Inception
APFaction
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Awesome beat, let me know about the rhymes
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bumpy bumps
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this is wack
flow is off beat sucks and im not feeling the lyrics
just being honest
best thing about it is the title and concept but its executed poorly
keep at it -
^^ dude is right...gotta ride the beat man...play w/ your delivery and inflections to emphasize certain things. Engages the listener.
Not wack, but not great. Could be hot w/ some polish.