INSTRUMENTAL KEYSTYLE-Topic is: youre on stage in a crowded room *PREACH* beat inside

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VSOP
VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
edited August 2010 in Body SLAM
Instrumental is Blueprint-lounge


we doin it different this week
throw this beat on-close your eyes and type
let spell check fix the rest


Tupacfan inspired this cuz of her Spoken Word story

I want yall to bump the beat and jus keystyle whatever the ? comes to mind like youre on stage, bein put on the spot and everyones lookin at you



yall know the deal-change the ? 's to tt's (I think a MOD should let me put links up lol whatyallthink?!?)

hxxp://usershare.net/h7b0yrpb8daz

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  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    this sax is sex
    exlax to my brains ideas caught up in a drain
    spiraling nowhere
    I'm tappin my fingers to the beat like a microphones' snare
    I dare myself to die at least twice a night
    so I drink liquor and smoke weed
    ignoring my minds advice
    Osiris inside Isis' eyes like a mirror to fate
    I'm concealing the tape of me killing myself slowly
    footprints in the sand cuz my sands of time got a slow leak
    cuz my innerchild is carryin my ol ass
    got me writing ignorant rhymes to some slow jazz
    Im so focused lost in a room of all stares
    bright light is blinding
    this ...................this fear is exciting
    this sweat is just falling
    my buzz is getting lost but my courage is strong so I go on
    microphone is heavy
    my arm is heavy
    my thoughts are heavy
    my mind is going so fast that my tongue is forgetting
    but I'm ready to switch subjects fast
    stuck in my 3rd dream world like the "Inception" cast
  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    Nice drop VSOP, and good concept for the keystyle. This is unedited in terms of content... had to go back and fix my spelling errors though, I hate that ? .

    I close my eyes, am i dreaming?
    Is what I'm seeing for real, is this what I'm feeling
    Just the beat in the back as the sounds of my keys clack
    No packs but I'm smoking like I still need that
    No green so I'm not in my usual state of mind
    Behind the times, reminiscing in my rhyme
    Thinkin back to the golden days, no pain
    No strain on life, just strains of grain
    No gain but no regression, just the moment
    The herb's potent, I can feel it as I toke it
    Can't drive, go to ride the train, no token
    I'm outspoken, my scene causes commotion
    As I exhale, the stress is lessened
    No questions, just waiting for my next possession
    I'm running dry after I passed the dutch
    It was my crutch, coasting like a stick shift on the clutch
    Before I know it I crash, no e-brake to help
    Before the impact reaches, I awake from my hell
    Eyes open, life full of mistakes like this written verse
    Crowd disappointed, they throw their ? , they ? and they curse.
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    cheers to a dark evening
    smoke filled balloons and flying darts schemin
    I'm dreaming
    of ridin her to the beat
    everytime she says "Oh my ? " the bass hits real hard
    deep
    then I'm tappin her like the snare in the background
    long time ? on a totally different treble
    Snoop Dogg quit smokin
    Mizzute Smoke tired of fightin the clown in me like Jigsaw
    Manute Bol's fightin lions that hes not equipped for
    I'm a big dog
    and yall little ?
    get off my porch
    A white pit bull from the slums



    so yes I do eat.



    ...I have no idea...im a lil tipsy right now lol is exactly what I would say after I spoke on stage
  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    Before I drop ? , I'm ? as ? ,
    Like a slutty ? who's about to suck
    My mind is running wild, I can't string a thought
    The same ? I wanna fulfill is the same ? I thought
    The same ? I bought is what I'm tryna avoid
    Yet I purchase the same ? to try to fill this void
    I got parents but their skills were kinda lacking
    They put on a good face, some would say they're acting
    Now I see the truth cause I'm a bit more grown
    No longer throwing stones but they're on their own
    Now their on the phone talking bout another home
    I never felt a "home" cause I been all alone
    My life has been regret and reckless abandonment
    Like a sentiment that truly was never meant
    Even if you was heaven sent, you could not fill this void
    My heart hollow like a champion on steroids

    I literally just got back from the bar, so I'm ? as ? . Still gotta correct the spelling though.

    And yes, I check the net before I call it a night. Deuces...
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    lol @ both of us ? writin in this ? lol ? it-if i gotta get on stage, best BELIEVE imma have some liquid courage in hand lol
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    Fiyah!

    I love both of ya'lls delivery in this jawn.. This ? is hawt.. Both of ya'll came with some fires.. Some good lines..

    That Osiris inside Isis is crazy! I love it.. Its my favorite by VSOP.. Takes me back to shimmie days..

    And my favorite from legend is "my life has been reckless and regret abandonment" I can relate 110% I feel it yo..

    I'm mobile so lace me with the title of the track and the artist and I'll follow thru...
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    Fiyah!

    I love both of ya'lls delivery in this jawn.. This ? is hawt.. Both of ya'll came with some fires.. Some good lines..

    That Osiris inside Isis is crazy! I love it.. Its my favorite by VSOP.. Takes me back to shimmie days..

    And my favorite from legend is "my life has been reckless and regret abandonment" I can relate 110% I feel it yo..

    I'm mobile so lace me with the title of the track and the artist and I'll follow thru...

    Artist is Blueprint and song is Lounge-its off an instrumental album he did

    my muse
    my intimate preview of tonights show
    green eyes
    wrapped in a honey brown coat
    I smoke

    the tension with a nightlife
    broken records and mai tai's
    spoken word and high life's

    but we're too cool for cheap beer so drink fast before they come here and take em
    too rich for free mason
    too high to catch Superman's apron
    Boom Bap's baby son
    drippin down south on a gravy run
    stopped at a diner from somethin to eat
    my waiter introduced me to her
    her name was "honey sweet"
    I'm dumb indeed
    cuz I took out a sheet and rolled around in bed with hours
    and somehow forgot to eat
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    the sound of musical instruments
    allowing me to spit my sentiments
    the coldness of life's bitter sweetness
    making me feel uncompleted

    running my fingers thru my hair,
    Am I just living all a dream of dispair?
    ? I cry here screaming my life isn't fair
    it's a raging war and i'm defeated and living a glare

    my soul burning like solar flare
    with empty bottles is all I stare
    its just me living recklessly with no more care
    nobody worth in my life to share

    it's dark, and cold but its summer and hot
    but all this pain can't just come to a stop
    another summer that just flopped
    no albums worth to cop
    maybe find me in a casino ? playing some slots

    saxaphone sounds that give me chills
    letting this mood marinate like water distills
    i'm numb and lost all my feels
    I come to a halt of loneliness that bleeds......



    I love the instrument btw.. and spell check is probably needed ha.