LE Tournament #1 ROUND ONE - Disciplined InSight versus FOREVER92

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raw-material_ahh
raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
edited January 2011 in Lyrical Executions
Disciplined InSight versus FOREVER92
  • Check in by Wednesday, January 19, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • It's cool to drop your verses before the check in due date.
  • Verses are due by Sunday, January 23, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Voting will end on Saturday, January 29, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Verses: Mandatory 16 lines. Only one round. Voting can begin anytime after both verses are posted.
  • 3 votes to 0 is a knockout.
  • 5 votes first wins or the most votes by the end date.
  • 50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
  • All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
  • Don't vote sway. No comments by either battler in the thread besides "uppin for votes" and/or the current score and no comments about votes or your opponents verse. Take criticism like a man. Everyone has their own opinion. Use the Predictions/? Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread.
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  • Disciplined InSight
    Disciplined InSight Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    Check.........
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  • FOREVER92
    FOREVER92 Members Posts: 455
    edited January 2011
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    Check.......
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  • Aquaf!nafloe
    Aquaf!nafloe Confirm Email Posts: 5,362 ✭✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    alright boys get it in now! i need to take notes...l0l
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  • FOREVER92
    FOREVER92 Members Posts: 455
    edited January 2011
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    Just wrote this....

    My pen bleed the blood of gods seed
    ? the paper cause of my lyrical greed
    yea i paint a slow death for my enemies
    behind the bars like life in the penetentaries
    so you thinkin what my skill like...
    Im raw like im in the kicthen cookin white
    my flow and lyrics like a double edge dagger
    i hop in a cypher and cause your whole crew to stagger
    the time for your "squad up"
    im a "wayne" you like this a back to the future product
    i discipline in-sight like yo mama beat you at the sto
    beat you like you stole, try to borrow my flo
    i aint sign off on it, you might spit sick but i ?
    i solomly swear, rap circles round this l 7 square
    yea my name forever, cause when im gone ill still be breathing
    through the ink, so ill inform yall when ever i plan on leaven
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited January 2011
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    There is a mandatory 16 lines rules. You need 2 more lines. You can edit your verse before Disciplined InSight posts his.
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  • Aquaf!nafloe
    Aquaf!nafloe Confirm Email Posts: 5,362 ✭✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    aww sheet insight! u betta geeet jiggy weet it!!!!
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  • FOREVER92
    FOREVER92 Members Posts: 455
    edited January 2011
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    raw-material_ahh wrote: »
    There is a mandatory 16 lines rules. You need 2 more lines. You can edit your verse before Disciplined InSight posts his.

    yea my bad i miss counted the bars, but i finished it up
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  • chriskyte410717
    chriskyte410717 Members Posts: 383 ✭
    edited January 2011
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    lol..........
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  • Disciplined InSight
    Disciplined InSight Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    This is gonna be easier than I thought...

    Seriously..


    You’re a weakling leaking from slashes touched, deep gashes, cuts.
    Living up to ya name through dirt naps…FOREVER in a casket tucked.
    No boldness, your script’s timid. Nine times outta ten you’re offended.
    You claim realrecognizereal…then from my view your ? ’s pretended.
    The MC’ing you exhibit? Disgusting, this loser’s a dead imposter.
    Face it, you can’t bus boy…
    …and I’m not talking about your job at Red Lobster.
    It’s done. I’m Lebron catching Heat from this win his flow’s boring.
    The decision’s easy…too bad you’re in the city catching the short end.
    Each punch is made for torment, hits you like a thousand hornets.
    FOREVER’s the 1st hit…not the one with Drake, Ye, Wayne and Em on it.
    Chicks you save I’ll ? ‘em. You keep capes and don’t evict ‘em.
    If you think I’m a Loughner…consider yourself a Tuscon shooting victim.
    Your verse is soft. The pressure’s on, get popped like a blackhead.
    He slippin’ plus X’d out on the pipe...no wonder your favorite’s a ? head.
    This doesn’t suit you. Come harder when you facing rage.
    You better off satisfying ONE FAN…check his ReverbNation page.

    Any explanations PM me..
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  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    Disciplined InSight takes it, not even close in my opinion.

    His lines cut harder, his verse was much more technical with solid lyricism.
    The MC’ing you exhibit? Disgusting, this loser’s a dead imposter.
    Face it, you can’t bus boy…
    …and I’m not talking about your job at Red Lobster.

    This line was sick.

    Forever92 was more elementary with his rhymes and didn't really utilize any lyrical techniques other than the standard rhyming scheme.
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited January 2011
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    In the prediction/? talking thread, this was my prediction, "I respect FOREVER92 for giving this text battling ? a shot but I have a feeling Disciplined InSight knows what's up and he may come away with the win." and I do respect FOREVER92 for giving it a shot. I really liked this line "i discipline in-sight like yo mama beat you at the sto" That was sick. There was a few easy lines though, a little bit more than Disciplined InSight's verse had. He had a few personals, good closer, good intro, sick rhymes. I gotta give it to him. Would've been a little closer and harder to judge had FOREVER92 took his time I think. Vote - Disciplined InSight
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  • sniperk
    sniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    Forever92 had some hot lines.
    I liked: "i solomly swear, rap circles round this l 7 square"
    However, he was all over the place with his subject matter and not really throwing anything more than glancing blows.

    Disciplined Insight came right out the gate with that Kool G. Rap type flow or some murking isht:

    "You’re a weakling leaking from slashes touched, deep gashes, cuts.
    Living up to ya name through dirt naps…FOREVER in a casket tucked."

    Harder hitting punchlines, more complex rhymes, I don't know either of these cats but it seems like Disciplined Insight has been in a few battles before and his experience shows.

    Respect to both verses but I'm going to have give my vote to Disciplined Insight.
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited January 2011
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    Disciplined InSight wins 3-0 KO.
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