INSTRUMENTAL KEYSTYLE:NEW YEAR EDITION *beat: Kno-if you cry (instrumental)*

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VSOP
VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
edited September 2011 in Body SLAM
ride to it

I'll up a few more random beats if yall want somethin to get you outta that rut and off that writers block

let me know
http://usershare.net/jv39u85dv50c

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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited January 2011
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    I'mma write something to this.. just let the beat marinate for a minute..
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    I'mma write something to this.. just let the beat marinate for a minute..

    still marinatin or is it cooked yet?!? lol
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    Recliner dining
    lying trying to make up excuses
    abuse adolescent beating him up
    making mistakes a case of a simple made up ? up
    lucky enough to stand tough on two feet
    but get knocked down and the beat is on repeat
    feeling defeat as I wait to see if this life has meaningful reasonings
    greetings turn to lingering responses
    charity becomes a judgement excuse
    this is beyond made up this is reality session 101
    done sitting up and want revolution but fight for what
    i'm in the cut lounging
    witnessing life like a speeding formula 1
    trying to make it to the finish line resembling pearly gates
    but fate plays never too lately
    causing me to lose gas, engine on countdown, and tank on E
    godly is there a pit team that can hold me down while the evil shall greet me
    pass me by
    need to get back on my own two
    shave and hit the gas and endure the session until grand prix is through
    and i see the checkered flag waving at me to come through
    number 1 I be and my past is the rival
    the team is destiny and reality is present
    welcome to a new beginning of character
    champion of the indys
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited January 2011
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    VSOP wrote: »
    still marinatin or is it cooked yet?!? lol

    in the process of cooking up summin marevlous LOL.
  • deaththreats
    deaththreats Members Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    Solid bars.....nice metaphors and wordplay
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited September 2011
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    I never did write to this beat.....

    writing use to come so easily to me lol
    if you cry
    you die
    while you cry
    you lie
    in a bed messed up by an ex toys r us kid
    blacklights of blue ?
    vodka and redbull in a Voltron thermos
    ants crawling over dead gerbils
    curtains closed
    over dosed off backward Ozzy O
    hatin everyone like a ? slogan
    chosen for a portion of frozen potion of Kool Aid and rat poison
    I am mad buoyant
    I somehow stay afloat over the flat line
    chillin
    on the wave lengths of a childrens empty wishes
    fishin for love from a sea of unwanted me
    luckily
    I've caught my dreams
    flappin in the breeze
    suddenly they bleed
    ? up from piranha's teeth
    poured into an ocean from chromosomes of Jesus


    they stay.......
    ................praying to be filleted another day