Truly Feel You - L.I.P.
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L.I.P.
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Girl stop actin naughty cuz i know u wanna party
takin sips o' this bacardi cuz the 'cris is just too corny
My life is like a coaster-- rollin over in hopes to
get signed in October, get mine like im supposed to
I know you wanna chill, lay back and ? time
You can't conceal the way you feel from real eyes
I want a thrill-- a 'lil slack's a ill crime
but ima spill why you got me on this hill high
Met you by the lake alone, and your face
was only showin distaste so i came over & raced
and we were roamin the place, till we got frozen in place
started holdin our waists, i think we're chosen to mate
we made the prettiest scene that anyones ever seen
and you remembered my dream, to fall in love with a queen
you're always gonna be down, no matter what comes around
you'll be there the whole round, no fear of what'll go down.....................
Thats the bond that we had made back then
and we promised to be honest when we saved jacksons
re-laxin, chillin then we thought for a while
room spinnin, you were grinnin- said lets make a few vows
so.......
would you take a speedin bullet for me?
if i go broke, would you be there to the fullest with me?
would you die? put everything on the line for me?
if i cried, would you push things to the side for me?
yeah to all, and you know tonight? i'll stay 'till tomorrow
waste the sorrow, i'm yours for life! lets be thankful it's on! .....................
Fast forward to a while, cash over a thou
blast towards the crowds o' loud mouths who get down
ballin outta control, fallin outta ya hold
bout'ta let go, cuz baby anymore, then i gotta explode
gettin twisted from parties im hardly lifted from shots
so i copped 2 full bottles and mixed'em and dropped
Do you remember the vows? Well it's my turn spouse
cuz its mutual, what i'll do for you's, crucial to now
Would you save me? pick me up if i was to fall?
call me baby? and crave me? whenever you call?
would you defend us, even if the world was against us?
would you mourn if im gone? ask what the lords intent was?
sent a toast in the air, then we boasted a glare
you sipped wit me, and then kissed me and dozed in the chair
Speed it up to now, the love is still in the air
We forever together and we just kickin it here----yeah
takin sips o' this bacardi cuz the 'cris is just too corny
My life is like a coaster-- rollin over in hopes to
get signed in October, get mine like im supposed to
I know you wanna chill, lay back and ? time
You can't conceal the way you feel from real eyes
I want a thrill-- a 'lil slack's a ill crime
but ima spill why you got me on this hill high
Met you by the lake alone, and your face
was only showin distaste so i came over & raced
and we were roamin the place, till we got frozen in place
started holdin our waists, i think we're chosen to mate
we made the prettiest scene that anyones ever seen
and you remembered my dream, to fall in love with a queen
you're always gonna be down, no matter what comes around
you'll be there the whole round, no fear of what'll go down.....................
Thats the bond that we had made back then
and we promised to be honest when we saved jacksons
re-laxin, chillin then we thought for a while
room spinnin, you were grinnin- said lets make a few vows
so.......
would you take a speedin bullet for me?
if i go broke, would you be there to the fullest with me?
would you die? put everything on the line for me?
if i cried, would you push things to the side for me?
yeah to all, and you know tonight? i'll stay 'till tomorrow
waste the sorrow, i'm yours for life! lets be thankful it's on! .....................
Fast forward to a while, cash over a thou
blast towards the crowds o' loud mouths who get down
ballin outta control, fallin outta ya hold
bout'ta let go, cuz baby anymore, then i gotta explode
gettin twisted from parties im hardly lifted from shots
so i copped 2 full bottles and mixed'em and dropped
Do you remember the vows? Well it's my turn spouse
cuz its mutual, what i'll do for you's, crucial to now
Would you save me? pick me up if i was to fall?
call me baby? and crave me? whenever you call?
would you defend us, even if the world was against us?
would you mourn if im gone? ask what the lords intent was?
sent a toast in the air, then we boasted a glare
you sipped wit me, and then kissed me and dozed in the chair
Speed it up to now, the love is still in the air
We forever together and we just kickin it here----yeah
Comments
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There were so many good lines in this piece..
I truly feel you on this.. This reminded me from a track by 50, umm 21 questions. Yea.. That's the song, I was tryna remember LOL..
Over all good ? !
Keep blessing us with your poems! I digg it..thanks for sharing as well..
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Thanks for the feedback again glad you enjoyed it!. I'll probably drop another one of my joints soon my pockets is cryin right now from black friday! i hope you've copywritten your things it comes its a must when you become real real good at this stuff! I didn't want anyone to steal what i got! How was your thanksgiving?
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Thanks for the feedback again glad you enjoyed it!. I'll probably drop another one of my joints soon my pockets is cryin right now from black friday! i hope you've copywritten your things it comes its a must when you become real real good at this stuff! I didn't want anyone to steal what i got! How was your thanksgiving?
LOL at pocket crying.. I hear you.. Wait! What did you buy?
The ones I been currently posting here isn't copy right, some of them are like some old material or in the process. I'm working on a poetry book, a collection of all my poems, suppose to have dropped this winter but till early next year.. Be on the look out for that! Fa real!
Thanksgving was ehh.. I mean this year around, holidays seem more harder than any other holidays. I been having it a rough for a min.. But I could elaborate more in detail but I prefer not to on here, if you like you can always hit the PM. Btw, most of my poems tell a lot of my story, each poem i write has been experienced in real life so yea.. Go read em'
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