WTE Challenge: Breath of the Month..
Tupacfan
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Poets of WTE,
Another IC mod gave me an idea a few months back, about creating breath of the month.. Thus would ential all the poets to join, and create a poem of 16 stanza's... about anything, or maybe I give a topic for ya'll to work with..Then I will have judges vote on them, and who ever with the most votes for their poems, can be breath of the month for WTE.. now the winner's poem that won, will have their poem posted as a sticky for the month that he or she won.
As for who the judges will be, I'm gonna have to speak to a few other's on here.. 'm thinking the other two wte mods, tha killa and blackrain...
YOUR THOUGHTS??????
anybody with suggestions, please don't hesitate to share em' with me.
Another IC mod gave me an idea a few months back, about creating breath of the month.. Thus would ential all the poets to join, and create a poem of 16 stanza's... about anything, or maybe I give a topic for ya'll to work with..Then I will have judges vote on them, and who ever with the most votes for their poems, can be breath of the month for WTE.. now the winner's poem that won, will have their poem posted as a sticky for the month that he or she won.
As for who the judges will be, I'm gonna have to speak to a few other's on here.. 'm thinking the other two wte mods, tha killa and blackrain...
YOUR THOUGHTS??????
anybody with suggestions, please don't hesitate to share em' with me.
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I think that's a great idea, tupacfan!! It'd definitely make me wanna write and it would also be great if we did have a topic to stick to, maybe some months we'd have a topic and others we would not.
Or the topics that you choose can be interpreted in ways, i.e. your feeling at the very moment; so that it doesn't box the writer into discussing something that they're unfamiliar with, but all the same, it's great to challenge! -
I think that's a great idea, tupacfan!! It'd definitely make me wanna write and it would also be great if we did have a topic to stick to, maybe some months we'd have a topic and others we would not.
Or the topics that you choose can be interpreted in ways, i.e. your feeling at the very moment; so that it doesn't box the writer into discussing something that they're unfamiliar with, but all the same, it's great to challenge!
Thank you for your suggestion, I will definitley give that a serious consideration Ruff Draft. Sticking with a topic would be nice. And we can change that from month to month.
I agree, it's a great challenge for all of us..
Again, thanks for your suggestions ruff draft! preciate that! -
Poets of WTE,
Another IC mod gave me an idea a few months back, about creating breath of the month.. Thus would ential all the poets to join, and create a poem of 16 stanza's... about anything, or maybe I give a topic for ya'll to work with..Then I will have judges vote on them, and who ever with the most votes for their poems, can be breath of the month for WTE.. now the winner's poem that won, will have their poem posted as a sticky for the month that he or she won.
As for who the judges will be, I'm gonna have to speak to a few other's on here.. 'm thinking the other two wte mods, tha killa and blackrain...
YOUR THOUGHTS??????
anybody with suggestions, please don't hesitate to share em' with me.
I'm down for whatever lets get this jawn goin......
(Ill do my best to follow the rules of "Stanza" ...go back to the years of creative writing class, which was the only class that I was good at....but I failed, but Ill still try lol) -
I'm down for whatever lets get this jawn goin......
(Ill do my best to follow the rules of "Stanza" ...go back to the years of creative writing class, which was the only class that I was good at....but I failed, but Ill still try lol)
lol, fa sho VSOP! i' just waiting for the poets to come thru and agree that they willing to participate..
I think it's always gon be us 3 (me, Real p, and you) here thou.. cause man, ayebody just comea and goes lol.. -
smh! i fell off HARD from this site!!!!
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we all did, once they did that big overhaul and people couldn't sign on or access it, they lost a lot of good ass people. whaddayagonnado
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we all did, once they did that big overhaul and people couldn't sign on or access it, they lost a lot of good ass people. whaddayagonnado
Smh. Literally 7+ plus months later im reaponding.
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The sun shines on my heart
I feel it radiate
The darkness parts
It beats loves rhythm
Can you feel it in the streets?
Can you tap it with your feet?
The forest of shadows
Grows ever so dark
When you let them in
To taste a golden heart
They try to hold you down
Tell you your not good enough
To move through the sound
The sound of misery
The sound of addition
The very sound that takes your spirit and kills it
When ? lives within, they can’t win
? is greater than you and me
Greater than the demons that live in your head
They can’t sing the song of love
They can’t find the beat
They don’t have its rhythm
They will feel defeat
When they hear the song of LOVE
Tapping to joy, tapping for happiness
Making ? tap is toes
Giggling and laughing at his foes
? knows a person’s intent
If it falls short, he reinvents
I’ve tasted death and lived through it
I’ve been held down and said screw it
Now is my time to rise up
Are you ready for a big cup of
I will not shut the ? up
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The sun shines on my heart
I feel it radiate
The darkness parts
It beats loves rhythm
Can you feel it in the streets?
Can you tap it with your feet?
The forest of shadows
Grows ever so dark
When you let them in
To taste a golden heart
They try to hold you down
Tell you your not good enough
To move through the sound
The sound of misery
The sound of addition
The very sound that takes your spirit and kills it
When ? lives within, they can’t win
? is greater than you and me
Greater than the demons that live in your head
They can’t sing the song of love
They can’t find the beat
They don’t have its rhythm
They will feel defeat
When they hear the song of LOVE
Tapping to joy, tapping for happiness
Making ? tap is toes
Giggling and laughing at his foes
? knows a person’s intent
If it falls short, he reinvents
I’ve tasted death and lived through it
I’ve been held down and said screw it
Now is my time to rise up
Are you ready for a big cup of
I will not shut the ? up
I can definitely gig this jawn
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Keep em coming!
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Riots how can I keep quiet
My soul yearns to preach
And reach anyone
There are plenty of us
Giants who triumph
When we're in a fire
Justice shoulda been
Coulda been
My next To kin
28. Not Mexican
Old and young
Freddy gray
Rest in peace
Your life was ochrestrated
Cuz pd was Masonic decorated
Glad some who hate it
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Sensual
Ice
Rubbed all over your body
Carmel cubes consumed
Laying on a bed of rose petals
I caress
You feel more comfortable
Slowly undress
You wiggle
tickled
As satin panties come off
The energy electric
Potential motion becomes Kinetic
Hearts sweat tears
Minds bodies souls
All Powerful together
Rain drops hit the window ceil
Thunder and lightning
Roar visible through the window pane
Love not ?
Enchanting how in this situation
We became tied to one another
Passions blasting
? in actions
Thrusts closed caption
Touch
Orgasims
At last it has happened
Thankful for a birth
Finally it's happened
Pleasure and excitement
Turns to quietness
Zzz of silence
Thankful for you
Grateful to be faithful
Thank you's to the Angels
To the Heavens
To the Most High
& 9 months later
A burst of new life
The time between was all but a dream
Reality a mix of peace
Pride power
Serene Difficulties
6 years deep
To one night of love
To create our love
Our blood shall run everlasting
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emaculate... That jawn was nice! I like the last stanzas. Thank you for sharing.
Yahwehprofet, I loved the multi rhymes.. And I felt this piece and I'm sure plenty folks can sympathize. Thank you for sharing... Jah bless!
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Zoom zoom im racing escaping this reality grasping no concept calamity ive fallen cant get up mind altering steps faltering.Chasing a dream i think i fell and missedKiss of death times up no hope left so i turn the page ink stains my hands my hands they itch money green like yo ? when she see meAint got ? to say cant beat me my mouth dont run but my hands they walk so ill walk on her face make her rethink twice bout swinging my waySidetracked i switch lanes back on it cant shake this thang my future calling but i wont answer still got messages from the past i left last present aint left yet so why talk to the future when my present still relevanyI teach a speech of a million words insults unheard of my insides they burn up see why they call me fiyah bc my flow hard and i burn hotter the more i write the harder i fightMy haters they motivate help me create let the words escape a destination unknown but in solice it will find homeIngrained n the membrane forever and alw!
ays so i treat the beat like a reverend and i praise it giving a voice to the voiceless choice to the choiceles
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Wats the point of life to wake up one morning and watch it all crash and burn n the blink of an eye. Wats the point of love to wear your heart on your sleave jus to watch it get ripped off like a glove. Why feel when nothing is ever real why hope when all your gonna do is lose your soul why pray when uve asked ? the same thing everyday with no change why care when your the only one fighting why trust when your blood just turns to must when the wounds r
open why give is u never get what's the point of trying when n the end your only good at dying -
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Fiyahraps,
You came with it. Thank you for sharing and keep dropping your material here. -
Greetings
Magnificent manifestations
From mental motivations
Magnified through inner lenses
Lenses from within
Him her who he she
We continue to speak without understanding listening communication is body language that’s when we are most in synch
Syncopy sinking sinking deeper than deeply
Thinking dreaming wondering pondering enduring persevering through it all
Was it a mighty fall? Was it a forceful plunge? What did you succumb? What have you become?
How have you come? The pausing in and out of salting cream with milk over ice and strawberries
This delicacy is a delicate dwelling divine
Where fusion of mind and the things upsetting
Meet and discuss differences and opinions after spare ribs
This was the beginning adding space and time
As we travel the mind the minds we all are inclined
To deliver lines and spells through turmoil to excell
Experience life as is so serious as is not to be seriously taken however there may be those scenarios we evolve forward fold fall foil
Peace be with you and with me may peace be
Rest assured you will overcome and become what is true to thee...thank you for your time.