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Rocket Kidd
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OBSESSION
Shhhh, be quiet everything will be alright.
Don’t worry love, I’m gonna hold you tight.
Tonight we’re gonna have a great time.
Dude’s thought I was buggin when I said I was dating a dime.
I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
Always blowing you kiss when I see you on TV.
But in my heart you know u should be here with me.
All of your posters on my wall and the new shrine I just built.
Any guy disrespecting you was a guy I would’ve killed.
One day I felt real bad and started snorting coke.
It got worse when I saw you on TV kissing that Irish bloke.
I was hurt, sad, confused screaming “WHY WOULD U DO THIS ME!”
“CAN’T BELIEVE I WAS STUPID ENOUGH TO GET YOUR NAME TATTED ON ME”.
Ripped your posters off the wall, and destroyed that shrine.
At this time, all I can think was “REVENGE WILL BE MINE”
In a coked out rage, I slit my wrist and shattered the mirror.
Blood spilling everywhere but my mind was clearer.
Then I finally found out what I needed to do.
“IF I CAN’T BE WITH YOU, NOBODY WILL HAVE YOU!”
Days, nights, weeks and months have passed by.
Every night I curl up into a ball and cry.
Watching TV and the news said you were havin a premier in town.
“This would be the perfect place, to shut this ? down.
808’s and heartbreak is the perfect album for this.
Because at the end of the night I’m call it quits.
So I waited in the crowd, waiting for you to pass by
You looked so beautiful it brought a tear to my eye.
Then I had that vision of you kissing that Irish ? ,
Thinking “its now or never, do u have the guts”
Heart is pounding, sweating profusely getting nervous
I’m having 2nd thoughts “does she really deserve this”
The struggle within was becoming too much,
“? it, we belong together so I’m taking out the both of us”
Jumped the guard rail, and pointed the gun at you.
Took a couple shots at security then showed off my tattoo
I told her please forgive me, then squeezed off into her forehead.
That way I knew for certain she was dead.
I dropped to my knees and prayed to ? .
Then pulled the trigger on myself so we’d never be apart.
Shhhh, be quiet everything will be alright.
Don’t worry love, I’m gonna hold you tight.
Tonight we’re gonna have a great time.
Dude’s thought I was buggin when I said I was dating a dime.
I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
Always blowing you kiss when I see you on TV.
But in my heart you know u should be here with me.
All of your posters on my wall and the new shrine I just built.
Any guy disrespecting you was a guy I would’ve killed.
One day I felt real bad and started snorting coke.
It got worse when I saw you on TV kissing that Irish bloke.
I was hurt, sad, confused screaming “WHY WOULD U DO THIS ME!”
“CAN’T BELIEVE I WAS STUPID ENOUGH TO GET YOUR NAME TATTED ON ME”.
Ripped your posters off the wall, and destroyed that shrine.
At this time, all I can think was “REVENGE WILL BE MINE”
In a coked out rage, I slit my wrist and shattered the mirror.
Blood spilling everywhere but my mind was clearer.
Then I finally found out what I needed to do.
“IF I CAN’T BE WITH YOU, NOBODY WILL HAVE YOU!”
Days, nights, weeks and months have passed by.
Every night I curl up into a ball and cry.
Watching TV and the news said you were havin a premier in town.
“This would be the perfect place, to shut this ? down.
808’s and heartbreak is the perfect album for this.
Because at the end of the night I’m call it quits.
So I waited in the crowd, waiting for you to pass by
You looked so beautiful it brought a tear to my eye.
Then I had that vision of you kissing that Irish ? ,
Thinking “its now or never, do u have the guts”
Heart is pounding, sweating profusely getting nervous
I’m having 2nd thoughts “does she really deserve this”
The struggle within was becoming too much,
“? it, we belong together so I’m taking out the both of us”
Jumped the guard rail, and pointed the gun at you.
Took a couple shots at security then showed off my tattoo
I told her please forgive me, then squeezed off into her forehead.
That way I knew for certain she was dead.
I dropped to my knees and prayed to ? .
Then pulled the trigger on myself so we’d never be apart.
Comments
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Wow. What a dope concept! I love reading words that bring visuals to mind. mmm, the rhythm is a bit off in and out..
example: I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
Always blowing you kiss when I see you on TV.
But in my heart you know u should be here with me.
I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
Always blowing you kisses when I see you on TV.
But in my heart you know u should be here with me.
by adding kisses it completes the rhythm better sounding in my head or when I speak it out loud. -
BRRRR! lol, shouts out to the kidd on dis one.......
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charlie_danger wrote: »Wow. What a dope concept! I love reading words that bring visuals to mind. mmm, the rhythm is a bit off in and out..
example: I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
Always blowing you kiss when I see you on TV.
But in my heart you know u should be here with me.
I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
Always blowing you kisses when I see you on TV.
But in my heart you know u should be here with me.
by adding kisses it completes the rhythm better sounding in my head or when I speak it out loud.
thanks for the feedback..i'll make sure to remember that next time. -
Dam Kidd,
This jawn right here is very well written and gives me an image, a clear one at that..
the word play was on point with the rhyme scheme and I enjoyed reading this so keep em' comin :-)
Btw, you should go drop a few words in the thread I created, "Why do you write" and contribute to as why do you write..
And thanks for sharing and I hope to read more! -
Be quiet,it is important
