DeathLife
CanonAdonis
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this is a song I made. it's good. I hope you enjoy it. http://www.swift.fm/TheeCanon/song/11858/
feedback would be much appreciated
feedback would be much appreciated
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I didn't like this trak when it start playin, but I wuz feelin it wen it ended, alot of pepes can proly relate to this, nice work and keep grindin
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I have to admit that I thought it was going to be wack because of the way the track started, but I'm glad I didn't turn it off. The beat still didn't get any better imo, but your lyricism made up for that. You've got decent flow and your delivery is good, but your lyricism is your stand out quality. I have to agree with kamikazi214 about this being the type of track that a lot of dudes will be able to relate to. The fact that the track had a meaning behind it must be the real reason why I kept on listening. It was raw. I'll give your track a 4.5/5 stars. The only reason I can't honestly give you the remaining 0.5 is just because I wasn't feeling the beat. Props to you, man.
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I think its a lil above average. not quite dope, but its cool