LE Tournament #1 ROUND ONE - Legend24 versus chriskyte410717
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Legend24 versus chriskyte410717E
- Check in by Wednesday, January 19, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
- It's cool to drop your verses before the check in due date.
- Verses are due by Sunday, January 23, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
- Voting will end on Saturday, January 29, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
- Verses: Mandatory 16 lines. Only one round. Voting can begin anytime after both verses are posted.
- 3 votes to 0 is a knockout.
- 5 votes first wins or the most votes by the end date.
- 50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
- All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
- Don't vote sway. No comments by either battler in the thread besides "uppin for votes" and/or the current score and no comments about votes or your opponents verse. Take criticism like a man. Everyone has their own opinion. Use the Predictions/? Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread.
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Check in. Got class in a bit so I'll read the rules and make some predictions in the other thread when I get back later today.
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check in............
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aight imma go first then........................
im so hot, i leave the sun (son) behind like deadbeat fathers
? worship me like the based ? , bet ill ? your daughter
legend 24 i hope you ready for this lyrical manslaughter
cause you about to see defeat (the feet) like rex ryan with a cam corder
im feeling like the underdog since im not known around these parts
introduce you to my nike boots, bet they tear your jaw apart
baltimore representer and im far from a ?
know for killin mikes (mics) on some conrad murray ?
im starvin for my shot like a ? sharp shooter
? always hating when your shadow brighter than their future
but i still keep it me, shoutout to kahled im a winner
i know a ? that will suck my wood until her tounge catch a splinter
i guess legend on his drizzy ? , represent t dot
that blue jay will look like a cardinal when its filled with them red dots
but good look to you sir i hope you do your thing
just be happy that these ? held my skills to only 16 -
this what im talking about b!....yo ledge! come with it
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ok ok ok we got some gangsta rappas mayne im gettin scarred!! legendz u better come wit it boo boo
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Its getting hawt in here!!
Come with it legend.. My fellow poet! -
*waiting patiently*
*makes a sandwhich and watches nbatv until further notice* -
I'll have my verse posted by tonight.
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This dude representin B-more, I call that a safe haven
Cross the northern border I'll do to you what the Steelers did the Ravens
I peeped your music duke and shed a tear for them wasted beats
Gangsta ain't your pedigree, homeless is the closest you come to streets
Even with the name Kite, Chris you still ain't fly bro
The only air time you get is them first round exits on Idol
Sellin discs as weed trays, giving BJs to DJs
Offering a facelift to Jay-Z still wouldn't get your CD played
It's pretty brave of you to even show yourself around here
Especially when my pen's ink murders you like what happened to Ja Rule's career
And with a face like that, I'd stick to rhyming where you can't be seen
From behind the scenes, with a mask on, like the guy from Scream
This dude ain't legit, he fake as spray-on tans on Jersey Shore
Glowing orange like the Orioles tryin to say he reppin Baltimore
It says "Legend in the making" when I checked your profile on your IC page
I love that you wanna be me, but you can't, this Legend's already made.
Solid battle fam... good luck. -
so is ? gonna vote or what lol
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look like its gonna be a difficult decision
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? this is a hard one you guys both came off hella il...if ima vote though and i really do not want to cause like i said they both came off hard ima have to go wit legends only becuase his medaphores were a lil bit more deeper than chris.. and his word play was a bit more versatile..ayo this one was great though good job both of you!
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thedesolateone wrote: »look like its gonna be a difficult decision
Yea it is.... They both came with it.. -
but lemme cut to the chase.
Both of ya'll were great okay.. You guys both have many lines that just stuck..I felt that chris came hard in the beginning.. And then towards the end, it was like a laffy taffy gon from hard to soft.. But it was still a solid verse that he dropped.. Solid enough for Legend to come extra hard with his metaphors.. His metaphors was on point, had lyrical content, he did his homework before he came with his and I liked that..
So with that being said.. I vote for legend because he implemented word play, metaphors, and lyrical jabs.. -
The thing about chris kyte's verse is half the time he wasn't dissing Legend24 but when he was dissing him, it was really good. I really liked these lines:
im so hot, i leave the sun (son) behind like deadbeat fathers
cause you about to see defeat (the feet) like rex ryan with a cam corder
that blue jay will look like a cardinal when its filled with them red dots
And with Legend24's verse, about every line was a jab at chris. I think chris had the best line of the battle. Maybe even the best two lines but I think Legend took it barely. He was tough. It's like boxing. chris got 3 power shots in but wasn't enough to knock Legend24 out and L24 did enough jab wise to win the round. I think if chris would have focused more on L24 and spit every line directed at him, he would've got this easily but because about half his verse wasn't directed at him, he lost. It's like swinging and missing when you're not dissing with lines like:
im feeling like the underdog since im not known around these parts
baltimore representer and im far from a ?
know for killin mikes (mics) on some conrad murray ?
im starvin for my shot like a ? sharp shooter
? always hating when your shadow brighter than their future
but i still keep it me, shoutout to kahled im a winner
i know a ? that will suck my wood until her tounge catch a splinter
just be happy that these ? held my skills to only 16
Vote - Legend24. 3-0 KO. -
im not even gonna lie, im feeling like the usa team that got shafted in the olympics a while ago. to be honest i thought some of his lines were kinda ass lol. i mean if he won he won but i know i had the top three lines in the battle. i mean if you honestly think that verse was better than mine...................................congratulations son. you deserved it
Sellin discs as weed trays, giving BJs to DJs
Offering a facelift to Jay-Z still wouldn't get your CD played
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baltimore representer and im far from a ?
known for killin mikes (mics) on some conrad murray ?
okay. -
i like the killing mics on some conray murray ? but it could be set up better than the im far from a ? line
Sellin discs as weed trays, giving BJs to DJs
Offering a facelift to Jay-Z still wouldn't get your CD played-he rhymes four multis and diss jay-z while saying youll never get any play in a creative way -
thedesolateone wrote: »i like the killing mics on some conray murray ? but it could be set up better than the im far from a ? line
Sellin discs as weed trays, giving BJs to DJs
Offering a facelift to Jay-Z still wouldn't get your CD played-he rhymes four multis and diss jay-z while saying youll never get any play in a creative way
lol giving bjs to djs and giving jigga a facelift is hot..........................i can dig it.
bar for bar my ? was better hands down -
saying you giving bjs to djs is funny to me ..the jigga facelift is a bit of a stretch and is the only thing that is lacking those lines. your line isnt going in on him you are saying how you ? mics which was an ill line but in what i consider a close battle ever inch starts to count more .if legends name was mike it would be an even doper line but a better build up line would still be needed.legend bars had everything to do with you getting your cd played.
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lol i feel you.
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Good match bro.
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Good match bro.
yeah man good match son. my bad if it seemed like i was throwing a lil hissy fit lol. i take my ? serious. im not used to battelin like that. im just used to put5in a verse together -
chriskyte410717 wrote: »yeah man good match son. my bad if it seemed like i was throwing a lil hissy fit lol. i take my ? serious. im not used to battelin like that. im just used to put5in a verse together
Its all good man, I know what you mean. -
late again on the voting but to me it coulda went either way kytes was more brutal he was chopping heads but legde had for personals and more punches but it was a good battle and now chris got his 1st taste he'll be able to come stronger next tourney
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I enjoyed both verses, different styles, still reading...
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