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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    Freestyle like sperm whale and
    Change thin like shape muscles
    Rap well, good as word play
    Spider web, I put the punchlines
    Pretty well, spigot, spiffy, the sky freestyle
    Is good like loving heaven, with lovely lord
    Style like taoism phone dial!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
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    Touchstone like touchline
    Touche riding out like Ghost-rider
    From Marvel, freestyling on korn
    Instrumentals, owning hotlines like touchdowns
    Tour de force, teaching middle eastern education
    Flow about something that's worth discussing, Gods
    Passes the conversation in languages makes positive mind controlling!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    Clients like cliffhanger
    Climactic, aware of climates
    Clearance, makes example
    Of fragment, people want to
    Hear that's new exclusive
    So we them the freestyle of anger
    Foyer, we change minds like lawyer
    Gets stronger as advance like stranger
    Fire in sky, X-files, see what's happens
    Battery Durcel backpack with ? we last longer!
  • Zander
    Zander Members Posts: 5
    edited August 2011
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    Hello. Hi there, the Double O is checking in

    Mid west kid, rims high, dark tints, blunt lit

    not givin a single ? , never game 2 ?

    a whole bag full of care, that i just don't gift

    stupid dumb swagger, on point like the fish

    trapping selling steeze, freshness, 2 legit

    and i always keep a full tank, maxed out, real ?

    always keep some bump in the trunk for a bad freak ?

    and i only bang cudi, bone thugz, and chip the rip.

    thats who i is , slabed up, we good

    ray-bans, snap back, candy colors, like i should

    grind set on ace hood, steady sniffin out the green

    i cant get enough of Franklin, a ? greenback fiend.

    fresh and off the dome,you can call me mr clean

    a sweet young kid with a bad streak of mean

    a clean cut gentleman who is loved by all the birds

    but a head busting goon a menace to the nerds
    .
    haters all talk ? , but i am deaf as grandpa to there words

    i never took advice, never fell for any girl

    and never rocked a mic, but i know ya boys a hidden pearl

    swag on some differentness, ? making up these words

    im AIDS to you weak rappers, you will never find a cure

    before i end this mayne listen close, your full attention

    give it to zander hes words might be a blessin

    there are three rules to be noted written and believed in

    if you come thru my hood, the east side of Cleveland

    first of we the coldest since the homie K.I.D,

    second no one colder so dont you ever try and be

    and lastly zander killed this, leave em hangin, no apologies.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    Zander wrote: »
    Hello. Hi there, the Double O is checking in

    Mid west kid, rims high, dark tints, blunt lit

    not givin a single ? , never game 2 ?

    a whole bag full of care, that i just don't gift

    stupid dumb swagger, on point like the fish

    trapping selling steeze, freshness, 2 legit

    and i always keep a full tank, maxed out, real ?

    always keep some bump in the trunk for a bad freak ?

    and i only bang cudi, bone thugz, and chip the rip.

    thats who i is , slabed up, we good

    ray-bans, snap back, candy colors, like i should

    grind set on ace hood, steady sniffin out the green

    i cant get enough of Franklin, a ? greenback fiend.

    fresh and off the dome,you can call me mr clean

    a sweet young kid with a bad streak of mean

    a clean cut gentleman who is loved by all the birds

    but a head busting goon a menace to the nerds
    .
    haters all talk ? , but i am deaf as grandpa to there words

    i never took advice, never fell for any girl

    and never rocked a mic, but i know ya boys a hidden pearl

    swag on some differentness, ? making up these words

    im AIDS to you weak rappers, you will never find a cure

    before i end this mayne listen close, your full attention

    give it to zander hes words might be a blessin

    there are three rules to be noted written and believed in

    if you come thru my hood, the east side of Cleveland

    first of we the coldest since the homie K.I.D,

    second no one colder so dont you ever try and be

    and lastly zander killed this, leave em hangin, no apologies.

    Nice flow with rhymes keep yo talent going great job!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    Team or tag team like whoop there it is!
    Helix like when all hell breaks lose
    Then ? snatches world makes it good again
    Imagin bunch freestyles at da booth
    Talking wreckless, helmet with da tooth
    You try to sound like ja rule, we trying
    To see if let's us freestyle at da cruise
    Helmsman shipping the cruise
    Neva losing a clue unless we get rich
    With flow, a nice show, will excite the crowds
    And watches we won't lose, becuz anything
    We freestyle talks about love ? you will
    Neva lose, let the bible be your favorite cruise to read
    And everyone thinks ya very coool!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    Don't even sweat ya be
    Back on ya feet like
    Yesterday forget it
    Keep flowing more
    You too will sound
    Like professional some day
    Neva quit on talent you use
    It as game for school
    A cool way talk but in
    Freestyle conversation
    What eva I said in past
    Is just practice, nothing
    Serious, just having fun
    Cheer up, tha only beef
    Is steak, or hamburgers
    If ya didn't like my lines
    Or my rhymes, forgive me
    My poems are going to shine
    I know it can sound corny
    But practice makes perfect
    Can be soft once then hard
    On the next, dispenser
    We neva know who's testing
    So why sleep? I just ha ha
    No offense, I flow to see
    How far are we going to go
    Disparate to disparity
    Just have fun, follow ?
    One day you'll be pro!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    Yo yo yo
    Check us out
    Yo yo yo
    Must quit being lazy
    Cuz anyone can do dis
    I'll use this excuse
    For a homework purpose
    Beforehand, dna
    Explaining everything goes
    On class, how to get better grades
    Focus is to pray
    Work great, look smart
    Get their back like some diversion
    Diversity, besides hiding secrets
    This is smart version call it stupid or dum
    The flow, whateva ya divide, we can still run
    A great stye lord for fun, I just quit hating
    Is wack if we mad all the time, alway solving nothing
    Love the lord, polo sport smell, garden floweres
    Angles heaven great love no fronting!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    Rock on or rock flow
    This isn't woodstock
    But gathering together
    Forget wasting time
    Don't be to cold
    Like winter weather
    To greedy, forget being spoil
    Riding whips, fly like feathers
    Rock on or flow on, share on
    That's why we flow for!
    Dumpling no dunce, dune
    Forget being in dungeon
    Heaven on earth loves you
    Like a flow on!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    Stimulating while others hating
    ? for the wrong things
    ? forgive us, no way we drowning
    That's problem that are important
    But who's care I'm try this clean
    Version again, ha ha I'm back again
    With a freestyle, while others stifle
    The world is beatiful, slaugherhouse
    Slaughter flow, my style is charm
    Like a go light, don't mess me up
    Its a freestyle, back to school
    Where's the scan test, let's get this A+
    Starting, scandalous scandalizeing
    While back on our holy spirite
    While others freestyling, keep it flowing!
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2011
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    keep going for the gusto Love yal!!!
  • salamerican1
    salamerican1 Members Posts: 714 ✭✭
    edited August 2011
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    *ignorant MC* on

    aigint mayn check check mu*uckas aint know mayn
    real ish mayn word y'all aint ready ugh huh yeah

    I ? skulls
    other than that i confuse actual
    ways to pass time as tactical
    ways to make you think practical
    drugs are bad mommy says
    overeatin' overpraying same ? you pile of space
    in this life refs making blind calls
    concious dead and the mind's gone
    got nothing but friends to snipe on
    is life really a gift?
    or seconds to make forever lasting deals then quit
  • salamerican1
    salamerican1 Members Posts: 714 ✭✭
    edited August 2011
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    little ? with all they swag
    you can't brag once you in a body bag
    my ? goes to the party in drag
    and ? more chicks than i ever had
    ? my head it makes me sad
    If it dressed up it'd be in plad
    with a rollex talkin bout how he knows best
    as for i'd ignore it and ? him through my fore head
    most ? love life oh how it's gorgeous
    Idk if I'm growing or getting more dead
    rapping tacky used to make me happy
    now I'm criticizing everything even before it reaches my damn speech
    or ability to speak it ? prolly before i think it
    but it's okay i say to put life in it's simplest
    way i can put it cuz it has to be
    won't be grateful till ? 's calling me ur majesty
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2011
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    cheea....keeps it going!

    im glad u guys are repeating..thats whats up!

    this is thee thread to spit off topic or to get off that writers block!

    keep writtin and also start adding new vocabs as well...u can say a lot things in different ways...its millions of words out there..impleament new ones and incorporate that into ur writing.
  • salamerican1
    salamerican1 Members Posts: 714 ✭✭
    edited August 2011
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    Have you ever been a cheerleader?
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    cheea....keeps it going!

    im glad u guys are repeating..thats whats up!

    this is thee thread to spit off topic or to get off that writers block!

    keep writtin and also start adding new vocabs as well...u can say a lot things in different ways...its millions of words out there..impleament new ones and incorporate that into ur writing.

    Thanks Tupacfan for the advices, new vocab is excellent way to keep a nice verse, I'm trying to make strong punchlines so my verse is strong
    And have great rhyme words when you read it sounds like twista or bone thugs n harmony..because I want to learn how freestyle fast
    Without studdering, sound nice if I ever do an audio track with someone...But keep trying and takes notes..do know any great concepts or topics talk about? It would be a great idea on our freestyle, a better way to become more creative. Thanks once again.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    I dissmiss all your method mistakes
    There's no way attacking, the flow is cake
    This isn't my battle rap flow, get off the steak
    I uses to curse, now I have become Mr. Clean
    To get my respect, I'm like Trick daddy love the kids
    While other chester or preveted rappest
    But don't worry like entrepreneur from a different planet
    Powerpoint , become interactive, using mental connections
    Causing forgivness live it like journal style, know to be basic
    No losing we still got this like we winning default of respond
    And become more with the lord to stay focus!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited August 2011
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    Messing , no stressing on da brain
    We got blessing, resting words of slang
    Crews, students, singles, are cool in da gang
    Mangs these word of verbs, ain't da same
    People quit acting same, they stop claiming
    To learns da names, names maintain, so we don't
    Have to become insane, names like Billy, Tom
    Stan, don't be mean a thang, its just name
    To pick our nick name, so we can have cool freestlyes
    That drop like rain, this isn't nothing insane
    We just encroaching verse that are maintane
    We are in our lane, flow like encyclopedia is not insane!
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2011
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    Have you ever been a cheerleader?

    lol, that was hella random! but yes I have back in the day.. more than a decade ago hahahaha..
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2011
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    love yal wrote: »
    Thanks Tupacfan for the advices, new vocab is excellent way to keep a nice verse, I'm trying to make strong punchlines so my verse is strong
    And have great rhyme words when you read it sounds like twista or bone thugs n harmony..because I want to learn how freestyle fast
    Without studdering, sound nice if I ever do an audio track with someone...But keep trying and takes notes..do know any great concepts or topics talk about? It would be a great idea on our freestyle, a better way to become more creative. Thanks once again.

    your welcome bruh!

    and that's right, implement new words, new verbs, and it will sound good, and ppl be looking at the dictionary like Whaaaa, hahahaha... that's cool... keep on keepin!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited September 2011
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    your welcome bruh!

    and that's right, implement new words, new verbs, and it will sound good, and ppl be looking at the dictionary like Whaaaa, hahahaha... that's cool... keep on keepin!

    Thanks Tupacfan that great idea...implement new words, and new verbs. Looking through many dictionary is great..or any poet dictionary ways to rhyme better?..I'm keep trying to be more educational with interesting messages that's keep wanna keep freestyle alive!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited September 2011
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    Freestyle amazing to ahead
    Cuzing cool stories to say
    My flow reminds pen vs. Led
    I think school is very cool
    Rhyming quick is prettyy cool
    Useing comatose a words are even cooler
    Combat mix with combustion
    Block with defense before the act of burining
    You heard, wheather we flow to combo or a nerd
    First comes first can get a reward like you deserve it
    Word for word, nomatter what lifes is great, belive in ?
    And heaven on yo turf will be tha world, love ? 's world!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited September 2011
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    Forgive us what we say
    Sometimes we lie
    To get ourself through hell
    Our flow can be hard as a shell
    Or soft as a good heart to love
    Hey noone is perfect! We try to keep
    Ourself positive, so we can only
    Look up to ? , their lots of
    This and that, being well eduacted
    Is the chosen way, after a while
    Chill like chortle or choreography
    Flow like chow mein or cholera
    Choleric dentify like watch yo cholesterol
    Still loving ? you loving yo styling!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited September 2011
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    Thanks everyone for freestyling, everyone keep doing a great job!....I'm still working on some hot freestyles, I'll be back to dropp something, stay up!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited September 2011
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    Yo, everybody talks that
    Sometime we have to be soft
    And be that, some of us
    Say, not me, we are like fighters
    We should neva get picked on
    What's up with that?
    Whats bully? School she! School he
    Style like Parker, we punked them
    Like Spider-man, laughed like animals
    Lmao...like ha.ha..lol..whut a day to those
    Animals or cave people who called us fake
    And told us we were soft like cake
    And then we found out they were fragile
    Like their dandruff ....they like to break like flakes
    Forgiven for forgiven, you probly get ? in yo rhymes!
    When we owe too much, we think we running out of memory
    Saying we blind, can even fill an application...saying we need a job!
    Lol..Lmao....play out a game who can fill the most application
    Over million in a day saying we ain't playing
    We need to work soon as possible
    We don't care money on our mind
    Play the game, who can get the most jobs!
    Come on let's top a billion air, let's rhymes
    Make cash that stack like wall of china or
    Make cash that stack tall like building! We rich
    Break that roots of evil, what's so hard finding job
    While everybody is being threating! Come on life is fare
    We care!