Ce Jota vs Run This Town

C.Melendez
C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
edited October 2010 in Lyrical Executions
ok...Imma go ahead and post my verse(he responded to my call out...so did deeluxe...I'll battle him too if he wants)
the rules is 16 bars and best of 5??? votes or however the other votes was ran.

...DR in the building

Im from Santiago, that town only a few ? make it in
and if a ? *run this town* its b/c a few ? chasing him
or he's fetching me a cheesecake, and a couple pastelitos
He'll have handshakes when he see me,not b/c we amigos
but b/c he got fear in him,cuz he knows that Im evil
Even *Dr.Conrad* prefer me on the *mic*,cuz he knows that Im lethal
I know yall tired of the "mike" lines,used too many times alread(y)
Not beating a dead horse,just making sure that its dead
He'll prob talk tough about how he hold full clips
Make me grab the *heat* like Lebron, Im not sold on the *? *
Keep the *Rose ande ? *, u acting like a real coward in here
Too late to offer peace treaties, bringing me *flowers and beer*
Imma get him outta here, just bare with me
watch me *clown* him,brought the *circus and fair* with me
U dropped the *ball* at this *show* we need a new *juggler*
Imma put a knife to his throat, he'll need a new juggular

Comments

  • RunThisTown
    RunThisTown Members Posts: 12
    edited September 2010
    Just saw this. Sounds good! I am in class but I will write as soon as I get home. I'm dropping before dinner! Lol.
  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited September 2010
    aight good look...maybe we can get this back on its feet
  • RunThisTown
    RunThisTown Members Posts: 12
    edited September 2010
    Honestly, I forgot about this. I'm dropping now though.

    It's my first time battling, "rattle"-him up with the snake knife jagged-edge/
    Even if we're waxing-it, I'm hatching-him to beat him with the bat-again/
    LE's getting mad-at-him for calling everybody out with the wackest-rhymes/
    And anything you do is only half-of-mine, eat this maggot,-I'm taking out his rabbit-spine/
    Sounding more ? , slapping-eyes, than when this ? -cries/
    Took his drugs and his girl and he thought he "had-a-dime"/
    Asking-why this happened-I don't know, I'm just killing-this, the illest-diss/
    His feelings-went dead, and tried to get me but he's still-amiss (a miss)/
    Bruce Willis-him and "Die Hard" by cutting him with "sharp lines"-barb wire-scars/
    My-guitar on his head'll make him "feel the music crazy" like a wired-star/
    Should've never messed-with-too-sick of an emcee, the best-to-do-it/
    Cuz I deflect-and-boot this reject-and-shoot-him with with electrocution/
    Yep,-I-do-it, packed-with-multis, he was money until I pimped his ? and took his pack-of-? /
    We in the limo in black-wit-beauties looking bad-n-snooty, Jota driving us peeking in the back-like-fruity/
    Take-him-to-jail, he likes chubbys that are breaking-the-scale/
    But has no street status and couldn't "spit-weight" being ? making it hail/
  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited September 2010
    good drop...don't know if they voting or not
  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited September 2010
    look liked a punchline vs multis battle lol
  • RunThisTown
    RunThisTown Members Posts: 12
    edited September 2010
    Dude, be quiet and let the voters talk LOL. Don't hate. Good luck to you. Maybe we can rematch no matter who wins.
  • Gnominal
    Gnominal Members Posts: 7
    edited September 2010
    idk why no one's voting, but...

    my vote's for runthistown. both had a pretty strong showing, clever punchlines on both sides. it just seemed like run went harder. his punchlines maybe weren't as clever but they were to the point and at least as good, and he packed that ? full of so many rhymes, i nutted. the lines are kinda long but you're probably feeling it with some kind of sick double-time flow in parts, so yeah great good work.

    both were great, i hope you do a full 5 rounds like you planned

    aside, i'm new on here and i'd like to get involved in this ? , so anyone wanna battle... yeah i'm game
  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited September 2010
    1-0 run this town ..appreciate the votes
  • Gnominal
    Gnominal Members Posts: 7
    edited September 2010
    too bad no one else voted, i dont' always know what i'm talking about
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited October 2010
    ima go with ce jota very stong but last 4 bars were meh
    run this town had multies butnot all of them hit the spot
    plus ce jota bars were way stronger even though i thing i heard that beat the horse line in a battle before

    my vote is for ce jota