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Deeluxe
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I was really taken back by the caliber of emcees in the community, I usually make fun records for my kids. But everyone once in a while I feel like I have what it takes to take a beat I normally would use and run a verse through it. So i ask you to read and there is a listen link at the bottom, to this song and let me know does this qualify as hip-hop?
1 note this was written and recorded today so the chorus wouldn't be done by me, I put it as a place holder.
http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?64208-Money-or-My-Soul
http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?65019-If-It-Keeps-On-Raining
Its time to let it go
Say what u want but I am a force and won't be dismissed
So make ur sly remarks but when ur ready to see me one on one u know where I am....im in the beats.
Im here and in 3 minutes u will hear what im feeling
No games or radio play I see that im ceiling
The fans are all in they spin and lose millions
of brain cells listening to garbage thru forced feedings
Im done with these heathens oh yeah ur done singing
U say ur surreal if u repeat it u believe it
Im a realest one of the realest to ever ? this
Microphone on a quest to envoke feelings
To masses in the physical world atlas (at last)
There's a talent whose image u can see right past
To the future he's rippin get him a suture
He's wide open, eyes shut but he seems to know u too
Are sick of the lets pretend to have beef
To sell more records just to make us legends in the end
Im calling out all if ur done with the hype
And want the real back then im speaking to yall
It seems that its over
This cold war is over
No more faking over
The real is here and I told ya
You treat it like a game so all u ever do is power up
Collecting coins to get to the end
But im ongoing not telepathic but still all knowing
What I say rings true to the man that is still growing
Inside of his own skin I say it so I own it
The lyrical miracle gets on the beat and pwns it
uh like michael jackson and the world trade
I bring change and destruction until the day I grave
Myself into history, silly me let it be
Greatness isn't earned it was given to me
By me, everything I want I go after until I see
The only thing needed is for me 2 be me and
That's a father to my figures, a brother to my sisters
A son to my parents and a homie to my ?
A voice to my listeners im glad that u hear when
I speak from my heart so its heart felt when I say that
If time stood still could u ever deal
With the fact that most rappers are ill
Not in the sense of dope lyricists
But doped up mc's that make u sick
That's how I feel when the situation should inspire greatness
Now its imitation of the fakers who's the fakest
That's a toss up arrow roulette u need to grow up
Hold up the more I take in the more I throw up
I draw a line in the sand look at the center of my hand
Fingers meet the middle put it in the air
If you follow suit then equations will compute
The variables always change but it change what's needed you
Have taken the first step the long journey is up next
Even though I say it clearly read in between the subtext
im so exit never made it in the entrance
Close the door on d. dex but here you all witness that
Its Over Song.mp3 - 5.3 Mb
1 note this was written and recorded today so the chorus wouldn't be done by me, I put it as a place holder.
http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?64208-Money-or-My-Soul
http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?65019-If-It-Keeps-On-Raining
Its time to let it go
Say what u want but I am a force and won't be dismissed
So make ur sly remarks but when ur ready to see me one on one u know where I am....im in the beats.
Im here and in 3 minutes u will hear what im feeling
No games or radio play I see that im ceiling
The fans are all in they spin and lose millions
of brain cells listening to garbage thru forced feedings
Im done with these heathens oh yeah ur done singing
U say ur surreal if u repeat it u believe it
Im a realest one of the realest to ever ? this
Microphone on a quest to envoke feelings
To masses in the physical world atlas (at last)
There's a talent whose image u can see right past
To the future he's rippin get him a suture
He's wide open, eyes shut but he seems to know u too
Are sick of the lets pretend to have beef
To sell more records just to make us legends in the end
Im calling out all if ur done with the hype
And want the real back then im speaking to yall
It seems that its over
This cold war is over
No more faking over
The real is here and I told ya
You treat it like a game so all u ever do is power up
Collecting coins to get to the end
But im ongoing not telepathic but still all knowing
What I say rings true to the man that is still growing
Inside of his own skin I say it so I own it
The lyrical miracle gets on the beat and pwns it
uh like michael jackson and the world trade
I bring change and destruction until the day I grave
Myself into history, silly me let it be
Greatness isn't earned it was given to me
By me, everything I want I go after until I see
The only thing needed is for me 2 be me and
That's a father to my figures, a brother to my sisters
A son to my parents and a homie to my ?
A voice to my listeners im glad that u hear when
I speak from my heart so its heart felt when I say that
If time stood still could u ever deal
With the fact that most rappers are ill
Not in the sense of dope lyricists
But doped up mc's that make u sick
That's how I feel when the situation should inspire greatness
Now its imitation of the fakers who's the fakest
That's a toss up arrow roulette u need to grow up
Hold up the more I take in the more I throw up
I draw a line in the sand look at the center of my hand
Fingers meet the middle put it in the air
If you follow suit then equations will compute
The variables always change but it change what's needed you
Have taken the first step the long journey is up next
Even though I say it clearly read in between the subtext
im so exit never made it in the entrance
Close the door on d. dex but here you all witness that
Its Over Song.mp3 - 5.3 Mb