What A Night

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jaywillis
jaywillis Members Posts: 54 ✭✭
edited November 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
Sexy black lingerie, fitting her body so perfectly
I'm trying not to stare, but the look in her eyes says she wants me.
I pull her closer to me so I can feel the softness of her skin
The ? in my boxers tells me I'm about to sin.
Candles flickering reveal the imperfections of figure
I can almost see clearly, my thoughts still foggy from the weed and the liquor.
Eight shots of Ciroc, or was it nine
Two sticks of haze, I'm feeling outta my mind.
I think I can feel her getting close to me
I'm tryin to be cool, waiting patiently.
Ima feind for some good ? , its no secret
Nasty ass ? I'm sure to freak it.
She won't let me touch her, she'll only give me head
Can't see her face maybe its the way I'm laying in this bed
10 minutes pass
11 minutes, still suckin.
? ready to explode, its time for some ? .
Grab the top of her head, she's got to slow down
Room filled with ? & pornographic sounds
I try to move away to hold my compusre
She pulled harder & harder........... this night was over.
.......... damn!
I rolled over & looked at the clock.
Slow walk to the bathroom to wash off my ? .
Glanced again at the time it was 4:15.......
? to old to be having a ? .

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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited November 2010
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    Dam this was vividly written! Hahaha..

    I honestly enjoyed reading this, you def painted picture with this drop here.

    I thought the word play was on point and how you ended with just a dream was aura..

    I'm definitely appreciating some ya'll new poets that coming thru here so please keep sharing with us, cause you just go yourself a reader :)

    Thanks for sharing and have a blessful day!

    Peace!

    Peace!