To Live Another Day

shawty_stunnagrl
shawty_stunnagrl Members Posts: 38
edited September 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
Running with scissors in your creative unconscience
Stabbing at your mind with a vengance
Releasing your inner turmoil raging with fear and anger
Caused by supresed memories filled with hatered and abuse
This is where you live
With no valuable escape plan
Trapped in the bindings of
What was real
What is real
And what will be real
You try to breathe
To take it all in
But your sorrows rush at you
Causing you to drown in your own self pitty
As they wash you away in the filth that was your life
A familiar voice repeats a simple word over and over
You respond by opening your eyes
A flash of light floods out the chaos
Your mind is compleley blank
Here in the awakening you breathe
The breath of patience
The breath of love
The breath of heros unborn
To live another day.

Comments

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
    This piece is sooo relatable! It gave a vivid image and I can only imagine..

    I had some lines to quote but I'm mobile so I can't copy and paste..

    However, I enjoyed reading this! And keep dropping em!

    Peace!
  • shawty_stunnagrl
    shawty_stunnagrl Members Posts: 38
    edited September 2010
    thanks so much. i really apreciate it. i do try to add some imagry some times. glad you enjoyed. and as long as they dont delete me again, i plan to continue as long as i keep writing. and i want to thank you for all your replies/comments.
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited September 2010
    No doubt ma,

    I make sure they don't boot you off (you hear that Killa :D)

    and yes vivid images is always a plus!!

    Thanks for sharing once again..