The Locksmith: the Key

rome04sho
rome04sho Members Posts: 4
edited October 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
Fate starts to take its toll
through my heart peers a gaping hole
wide enough for any key

instead it had to choose
between a break and a bruise
the locked heart suffers burglary

situations demonstrating
that my love is worth negating
leaving nothing but an empty room

keeping all that is enclosed
all the treasures that it holds
leaning toward the brink of doom

standing at the door, while I'm rolling
kicking, screaming on the floor
holding shattered pieces of what used to be

stands the one who knows the hole
plans to grasp and take a hold, turning
a Key- made especially for me, earning
entry to the gate where "Negated turns from hate"
turning simple tragedy....


into compound faith...



2010 Sho-Rome II
"Enter at your own risk"

Comments

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited February 2010
    Sho Rome!

    You always dropping heat on us like dat, why? lol. But no, on the real, this joint is defintely felt tho, I like the whole approach, the word game is on point. You can't force a key to a lock that don't fit.

    Thanks for sharing! and it's good to see you back up in here, fa real, and keep droppin, you always got a reader haha.

    Peace

    - Tupacfan
  • jamie_locksmiths
    jamie_locksmiths Members Posts: 1
    edited October 2010
    great post. experienced and fully-equipped locksmiths can open the locks in no time.