Delicate Whispers

bman536

I delicately whisper to erase all fear, telling her everything just for a tear. As I open my jar my smile stretches far. What seems as though a minuscule drop, only I behold the heavens it unfolds, only I envision the thoughts it ignites. One transparent drip cradles everything that I fen. As I tighten the jar, I am stifled by a vast sea of emotions. Transfixed, I sit motionless, the vibrant waves echo through my skull; I num. Wave after eccentric wave I straighten them out to discover the pave, they crackle confirming my isolation. Absorbed by this exuberant surge of sound, I frown not knowing full why. Shadows darken as clouds approach, I know what comes next. Letting the thought dangle, I pause to blink; I awake to the thing I sought to take; a delicate stroke. Caught by her stare in my peripherals I see a jar, she smiles.

Tupacfan

Wow,

This piece was nice, loved the metaphors.. The word play..

I apprecite this piece this morning..

Thanks for sharing.. And I hope to see you stick around and share your poems with us..

bman536

Thank you! Yep this has to be one of my favorite ones. It took me about an hour to write because once I wrote the first sentence the whole poem flashed before my eyes, but the hard part was finding the right words to describe the vast amount of emotions I was feeling. (I was in jail at the time) Lol I pat myself on the back every time I read it, I can't help but smile.

Tupacfan

Your most welcome!

Glad to hear your proud of yourself with this poem..

I always do the same thing too, on the poems I really put work in, and spilled my heart into.. So I can relate.

And feedbck is always good too.. To further progress our writing.

Well I hope u stick around here..

Peace!