Admiring a Secret

REAL_POETICAL
REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
edited January 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
Take time to read this
proceed with caution
its about...nah just peep this
resistance between my words
courage and wisdom are causing friction
within this troubled soul of mines
I seen you....well bits of you and am impressed
the language you spill i digest
with a side of tang and a bit of future thought
moon traveling unravel my inner feelings
concealed deep within
I could be abrupt and say enoughs enough
but....coward I be and carry the legacy
my character sees you as a reflection of perfection
so raw with your style and so sweet with the other side
from what i see...whoever eying you is lucky
to even see what I wish i could
so i often dream and spew poetry to me
as a sign of relief
that its being read by me but fail to be read by many
face-palm and water drench throughout face and temple
imagining a word so simple
where i meet my admiring interest
without showing the indecentcy thats plaguing the meeting grounds
the sound of nothing.... purgatory
flowing in the air a different love story
stroke of ya hair so smooth and so innovative
as if your temple developing wavy effects
eyes of golden temples
let me lay my soul to rest upon them
lips of clay from your face direction
your's charming like a summer day
spring most likely
this is so wrong...but the poem feels so right
i'm touching you verbally but if only you feel the same
imagination is a wonderful invention from the creator
creating love interest without the afterthought of wrong doing
we in the clouds sailing away from the morals of today
but...its all poetry...and....these words are just that.....nothing more
just a simple...hint-reality
fantasy- i'm enjoying my time with a secret that's admiring the lock and key

Comments

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited January 2011
    Dam, This is just beautifully written real p..I'm friggin jealous!!!! Seriously it's by far one of my favorite pieces..

    The metaphors in here is sooo on another level of... Ahhh I'm speechless LOL..

    Wow, fa real real p, this is a nice piece you ? LOL..

    Thanks for sharing.. I'm still speechless.. Having me re-read this a few times.
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited January 2011
    i'm glad you enjoyed it lol...this is one of those pieces that hits "home" and i had to get out of my system lol...once again thanks for the props
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited January 2011
    i'm glad you enjoyed it lol...this is one of those pieces that hits "home" and i had to get out of my system lol...once again thanks for the props

    no doubt real p..

    I feel that, one of Thor get out the system type of jawn.. Glad you did jut that though.. And it was felt.. So yea, mission accomplished :)
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited January 2011
    tupacfan wrote: »
    no doubt real p..

    I feel that, one of Thor get out the system type of jawn.. Glad you did jut that though.. And it was felt.. So yea, mission accomplished :)

    most def *bows* lol