Short, but something special

ThaChozenWun
ThaChozenWun Members Posts: 9,390
edited August 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
I awoke to the clock sounds, dreams vivid in memory
rewind for a second we, wait... mental telepathy
So we already on that mental tip so I'm let the pencil spit
paint a picture off imagination without the stencil ?
From a minute of deep sleepin, dreamin, mind of a genius
the black thoughts turned into spaceships flyin to Venus
The stars were my next of kin, no black, white and Mexican
Hoppin out, Hieroglyphs on the kicks that im dressed up in
Seen a couple Jinn to the west of him
Evil ? but no police is arrestin them
Utopia is open yo, And im the ticket master
You want to get here faster wave your flag Ill come and capture
Be prepared I was comin at ya, dreams are vividly defined
And as the daylight break I lay awake and find
A zone that I can zone out in paint my picture and rewind

Comments

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
    This is the Chozen I'm use to reading.. was beautifully written..

    Every line hit hard, my favorite

    So we already on that mental tip so I'm let the pencil spit
    paint a picture off imagination without the stencil ?
    From a minute of deep sleepin, dreamin, mind of a genius
    the black thoughts turned into spaceships flyin to Venus


    thanks for sharing, btw, i find short poems like thee best poems..
  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited August 2010
    This is a great one.
    The stars were my next of kin, no black, white and Mexican
    Hoppin out, Hieroglyphs on the kicks that im dressed up in
    I liked the intro as well as that line above. Short and effective... keep up the work.