Ce Jota vs Deeluxe Dez
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C.Melendez
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whos the ? next ,deeluxe dez....he'll get his ? faced clapped
No *big ? or Deluxe breast*, but still Im *38's strapped*
My flows refreshing like that early day nap
kick rocks or pick em up and hurl away jack
the rocks u throw Imma make a fortress with them
Homeboy ask did i win...? .I said COURSE I'LL KILLEDL HIM
Seems like Im dropping ether,nah more like a heat check
This not work at all, this more like a recess
would say I'll eat him for lunch...but this more like a Reese's
Butter cup ? ... watch me break him to pieces
Going in I wondered,is there any alarm for me
Scouting report said he was *Moss like*,seldom *drop a bomb on me*
My guns like the 90's Niners got some good arms on me(Montana Young)
Some thought this was spectacular...nah this just the norm from me
He may be Pitbull status but Im looking at him with those Michael eyes(vick)
Imma cut this deluxe chicken down to micro size -
I hope not! I don't know if this was directed at me but the name is too close so I'm a respond just on the strength of it being close to my name.
So first up lets clear the confusion quick
Its DEX not Dez you illetriate
Son of a ? who can't read let alone rap
Id diss your ? name but cant translate ?
But what the hell Ill give it a shot
Ce means yes, ? cause u dont stop
Ta....ckling emcees you cant take down
Deeluxe Dex engraved like JC's thorn crown
I am the ? or whatever spiritual belief
Your like why i hate starbucks...just a tad too sweet
And everytime I see you got some cream on the top
The visual just ? you, prolly wish I'd just stop
But 4 more lines to tell why
You should quit rapping, texting, hell should just die
Cause I entered into battle with a pacifist
Should chage ur name to Kobe cause you NEVER pass the ? .......Ya Ball HOG! -
Lol I spelled it wrong on purpose, part of the joke line
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ima go with ce because it was average but stronger in flow and punchlines
deeluxe verse was pretty good because of the illiterate line .made me lol
but the cream line may have been too much -
Deeluxe had a very funny verse. I last line made me laugh out loud when you said Kobe wouldn't pass the ? because he's a ballhog LMAO. Anyway, Other than a few funny lines, I didn't think she put as much work into her verse as C.Melendez did. He came more with attacks mixed with pretty clever metaphors. Just about each set of lines was cleverly written to punch. That was enough for me to give C.Melendez my vote.
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Someone else needs to vote on this!! Send a PM out to friends for a favor or something but MAKE SURE they explain their vote. No friend votes lol.
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C.Melendez wrote: »whos the ? next ,deeluxe dez....he'll get his ? faced clapped
No *big ? or Deluxe breast*, but still Im *38's strapped*
Good opener. Kind of good.
My flows refreshing like that early day nap
kick rocks or pick em up and hurl away jack
Boast follow up by a confusing diss?
the rocks u throw Imma make a fortress with them
Homeboy ask did i win...? .I said COURSE I'LL KILLEDL HIM
Weak punch
Seems like Im dropping ether,nah more like a heat check
This not work at all, this more like a recess
Boast I think followed up by a decent diss
would say I'll eat him for lunch...but this more like a Reese's
Butter cup ? ... watch me break him to pieces
Really like this one!
Going in I wondered,is there any alarm for me
Scouting report said he was *Moss like*,seldom *drop a bomb on me*
Starting to heat back up. Starting to attack 'em more
My guns like the 90's Niners got some good arms on me(Montana Young)
Some thought this was spectacular...nah this just the norm from me
N/A boast
He may be Pitbull status but Im looking at him with those Michael eyes(vick)
Imma cut this deluxe chicken down to micro size
IDK why it was funny. Weak closer. Sounds like something you'd say in the beginning.I hope not! I don't know if this was directed at me but the name is too close so I'm a respond just on the strength of it being close to my name.
So first up lets clear the confusion quick
Its DEX not Dez you illetriate
Son of a ? who can't read let alone rap
Id diss your ? name but cant translate ?
Weak opener.
But what the hell Ill give it a shot
Ce means yes, ? cause u dont stop
Ta....ckling emcees you cant take down
Deeluxe Dex engraved like JC's thorn crown
Si means yes. Seems more like focusing on flow rather than content
I am the ? or whatever spiritual belief
Your like why i hate starbucks...just a tad too sweet
And everytime I see you got some cream on the top
The visual just ? you, prolly wish I'd just stop
Boast / corny / and was your metaphor saying you ? him? Lol
But 4 more lines to tell why
You should quit rapping, texting, hell should just die
Cause I entered into battle with a pacifist
Should chage ur name to Kobe cause you NEVER pass the ? .......Ya Ball HOG!
Last line is killer but not much before that
C.Melendez had a decent verse with a couple of good bars that really hit. Some funny ? . Deeluxe had some funny ? too but lacked metaphors/punches. Deeluxe might have won if he/she would have been a little more creative than just cussing and dissing just to diss.
My vote is for C.Melendez
