My Vow To You

shawty_stunnagrl

The intensity of the news
Slapped me in the face
Like a silver steak through the heart.
Alone and scared i started to weap.
Images rushed at me
Like a flock of vultures to dead meat.
Confused and angry i started to speak.
Why? In the thrashing upon the walls
Blood shot from your head
Like the pounding of your heart
You fell to the ground dead
Your lifeless body lying on the cold floor
Still warm and soft and pink
Your hair so light yet smells so sweet
I lean down to feel your lips and kiss your cheek
I whisper in your ear what i've been longing to say
"Dont worry my sweet on,
It'll all be over soon.
Believe me when i say this is your last day."
Standing over you
With love in my eyes
Anger in my heart
I make one last vow to you,
"You can not break me,
You can not make me stay,
Your death is my revenge,
And i vow to love you untill your dieing day!"

Sovo_Nah

your love died or is this some type of metaphor for something else?

your expression is beautiful, but my lack of depth enables me to comprehend.

shawty_stunnagrl

Sovo_Nah wrote: »

your love died or is this some type of metaphor for something else?

your expression is beautiful, but my lack of depth enables me to comprehend.

its a little bit of both to be honest. and i dont honestly expect any 1 to see it/comprehend it in any certain way. take it how you feel it.

and thank you by the way.

Tupacfan

:,(

This ? made me cry, for many reasons!!!

Thank you for expressing something I cat touch on, this ? right here is too deep for me! I can relate 110% and this very moment I feel every pain in this drop because I, I am going thru the same thing!

And the word play, pssssh, ? was laced on wax! Loved it and painfully beautifully written!

Thanks for sharing!!