Love's Rejection- By Tupacfan
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Love's Rejection
One day I wrote and exposed my heart,
but nothing is what I got.
I wrote and stood,
Naked,
Awaiting
your response....
Nothing...
Revealing my quirks....Baring
my soul for I know I'm not perfect.
I wrote exposing my desires, my insecurities,
my dreams, my reasons for being
but still nothing.
And so... NOW
I write exposing... For all to see
how carefully I'm stuck picking up the
? pieces... AGAIN
Reflecting
all the while....
cut by shards of hoplessness left by
left by let downs and rejections
Now
I write and expose my fragility
my vulnerability
things that leave me wondering
If they detract me from
who I am
I tried...I did
I followed what i thought
were the rules to... falling in love
and to what degree
stepping out of the
proverbial
"box"
my safety net
for I onced read
it is better to have loved to than
not
And yet I stand at odds
with this question
for the hurt has lessened
and there is no lessons
to learn
when you forgo love.. Right?
how life easy would be without
loving
or would it?
Am I deceiving myself
into believing
that life without love would
be easy
really... why would the creator
Allow his children to love
then have us to endure
the loss of love
I don't feel any stronger
I don't feel empowered
in fact to love again
has left me discomposed
ashamed
that I would
reveal myself
my true identity with such boldness
to expose yourself in such a manner
Is a true test
of faith....isn't?
believing that your partner
will embrace you
with tenderness and heartfelt desires
yearning to become one
on an emotional and spiritual level
moving into a higher conciousness
fatal and ominous
to any other..lover
that's what was expected
instead rejected
dam! What was I thinking?
Drinking in my emotions
At the moment
?
my body septic
due to your loves injections...
infections
letting loose
allowing all inhabititions
To cease to exist
allowing love to caress my inside
Stroking me evoking
these uncontrolled emotions
leaving me on this incrediable high
Now
? ... like a prositute
for allowing to having your way
emotionally, mentally,
spiritually and even physically
Then slapped in the faced
and left defenseless...
?
withdrawal in this state
is inenvitable
irrevocable
is my state of being
now I'm just a junkie
Fending
for next loves injection.
why? Because you expose me to this loves infection ..
One day I wrote and exposed my heart,
but nothing is what I got.
I wrote and stood,
Naked,
Awaiting
your response....
Nothing...
Revealing my quirks....Baring
my soul for I know I'm not perfect.
I wrote exposing my desires, my insecurities,
my dreams, my reasons for being
but still nothing.
And so... NOW
I write exposing... For all to see
how carefully I'm stuck picking up the
? pieces... AGAIN
Reflecting
all the while....
cut by shards of hoplessness left by
left by let downs and rejections
Now
I write and expose my fragility
my vulnerability
things that leave me wondering
If they detract me from
who I am
I tried...I did
I followed what i thought
were the rules to... falling in love
and to what degree
stepping out of the
proverbial
"box"
my safety net
for I onced read
it is better to have loved to than
not
And yet I stand at odds
with this question
for the hurt has lessened
and there is no lessons
to learn
when you forgo love.. Right?
how life easy would be without
loving
or would it?
Am I deceiving myself
into believing
that life without love would
be easy
really... why would the creator
Allow his children to love
then have us to endure
the loss of love
I don't feel any stronger
I don't feel empowered
in fact to love again
has left me discomposed
ashamed
that I would
reveal myself
my true identity with such boldness
to expose yourself in such a manner
Is a true test
of faith....isn't?
believing that your partner
will embrace you
with tenderness and heartfelt desires
yearning to become one
on an emotional and spiritual level
moving into a higher conciousness
fatal and ominous
to any other..lover
that's what was expected
instead rejected
dam! What was I thinking?
Drinking in my emotions
At the moment
?
my body septic
due to your loves injections...
infections
letting loose
allowing all inhabititions
To cease to exist
allowing love to caress my inside
Stroking me evoking
these uncontrolled emotions
leaving me on this incrediable high
Now
? ... like a prositute
for allowing to having your way
emotionally, mentally,
spiritually and even physically
Then slapped in the faced
and left defenseless...
?
withdrawal in this state
is inenvitable
irrevocable
is my state of being
now I'm just a junkie
Fending
for next loves injection.
why? Because you expose me to this loves infection ..
Comments
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Beautiful poem . You must have gone through some real tough ? to write that poem but it was beautiful nevertheless
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i absolutely love this joint. -
thanks for reading fellas,
And for commenting and giving props.
Its much appreciated!
LOL at the giff Kidd posted..
Peace! -
Good stuff, this poem reminds me of somebody that I know.
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wow amazing wordplay
great read-it sucks that ? makes you write so good right? if youre happy, you don't write anything at all
take it for what it is
his bs equals his loss and a treat for us to read
life goes on!
btw loved these linesDrinking in my emotions
At the moment
?
my body septic
due to your loves injections...
infections
letting loose
allowing all inhabititions
To cease to exist
allowing love to caress my inside
Stroking me evoking
these uncontrolled emotions
leaving me on this incrediable high
Now
? ... like a prositute
for allowing to having your way
emotionally, mentally,
spiritually and even physically
Then slapped in the faced
and left defenseless...
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Good stuff, this poem reminds me of somebody that I know.
Thanks for the read!
I hope it can be some inspiration to draw a vivid image LOL. -
wow amazing wordplay
great read-it sucks that ? makes you write so good right? if youre happy, you don't write anything at all
take it for what it is
his bs equals his loss and a treat for us to read
life goes on!
btw loved these lines
Thanks for reading bruh!
yup yup, I hate that.. That bs makes us write so good, that because emotions are being spit and it makes the poem stronger as well.. But your right, when I'm happy I ain't got ? to write about but the birds chirping LOL. I guess when we go on our hiatus, we know we happy LOL.. And when we write a post something, were likely going thru some thangs hahahahaha... Ahhhhh, its funny!
I'm glad you enjoyed reading this though.
Peace! -
Thanks for the read!
I hope it can be some inspiration to draw a vivid image LOL.
hmm, Actually have a drawing similar to this poem, check it out:
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hmm, Actually have a drawing similar to this poem, check it out:
wow! Now this is image that fits perfect for this poem!
I really appreciate u sharing this piece
Thank u! -
Nice work, very touching and deep..
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Nice work, very touching and deep..
Thanks for stopping by to read..and posting a comment..
Preciate that... -
Well...I'm officially depressed.
*takes up drinking* -
Well...I'm officially depressed.
*takes up drinking*
LOL.. Sawwy.. Me didn't mean to cause any suppressed feelings
Aye, thanks for reading tho.. I enjoy reading your jawns too, so keep em coming
Peace Darxwell.. -
*sighs* this poem is like the story of my life lol...dealing with love or lack thereoff makes you just hate the definition for bringing such lies sometimes...but yet we as people chase it like a drug and refuse to seek rehab because of the joy it brings when its there...bottom line this piece truly hit me and took me to a place of love's rejection lol
bottom line excellent work as always...keep dropping the words that express a shattered soul called poetry my fellow poetress
peace -
REAL_POETICAL wrote: »*sighs* this poem is like the story of my life lol...dealing with love or lack thereoff makes you just hate the definition for bringing such lies sometimes...but yet we as people chase it like a drug and refuse to seek rehab because of the joy it brings when its there...bottom line this piece truly hit me and took me to a place of love's rejection lol
bottom line excellent work as always...keep dropping the words that express a shattered soul called poetry my fellow poetress
peace
Man, I'm glad you felt this piece..it's one of them jawns when you just feel bottom out and everything around you seems to fail, rejections i hate..it stems from my childhood so to be still rejected today, it does hurt.. but im' good tho
lol at shattered soul... dam, that's kinda messed up because it likely true.. shattered soul..
thank for reading though, preciate that..
Peace.. -
Man, I'm glad you felt this piece..it's one of them jawns when you just feel bottom out and everything around you seems to fail, rejections i hate..it stems from my childhood so to be still rejected today, it does hurt.. but im' good tho
lol at shattered soul... dam, that's kinda messed up because it likely true.. shattered soul..
thank for reading though, preciate that..
Peace..
you and me both...rejection is like my biggest pet peeve and fear...its like acceptance becomes an addiction that you keep trying to relive...only to see that you set the bar high for something that should be very simple...don't get me started with my childhood lol...thats another chapter in real p's book that will end up being long to express
overall its all apart of life's devious but insightful ways to show you the brighter side of the fence...when true love comes along to turn rejection to acceptance
lol i'm sorry i went into deep on the subject manner -
REAL_POETICAL wrote: »you and me both...rejection is like my biggest pet peeve and fear...its like acceptance becomes an addiction that you keep trying to relive...only to see that you set the bar high for something that should be very simple...don't get me started with my childhood lol...thats another chapter in real p's book that will end up being long to express
overall its all apart of life's devious but insightful ways to show you the brighter side of the fence...when true love comes along to turn rejection to acceptance
lol i'm sorry i went into deep on the subject manner
hahaha.. I feel you on childhood, I'm with you, that's a long story.. sad one too smh. makes me wanna shed a tear as I quickly reflect back on that. I'mma let the mind race fast forward..
That's exactaly what I been doing real p, reinforcing the positives and be more receptive to acceptance..
na, it's okay.. these discussions are needed to aleviate some of the pain.. ya knoow...its all good lol.. -
hahaha.. I feel you on childhood, I'm with you, that's a long story.. sad one too smh. makes me wanna shed a tear as I quickly reflect back on that. I'mma let the mind race fast forward..
That's exactaly what I been doing real p, reinforcing the positives and be more receptive to acceptance..
na, it's okay.. these discussions are needed to aleviate some of the pain.. ya knoow...its all good lol..
most def...thats the blessing of wte...its not just a place of "check out my pieces"...its ventilation, a modern day coffee house *without the lames*, a gathering of misunderstood and lost prophecies, and most of all...a place i call home lol
*speaking of which, i feel inspiration coming on* lol -
REAL_POETICAL wrote: »most def...thats the blessing of wte...its not just a place of "check out my pieces"...its ventilation, a modern day coffee house *without the lames*, a gathering of misunderstood and lost prophecies, and most of all...a place i call home lol
*speaking of which, i feel inspiration coming on* lol
LOL, man thats why I keep coming back here.. Its like my 2nd home.. You and vsop my folks on this jawn..can't sleep on both of ya'll.. If its not me coming with the pieces, its either u or vsop.. Somebody is always taking care of the house LOL.. Folks come and go from here, but us 3, we hold it down.. That's whassup..
Lmao at inspiration coming on, I feel that..let the words flow and imma check for that right now.. -
Deeeeeeep....you're versatile...you battle rap and do deep poetry..good post
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deaththreats wrote: »Deeeeeeep....you're versatile...you battle rap and do deep poetry..good post
Thanks for dropping in.. Right now I prefer battles over poetry.. Crazy but true.. Me and poetry is at odds. I won't be surprise if this is my last piece of poetry work.. but again, thats what I do best. Will see..
Again thanks'
peace!