The Teacher's Accomplishment

REAL_POETICAL
REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
edited February 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
Literature and thought provoking skills
the more I dig...I find a better me within insanity
room full of balled up paper and irritated behavior
like a sentenced 100 year period
here I lie to find out things that weren't there before
words never sounded so smooth and paper loving the groove
the smoothness of a simple paraphrase
adjusting the height of the paper remains uncanny
even the keys on the board are like "How Yaaaa Doin"
Wendy Williams gossiping fingers flicking fast
finger ? the keyboard
caressing the middle alignment and loving the indent
pressing spacebar is indeed heaven sent
essays and paperwork
ideas and brainstorms
umbrella i hold up and come down the wordplay
wow this is indeed a new beginning for my skill of poetry
my knowledge of reading and English beyond reach
thank you for the skill you showed me when I thought it died
thank you for the beyond lengths that only time could hide
thank you for bring the best out of me when I thought I can do less
thank you teacher of English
for you I breathe again :cool:

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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited February 2011
    I feel it real p,

    My teacher has inspired me write poetry, english teacher that is. It was an assignment too, had us write hiaku's and eventually I wrote summin that gravitated her and she encourage and supported me to write poems...

    This joint just took me back to that time.. thanks for that..

    peace real p.
  • kzzl
    kzzl Members Posts: 7,548 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
    Literature and thought provoking skills
    the more I dig...I find a better me within insanity
    room full of balled up paper and irritated behavior
    like a sentenced 100 year period
    here I lie to find out things that weren't there before
    words never sounded so smooth and paper loving the groove
    the smoothness of a simple paraphrase
    adjusting the height of the paper remains uncanny
    even the keys on the board are like "How Yaaaa Doin"
    Wendy Williams gossiping fingers flicking fast
    finger ? the keyboard
    caressing the middle alignment and loving the indent
    pressing spacebar is indeed heaven sent
    essays and paperwork
    ideas and brainstorms
    umbrella i hold up and come down the wordplay
    wow this is indeed a new beginning for my skill of poetry
    my knowledge of reading and English beyond reach
    thank you for the skill you showed me when I thought it died
    thank you for the beyond lengths that only time could hide
    thank you for bring the best out of me when I thought I can do less
    thank you teacher of English
    for you I breathe again :cool:

    It's cool to me. I don't think we the ones that need to see this, though. How's bout finding that teacher and sending them this? Maybe even some of your other works, show your progression from perfecting your craft. I'm sure the same inspiration given to you would fuel them as well. Equally Appreciated.
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited February 2011
    thanks for the props yall...it feels good knowing that i finally found a class/teacher that influence me enough to take my craft seriously...thanks again for peeping this piece