"Fire In Me" Written by: AK.aPHillYisILL

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AK.aPHillYisILL
AK.aPHillYisILL Members Posts: 1,648 ✭✭✭
edited August 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
(verse 1)
I got this fire in me, ? call me Damian
I'm a lil bit ancy and you ? know i'm goin in/
I'm way past angry, I got the whole world on my fingertips
In a bout a couple of seconds, y'all will be dead ? stiff/
I'm the one that gives you goosebumps all over your ? skin
I'll make you cringe, juz like a wrist that's ? razor thin/
You Ragedy Anne, i'm the muthafuckin needles and pins
Each and everyone that goes in, your lookin pretty ? dim/
You've reached the end, ? say hello to darkness and
Your skull crushed in, i'm a zombie from ? Dawn of the Dead/
I dig and dig, while you beg, I don't wanna hear ?
I'm your ? Achilles heal, call me Pitt, you dumb ? ? /
This is it, couldn't you tell from your sewed up lips?
And the tied up wrists and you rolled up in my ? carpet/
You'll see things a lot more clearly when dead, i'll lay you to rest
Arms crossed over your chest, Mossberg still pumpin out yes!/
Til' there's nuthin left, now I need to cash in the ? check
I'm a lyrical threat, i'm too sick, I don't think you wanna be next/
You will get hexed, i'll send you out juz like a ? text
And then call that phone I juz sent and tell them to delete that ? /
You ? ? , while i'm at it, your girlfriend can get sticked
Wit the tip of my ? , shoved deep down in her ? neck/
Can you see the flames in my eyes, as they get bigger, they rize
You steppin up to me wit a mic, is ? suicide/

(chorus)
Whatever you ? say, you add more fuel to my game
The fire in me is rage, i'm ? covered in flames
I'm burnin this ? down into the ground
Into the ground...
Try to get on my stage, you won't have no ? name
I'm all over the place, this fire's to hard to tame

(verse 2)
I'm back again, i've never felt more right wit my pad and pen
I feel I can, dominate my opponent, til' they get canned/
I got em', i'm goin in, like i'm 24, i'ma win
I'm sick in the head, like i'm LeBron leavin ? cleveland and/
I don't need nobody writin my ? , I say when I begin
I'm Jackie Chan, I do my own stunts, I flip, push my ? buttons again/
You will get ripped, i'm Incredible, i'll ? smash it
Into tiny pieces, Jesus, can't nobody ? stop this?/
? a ? , you'll need more than Poison Ivy for my ?
Get off my ? , your like a shower, your drippin ? wet/
Don't get me started, i'm past the point of bein cold hearted
I'm in my darkest and most finest hours, i'm at my harshest/
I need a harness cuz i'm higher than all of you ?
I'm ? lit, i'ma wildfire, my desire's at my strongest/
And y'all will witness, how sadistic, ? ballistic I can get
Tension is buildin, it's automatic and don't you forget/
That I deserve respect, can't you tell wit the way I spit?
Your finna gonna get fixed, I got the hunger like i'm a T-Rex/
Your soul is a mess, kinda like how my life is tragic
I've had it, i'm undisputed, I should be on a UFC cover/
Snappin your shoulders, rotator cuff is dug over, it's over
Close down the curtains, this song's already been murdered/

(chorus)
Whatever you ? say, you add more fuel to my game
The fire in me is rage, i'm ? covered in flames
I'm burnin this ? down into the ground
Into the ground...
Try to get on my stage, you won't have no ? name
I'm all over the place, this fire's to hard to tame

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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    The rhyme schme was somewhat on point! I thought this was decent.. But man, all the b words, the f words... Why so hostile? LOL.. Over all, I enjoyed reading it..

    There were a few lines that were nice, and keep writing.. Hope to read more of your material..btw, this may get moved to RTM, its like keystyle freestyle content..


    Peace!
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    O I fail to mention, the topic def fits well.. Fire in me, I def sensed that rage..
  • AK.aPHillYisILL
    AK.aPHillYisILL Members Posts: 1,648 ✭✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    Thanks! Appreciate the feedback! Yeah, it's pretty angry. But that's how I felt when I wrote this about a month back. I have hella note pads though with nothing but lyrics i've written over the years. I'll put a couple more up.
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    Thanks! Appreciate the feedback! Yeah, it's pretty angry. But that's how I felt when I wrote this about a month back. I have hella note pads though with nothing but lyrics i've written over the years. I'll put a couple more up.

    I feel it, writing whatever is on your mind is the best way to go, expressing your emotions usually results into a great read like this one..

    yea drop some ore.. im always down for reading and giving feedback..
  • bankrupt baller
    bankrupt baller Members Posts: 12,927 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    it was just ok........no hate though
  • AK.aPHillYisILL
    AK.aPHillYisILL Members Posts: 1,648 ✭✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    I feel it, writing whatever is on your mind is the best way to go, expressing your emotions usually results into a great read like this one..

    yea drop some ore.. im always down for reading and giving feedback..

    Fo sho! I appreciate it! I'll be sure to be dropping more.
  • Sourpatch Kid
    Sourpatch Kid Members Posts: 3,809 ✭✭✭
    edited August 2010
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  • bankrupt baller
    bankrupt baller Members Posts: 12,927 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    lol thats phucked up
  • AK.aPHillYisILL
    AK.aPHillYisILL Members Posts: 1,648 ✭✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    Thanks dude! Laughed my ass off when I saw that!
    It don't phase me. Not everyone is gonna like it.
    It's not like i'm going to be a future rap star in my life so ? it.
    Love it or hate it, I respect everyone's opinion.
  • Sourpatch Kid
    Sourpatch Kid Members Posts: 3,809 ✭✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    Thanks dude! Laughed my ass off when I saw that!
    It don't phase me. Not everyone is gonna like it.
    It's not like i'm going to be a future rap star in my life so ? it.
    Love it or hate it, I respect everyone's opinion.

    Na, don't give up on your passion, ? , that flow was definitely a million times better than Soujah Boy or even 90 percent of this generations rap. Confidence can get you everywhere in life, trust me.
  • AK.aPHillYisILL
    AK.aPHillYisILL Members Posts: 1,648 ✭✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    Na, don't give up on your passion, ? , that flow was definitely a million times better than Soujah Boy or even 90 percent of this generations rap. Confidence can get you everywhere in life, trust me.

    Appreciate it man! I just like to write some ? down. Whatever comes out, it don't matter. I jot it down. But thanks!
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    Go to the poets introduction thread and introduce yourself... it's the first thread of this forum....