lifetime

wrote this verse last night after i got inspired by some music. 1st time i wrote in a minute, just hopin for some feedback. thanks


Time is money but what's the price 2 let me live my life/
How many dreams get buried in a box,4gotten overnite/
How does it begin 2 change, watchin the roles reversed/
Blessed become the cursed and nice guys finish 1st/
Sometimes I wanna wonder but cant afford time 2 think/
Rich verses the poor, can't we find a common link/
Don't our ? all stink?don't we all eat and we drink/
Need green 4 our pockets and stick our ? in somethin pink/
We too selfish in our lives, but how cud they blame ya/
2 little time on the earth 2 care bout 6 billion strangers/
1 is enough 2 worry bout got a wife make it 2/
Add the children u create and needy ppl in ya crew/
I try to look at life in a 3rd person view/
Cuz its always easier 2 tell some1 else wat 2 do/
My life is a feature film read the credits on the tombstone/
My name and time passed, I hope that ain't 2 soon tho/
The ? ain't been reached yet the plot begins 2 thicken/
So called gs who wanted beef turn out 2 b a flock of chickens/
? women who give ? in exchange for broken trust/
Backstab u, its no wonder they live longer than us/
Overgrown child finally gets thrown into the wild/
Lacks skills for proper kills but still developin style /
nuthin that makes sense in a span of a million miles/
So don't bother lookin, just find somethin 2 make u smile....


http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?65019-If-It-Keeps-On-Raining


http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?64208-Money-or-My-Soul