LE Tournament #1 ROUND ONE - C.Melendez versus 7thwardslim

Legend24 wrote: »

I got the winner of this battle in the next round, so I ain't gonna vote on this match.

Lookin forward to the outcome here... good luck to both.

Respect! I am going to make that a rule in the next round. Battlers can't vote on battles when the winner will face them if they win their own battle.

I will vote on this battle soon.

Young-Ice wrote: »

1st off

lmao at both of you guys writing 18 bars

I was so concerned trying to get Slim to cut his 31 lines down to 16, that I hadn't realized Cejota had 18. A few messages later, when Slim had 18, rather than tell him "Dammit, you still don't have 16!", I stopped pressing when I realized Cejota had 18 all along. So I'll let it slide this one time. Now my vote.


C.Melendez
Feel like Im John starks or Chris Childs with it/
Simply breathe on the *Mike*, they say Im foul with it/
Yo, that was sick!!!! But you aren't dissing 7thwardslim LOL.

Thats a veteran call, olderheads vouch for me/
sending bullets 7th way, like he's running routes for me/
be a rout shortly like the lakers and cavs game
and im equipped with the 40. don't wanna hear the cal bang
got goons on 8th tell 7th they just a *ward* away
Cejota's a demon something crucifixes can't ward away
IDK. Some fair lines. I liked the last line too but you were boasting about yourself and not dissing him.

my lines like *? 's wife*, ? *hanging* on words I say
They love my swag the way I swerve and sway
First line is SICK!! I think it's a minus though when you're in a battle with only one round and you have 16 lines to bury him and you're wasting them on boasting instead of dissing. Each line is valuable.

last battle I killed it ..thought ole *bud* was *wiser* (shouln't checked in b)
I got something * brewing* for him, not talking *malts* or *lager*
*silver bullets* for his *wide mouth*, got the *steel reserved*
Empty conscience loaded guns...*coors* & *steel reserves*
Sick sets of lines.

*4 Loko's who'll *spark* for me..leave u *tilt* on the curb
Leave the comp *punch ? * *pilsner* smooth with my words
whip em like christ leaving *redstripes*... nothing iller man
Judges shoulda threw away the keys...told em I'd "kiligan" ....? again
Sick closer. I don't remember you spitting this good.

7thwardslim
Is that Gucci shades tucked under your balding braids,
u look 7 feet tall with 2 feet long legs//
? u look like u come out a comic book jack,
if u have a watch, it should read "its time for a hat"//
First two lines were okay. Last half was alright but IDK why it made me laugh.

U look like a ? who dont have no swag,
who wear man purses and fitted jeans with the 1/2 off price tag//
You the type of ? that polish his nails, went to community college and failed,
and recently excelled at rubber-banding dog tails//
LOL!! Some of these punches are starting to hit.

They say a picture say a 1,000 words,
but i only have 1 word when it come to yours, and thats nerves//
After u read this verse, i bet u take that picture down,
since u achololic it should be easy to get this ether down//
Um. I kind of like the last line but I felt the rest was played.

? you should just try to ? yourself, by overdosing on Rogaine until the hair reappear on ya scalp//
You live with your parents and they call you scooter,
made ya pops take the blame, when ya moms found porn on the family computer//
Look at yourself in the mirror, close ya eyes and look again
know u will never be the same after battling 7th Ward Slim//
I thought you could have ended the battle a little bit better.

This is a real hard battle to vote on. C.Melendez had ill flow. I like the wording of his lines and has crazy metaphors but some of his sickest lines weren't even disses against 7thwardslim. And 7th spit about a personal ALMOST every line but some of the disses just didn't hit hard for me. I'm going to compare this battle to boxing and to me, C.Melendez threw punches but when you aren't dissing your opponent, those punches are a swing and a miss. And he had probably one or two of the sickest lines in the battle but they weren't disses so they were like KO punches that would have knocked 7thwardslim out so had he dissed him, 7th would be out. And if you check 7thwardslim's verse, it was pretty much all directed at dissing C.M. so it's like he was swinging and barely hitting BC he wasn't hitting hard for me so sometimes he got gloves or was just tapping but it still counts. Overall, both of y'all had better metaphors and wordplay than I've seen so far in this tournament but one of you was more focused and racked up more points for me. This was a close one still.

Vote - 7thwardslim