
    Your bars are played,plus you can get the fade...like Mike Lowry

    And if that line was to predictable,try and catch this one,you might sound stupid
    But I don't need you to spot a bar Gold,at the gym,your just about useless

    You can't out rap me,even a treadmill could show who's the fastest,you hold no weight,you better off taking Zumba classes

    You must wear glasses if you thought you can see me
    You'll need a extra pair of four eyes to win,chances still be slim, with ghostwrites from the likes of Geechie

    Now is he Drizzy or just don't have the rhythm to get busy,can't walk tall with me man,Dwayne Johnson with these hands,that's how I rock milli
    The glove a make your face turn purple,that's how you get rocked silly
    Make you sing soprano for acting like he was made really
    Can't sit with King Arthur and my sword,try out for the team, I'll cut your ass plenty
  • clairvoyance
    clairvoyance Members Posts: 2,751 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2016
    I'll post the audio later

    @goldie
  • _Goldie_
    _Goldie_ Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator
    I told you I had bars on deck



    Yo

    You're a ?



    The End
  • _Goldie_
    _Goldie_ Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator


    We off the chain with them sticks like nunchucks
    Leave him with a pink eye when I hit his face with the gun butt
    You know what? I'm that ? you should look up to
    Like Nas in his prime, medallion with the ? up tooth
    You ? up too
    ? I done dug up proof
    Birds give you the run around, you're playing duck duck goose

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    You'll ? up who? ? ? stay in your place
    I'm type rude spit in your food while you're saying your grace
    I'll be way outta state, going through bread like a sloppy joe
    Find Clair under a cliff like the Cosby Show
    You're not be bro
    These hands will leave you stiff like freeze tag
    Givin him back to back punches this ? is a speed bag
    You little ? ass ? , you aint never seen cash
    And when you have, I'll leave more round in your ass than a bean bag
    Your whole team's trash
    You aint built for this battle ?
    While you're over there listening looking mad as ?
    I'll kick in the door with the four and start blastin ?
    Then hide the body like a fat ? avi pic
    You ? ?
    This mf gotta be jokin
    I'll flex the arm then spray the strap like Hollywood Hogan

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    Back to polly and smokin
    The potent tuss in the 4 liter
    You can go with Geechie to work and never see a floor cleaner
    I got a gun sooo big when it ......... Jersey


    Look at the date, this ? was made 3 months ago




    Pardon the distortion

  • Sage Wonder
    Sage Wonder Members Posts: 3,413 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Goldie
    _Goldie_ wrote: »
    I'll flex the arm then spray the strap like Hollywood Hogan


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    Clairvoyance I want to give you constructive criticism. Is that OK with you? Cuz I want to know what the hell you be thinking when you put your bars together. It's like you focus too much on "how to rhyme" and don't ever land a punch. What was your hardest bar?


    Next time don't over think what you are going to rhyme with and start thinking about how you can set up a metaphor, wordplay, or name flip. Something.


    You said I'm tuned up, I got the bars on auto, I'm zoning...... you could've done a scheme with that say something like he don't got that spark in him no more, dismantle him like car parts, ? up your motor skills the hearse gotta carry him on a flat bed.... BRUH, SOMETHING!
  • clairvoyance
    clairvoyance Members Posts: 2,751 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2016
    _Goldie_ wrote: »




    Clairvoyance I want to give you constructive criticism. Is that OK with you? Cuz I want to know what the hell you be thinking when you put your bars together. It's like you focus too much on "how to rhyme" and don't ever land a punch. What was your hardest bar?


    Next time don't over think what you are going to rhyme with and start thinking about how you can set up a metaphor, wordplay, or name flip. Something.


    You said I'm tuned up, I got the bars on auto, I'm zoning...... you could've done a scheme with that say something like he don't got that spark in him no more, dismantle him like car parts, ? up your motor skills the hearse gotta carry him on a flat bed.... BRUH, SOMETHING!


    dam..no need to post the audio....nah but I hear you...the flow is too dna ish...
  • Sage Wonder
    Sage Wonder Members Posts: 3,413 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Goldie
    I'm not telling you to stop writing. Study up on battle rap haymakers and figure out what makes them stand out.
  • clairvoyance
    clairvoyance Members Posts: 2,751 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2016
    I was j/k....but to answer your question even though I don't like quoting my own sh**...my hardest bar was the Fredo/Mic line and that was the one bar that didnt rhyme..
  • DOPEdweebz
    DOPEdweebz Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 29,364 Regulator
    Goldie
    Clair is just horrible, possibly the worst text battle rapper I have ever seen here. Goldie is Goldie.

    It's not even close.

    This was like when Conceited battled that guy that no one remembers.. Hold up.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D8JewM9GGDc

    Yup, this is basically what happened.
  • HarlemThumzUp
    HarlemThumzUp Members Posts: 4,942 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Goldie
    _Goldie_ wrote: »
    I'll flex the arm then spray the strap like Hollywood Hogan


    5643ac1f50d2de390e3995ae



    stopped reading after this ? ..Goldie I want a rematch ?
  • Trollio
    Trollio Members Posts: 25,815 ✭✭✭✭✭
    So goldie is the George foreman of this ? ?
  • _Goldie_
    _Goldie_ Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator
    edited March 2016
    @harlem , let me know when my ?

    Trollio wrote: »
    So goldie is the George foreman of this ? ?

    From anybody else it would be a compliment, but knowing you , there's a diss in there somewhere lol
  • clairvoyance
    clairvoyance Members Posts: 2,751 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2016
  • clairvoyance
    clairvoyance Members Posts: 2,751 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2016
    @Sage Wonder besides goldies hogan bar,what else??

    Y'all gassing one hot line...meanwhile I had bar after bar,lot of goldie sh** was mad simple
  • _Goldie_
    _Goldie_ Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator
    lol @ bar after bar, what punches you talkin bout?


    And which of my bars were simple?
  • geechee slim
    geechee slim Members Posts: 2,465 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Goldie
    I call tie.

    My favorite bars:
    Im tuned up,I got the bars on auto,I'm zoning
    If you don't brace yourself,your neck might get broken
    Snap my fingers,that's a hit, like I'm Corleoning
    Take you out from a distance,that's Vasily, without reloading

    Bars!
  • _Goldie_
    _Goldie_ Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator
    And mind you, that ? was made in a day over 3 months ago. You aint even a ? I would write for.


    That duck duck goose bar alone (with proof of you admitting you dont get ? ) trumps every bar you had.
  • clairvoyance
    clairvoyance Members Posts: 2,751 ✭✭✭✭✭

    _Goldie_ wrote: »
    lol @ bar after bar, what punches you talkin bout?


    And which of my bars were simple?

    You know what...on the humble I'm going to respect your verse and everyone's opinion....and leave at that..

  • _Goldie_
    _Goldie_ Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator
    I see geechie been breathin in them toilet wash fumes again
  • _Goldie_
    _Goldie_ Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator
    _Goldie_ wrote: »
    lol @ bar after bar, what punches you talkin bout?


    And which of my bars were simple?

    You know what...on the humble I'm going to respect your verse and everyone's opinion....and leave at that..

    Nah , you've been talkin ? this whole time. Break my simple bars down, then show us how complex your bars are.
  • Micmacmar3of3m
    Micmacmar3of3m Members Posts: 1,316 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Aye i ? wit da bars... Im from Richmond tho shawty and dem lame threats n ima do dis to u n dat to u ? dont fly... We spit it real out here.. Ima ? dis ? geech all facts n real ? .. Bars in it ofcourse.. But dis ? gon hurt!! Wassup wit da audio... Its a perfect day to die mayne!!!
  • Micmacmar3of3m
    Micmacmar3of3m Members Posts: 1,316 ✭✭✭✭✭
    @goldie yo pen is cold tho my g
  • _Goldie_
    _Goldie_ Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator
    Aye i ? wit da bars... Im from Richmond tho shawty and dem lame threats n ima do dis to u n dat to u ? dont fly... We spit it real out here.. Ima ? dis ? geech all facts n real ? .. Bars in it ofcourse.. But dis ? gon hurt!! Wassup wit da audio... Its a perfect day to die mayne!!!

    No gun bars?
  • clairvoyance
    clairvoyance Members Posts: 2,751 ✭✭✭✭✭
    _Goldie_ wrote: »
    _Goldie_ wrote: »
    lol @ bar after bar, what punches you talkin bout?


    And which of my bars were simple?

    You know what...on the humble I'm going to respect your verse and everyone's opinion....and leave at that..

    Nah , you've been talkin ? this whole time. Break my simple bars down, then show us how complex your bars are.

    Im not gonna go back and forth quoting our own sh** ,cause that makes us look corny...its up to the IC...peace