Life We Long Fore - Forever

FOREVER92
FOREVER92 Members Posts: 455
edited February 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
Liven in this life full of drama
everyday people biten like they piranhas
for mad zeros followed by commas
even heros stick for the paper with llamaz
us congress turnt terrorsit with osama
blood for oil make you turn on yo baby mama
blood puddles leading to the paper trail
we know all to well, green turn to betrayel
friendships turn frail, find a snake in a veil
best friends put there services on sale
couldnt break the ice, in a summer time breeze
body numb to the pain while your heart on freeze

Comments

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited January 2011
    This is actually nice!

    Thanks for droppin by and sharing ur work with us..

    Peace!
  • FOREVER92
    FOREVER92 Members Posts: 455
    edited January 2011
    tupacfan wrote: »
    This is actually nice!

    Thanks for droppin by and sharing ur work with us..

    Peace!

    thanks, i just started getting into writing poetry

    i read some of your work and your real good at it
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited January 2011
    Your most welcome.

    keep writing and keep sharing with us.

    Yea, I have material here all over this jawn.. U can go digg deep further into the pages so yea.. Thanks for reading em btw.. Preciate that..
  • FOREVER92
    FOREVER92 Members Posts: 455
    edited January 2011
    tupacfan wrote: »
    Your most welcome.

    keep writing and keep sharing with us.

    Yea, I have material here all over this jawn.. U can go digg deep further into the pages so yea.. Thanks for reading em btw.. Preciate that..

    you should sign up on writing.com

    its a great way to post your stuff and have people review its a great site actually
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited January 2011
    FOREVER92 wrote: »
    you should sign up on writing.com

    its a great way to post your stuff and have people review its a great site actually

    hmmm.. Thank u for ur suggestion. I may have peep that site and check it out..

    Thnx again!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
    Like your style, read some of your stuff, and you did good in one of your battles....you are very creative, keep up the creative work.
  • FOREVER92
    FOREVER92 Members Posts: 455
    edited February 2011
    love yal wrote: »
    Like your style, read some of your stuff, and you did good in one of your battles....you are very creative, keep up the creative work.

    thank you
    its always good to hear from other people