ItzGravitation vs thedesolateone
Options
thedesolateone
Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
for today
16 lines each
no bringing up sexuality
judged by the first five post with an explanation of their decision
must have at least 60 post to judge
16 lines each
no bringing up sexuality
judged by the first five post with an explanation of their decision
must have at least 60 post to judge
Comments
-
I'm going to slaughter you first of all.
Second of all why not set it to today or Wednesday?
Last but not least try to keep it civil.
btw Its ItzGravitation -
ItzGravitation wrote: »I'm going to slaughter you first of all.
Second of all why not set it to today or Wednesday?
Last but not least try to keep it civil.
btw Its ItzGravitation
because ill will have more computer access then
how bout 2 rounds 16 lines at most each by thursday at eleven o'clock?
what do you mean by civil exactly?feel free to add rules that are clear -
thedesolateone wrote: »because ill will have more computer access then
how bout 2 rounds 16 lines at most each by thursday at eleven o'clock?
what do you mean by civil exactly?feel free to add rules that are clear
dont bring up my sexuality as ammo.
It happens often o here.
And i have access to my computer 24/7.
Ijust leave sometimes.
We cn start now really. -
Make it 1 round only please. People will be more willing to vote then.
-
one round then t/s?
-
ItzGravitation wrote: »one round then t/s?
ok lets go -
these rhymes are lead when they gravitate to you
itll blow you back like low gravity
anyplace but in the L.E. is where you rather be
then in the O.R. with physicians tinkering in your cavity
that the blow did to you
your not lyrical your bars are a subject of ridicule
your lyrics arent anything but rhetorical and far from literal
im too far advance for your infantile wordplay
that will have you drooling i should of brung a bib for you
i know you just looking for something to bite
but these flows i produce dont put them in your mouth
ill have to call the poison center have ambulances at your house
the gravity of the situation will raise the mercury
after this lyrical execution they may charge me with first degree
if i catch you spitting any of my lines
im gonna treat this ic like my home and there's a burglary -
your turn sixteen lines .
-
well i have about a twenty min before im gone today where is your bars?
-
You a clown, gravity dont push a ? back like that, it just holds a ? down.
You could never hold me rapping but i"ll let you hold my crown, And the flow is so solid but still you can drown.
I follow haters guns flash, its Mr Paparazzi. They go call you skin head like a Neo ? .
I push a ? line back like a bad barber molest you like a bad father you go be one sad daughter.
I cant son you, you ? , female dog.
I do Knuckle Echidna, Sonic the hedgehog.
We can go blow for blow, flow for flow, pound for pound
With Super Sonic heaters bullets travel at the speed of sound.
And I'm a COG soldier make the gears of war go round.
I smell ? i'm a dog, bloodhound.
The king has been crowned, I astound, them goons surround
And like Chris Brown I take you down, we aint on common ground.
? it I edit mine,i should change a couple lines
But i just keep adding ? . call that ? multiplying.
I give a ? if you vote for me, i aint lying.
I rap around these wack nggas like an ivy vine.
Who the ? out they mind defying gravity?
Dont you know for that i give you a raise, no salary -
ok should the votes begin?are you done?
-
sure. why not
-
ItzGravitation wrote: »sure. why not
ok its on then and official -
Really wasn't much of a battle.
thedesolateone took it.
Pretty much outclassed itzgravitation at every angle. desolate's flow was kinda funny at first, mostly cuz of the first bars. but for the most part the long lines worked. Pretty much standard type bars, but consistency, flow, complexity, and maturity did it.
itsgravitation pretty much sounded like you breezed through this. Simple rhymes, pretty much paled in comparison. You gotta insult dude a bit more, or have some harder-hitting punchlines, but that wasn't cuttin it.
Final answer is desolate -
The Smooth One wrote: »Really wasn't much of a battle.
thedesolateone took it.
Pretty much outclassed itzgravitation at every angle. desolate's flow was kinda funny at first, mostly cuz of the first bars. but for the most part the long lines worked. Pretty much standard type bars, but consistency, flow, complexity, and maturity did it.
itsgravitation pretty much sounded like you breezed through this. Simple rhymes, pretty much paled in comparison. You gotta insult dude a bit more, or have some harder-hitting punchlines, but that wasn't cuttin it.
Final answer is desolate
what stood out to you then? -
And the name similarity is noted, but I'm sure it's understood there's nothing else connecting me and des but the name. Just voting. Figured I'd say that..
-
ItzGravitation wrote: »what stood out to you then?
From which of yall? -
ok dude changed his flow up after i put my verse down.
i win cuz dude cheated.
dude couldnt take it so he ad to try way harder. -
Really? Damn..
-
It says he edited 40 minutes ago, you dropped 26 minutes ago.. So nah.
-
regardless dude changed his verse.
I went after dude so for him to change his verse while i type mine is a violation.
I win dude. -
these rhymes are lead when they gravitate to you
itll blow you back like low gravity
anyplace but in the L.E. is where you rather be
then in the O.R. with physicians tinkering in your cavity
that the blow did to you
your not lyrical your bars are a subject of ridicule
your lyrics arent anything but rhetorical and far from literal
im too far advance for your infantile wordplay
that will have you drooling i should of brung a bib for you It's harder-hitting cuz you proved it when you dropped your verse
i know you just looking for something to bite
but these flows i produce dont put them in your mouth
ill have to call the poison center have ambulances at your house
the gravity of the situation will raise the mercury pretty decent use of wordplay... Mercury in therometers... The planet Mercury has more gravity...
after this lyrical execution they may charge me with first degree
if i catch you spitting any of my lines
im gonna treat this ic like my home and there's a burglary
Like I said, overall it was pretty standard, nothing mind-blowing from des, but he showed a better understanding of everything rap-wise. Flow, syllable formation, word choice, etc. -
ItzGravitation wrote: »ok dude changed his flow up after i put my verse down.
i win cuz dude cheated.
dude couldnt take it so he ad to try way harder.
i aint change ? see there are records stupid
i even went by your rules and didnt address your sexuality and i spit right away and i went first and you tryna play me smh -
@itzgrav...
I guess... lol... seems a lil flaw on your part. He might have "changed" his verse. But he didn't see your verse. And he obviously ain't change it that much, because you fed off his first line. You just sound whiny. Whatever he had before couldn't have been that much worse. -
thedesolateone wrote: »i aint change ? see there are records stupid
i even went by your rules and didnt address your sexuality and i spit right away and i went first and you tryna play me smh
na dude.
you stopped at that bib line.
then as i responded you added that other ? .
which cused me to not put forth the full effort.
I'm no fool dude.
I read your rap three times before i responded.
It changed as i typed mine.
